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Nigel Astell

Tue 20th Sep 2022 11:50

Soul Searching
Ever watching at the night sky
Star signs shooting wishes
Only one for me
Moonlight message to see❤





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Nigel Astell

Tue 20th Sep 2022 11:38

Thanks everyone for your likes
Frederick
Stephen G
Holden
John B
Rose
and
Kevin.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 20th Sep 2022 10:29

Another good one from you, Ray, about this whole business.

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Laura Taylor

Tue 20th Sep 2022 09:56

Yes, I like this. And I could hazard several guesses, re what Stephen says about the motivations.

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Red Brick Keshner

Tue 20th Sep 2022 09:36

Thanks Stephen, just glad that uniqueness is still somewhat in vogue these days. As for brilliance, for that observation I am truly grateful to you.

Thanks John (Botterill) Should sparking a thought be a way to keep us moving on and together then it would seem a good habit to foster. Oh, and I love how you interpolated with the food shortage and consumption scenario! This is superb, thanks!

/freds

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John Botterill

Tue 20th Sep 2022 09:25

Thanks Stephen, for your kind comments. It means a lot to me. 😀
Thanks for the likes Frederick and Nigel.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 20th Sep 2022 09:00

A beautiful, wholly original poem, John.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 20th Sep 2022 08:46

My thanks to Jennifer, John B, John C, Graham and MC for their comments.

Yes, John, the precise circumstances may be different, but this brings to mind Kaytn and so many other atrocities committed by members of our species. MC - you are right to say that they seek to escape retribution; we can only hope that those responsible will be brought to justice.

Graham - my heart goes out to the family of this poor man. It is difficult for us to comprehend the degree of suffering of the victims of this war.

And thanks to Frederick, Rose, K Lynn and Holden for liking this poem.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 20th Sep 2022 00:34

Bringing into sharp relief the dark side of human behaviour that
acts without care for suffering and seeks to escape retribution.
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John Botterill

Mon 19th Sep 2022 21:56

Thanks Stephen. You're very kind. And thanks for the like, K. Lynn and Rose . 😀

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 19th Sep 2022 21:30

Thank you Greg, Flynt, Julie, Jennifer & Stephen for your lovely comments! 🌈
And K. Lynn, Adam & Tom for the Likes 🌷

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 19th Sep 2022 21:10

Only egotistical men of power will try & justify what is happening, Julie. Probably only to themselves. A good write

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 19th Sep 2022 21:07

A lovely piece, John

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 19th Sep 2022 21:03

Paints a lovely, cosy picture 🌈

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Steve White

Mon 19th Sep 2022 19:41

Cheers Stephen!

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Greg Freeman

Mon 19th Sep 2022 19:40

Thanks for your kind comments, Graham, Flyntland, Jennifer, John, and Steve. 'Martial yet mournful' were the first words that came to me, Graham, and made me reach for a notebook. I know what you mean about the 'precision' of the ceremony, Steve. Conveys power rather than grief or feeling, perhaps. Thanks also for the Likes, Stephen, Julie and K. Lynn

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julie callaghan

Mon 19th Sep 2022 19:10

Thanks for the likes.

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julie callaghan

Mon 19th Sep 2022 19:10

Thanks for the likes

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julie callaghan

Mon 19th Sep 2022 19:10

Thanks for the likes.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 19th Sep 2022 19:05

Stephen, all of your Ukraine work has been exceptional as already noted but this piece struck an even chillier chord today. Our next door neighbour (over the bottom fence, not physically next door) has a young woman and her daughter staying with them from Ukraine, whom we have met. My daughter who lives opposite has helped teach both some English as she is a teacher. We found out yesterday that her father sadly committed suicide last week because of what was going on in his town, Izyum.

Keep writing these valuable works Stephen.

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John Coopey

Mon 19th Sep 2022 18:19

One more voice screams underground
Beneath another burial mound.
Disgustingly redolent of Katyn.

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John Botterill

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:57

Superbly expressed, ineffable sad as it is!

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:52

You tap into all the contradictions and confused motivations of mourning, Steve. Really well written!

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jennifer Malden

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:44

Tragedy so well expressed.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:44

I would echo what the others said - very moving and a delightful read, Stephen.

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jennifer Malden

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:40

Really beautiful language, so delicate and expressive. Lovely.

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John Botterill

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:34

I loved it all but particularly
and smile in earnest
at a deep-dipped sun.
Super poem, Holden!

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:32

Thanks for all the comments, Julie, Flyntland, Greg and Stephen. Yes, it is a horrifying situation and, sadly, there is probably more of the same to come. As we have said many times, there are no real winners in war - everyone comes out of it damaged. Even the perpetrators of this (who of course should be brought to justice) as diminished as human beings.

Greg- It was a pleasure to be involved and Phil was also glad to meet you and the others.

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John Botterill

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:27

Super poem, Jennifer. Touching, light of touch and humorous. Loved it 😀

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:23

A fine, close-knit poem, Greg. 'Precision' is the word, I think. This morning, you could feel a well-oiled machine turning. For some reason, the whole procession made me feel rather miserable - perhaps the sight of the hyper-drilled establishment rumbling into action was a bit too much. It rather got in the way of the funeral, I felt. Nevertheless, an impressive spectacle which was covered in full on TV in Belgium (all channels were cleared) and in many other countries, I'm sure.
But things will be different, as you say.

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John Botterill

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:19

Lovely poem, Greg. We'll said!

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John Botterill

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:15

Thanks Greg, Jennifer and Julie. It means a lot to me.

It really did rain heavily here at 11. First time in months 😀

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jennifer Malden

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:15

Really biting! Something tells me you're a Republican?

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jennifer Malden

Mon 19th Sep 2022 17:12

Sad at the beginning, but with some hope at the end. An epoch really has ended.

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jennifer Malden

Mon 19th Sep 2022 16:57

Loved ' I hope you 'll love what's left of me'. Beautiful poem, and growing old together so well expressed.

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jennifer Malden

Mon 19th Sep 2022 16:55

Really touching. Loved 'tghe land still ached', and the tears 'grateful not distressing.' So well said.

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jennifer Malden

Mon 19th Sep 2022 16:50

So well put in few words, and agree absolutely with Flyntland. A great piece of writing.

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Flyntland

Mon 19th Sep 2022 16:47

You have conveyed the solemnity of the occasion and the 'New Dawn' in so few words - masterful

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jennifer Malden

Mon 19th Sep 2022 16:46


Thanks Frederick, Stephen A, and Holden for the likes, and Graham for the comment. Graham, perhaps you think most of them went down below?! Many of the ancient ones yes, but I think there have been some recent ones who deserve better. She certainly did.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 19th Sep 2022 16:39

It is my son's birthday today and we drove a short distance to deliver cards/presents etc. You could have heard a pin drop in his Victorian Terraced street. Absolute silence!

Your piece conveys the pomp and colour of this once in our lifetime event well Greg. The line martial yet mournful is very well crafted indeed and says everything in very little words.

The last three lines portentous. I wonder what's in store.
A thoughtful piece

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julie callaghan

Mon 19th Sep 2022 14:50

Another beautiful write. 🙏

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Flyntland

Mon 19th Sep 2022 14:31

I really like " two old souls in twilight's eye" - thats the club that I belong to - it's well worth waiting for. Thank you for this one.

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Steve White

Mon 19th Sep 2022 14:18

Thanks John!

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Greg Freeman

Mon 19th Sep 2022 13:08

A very touching and loving poem, Stephen.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 19th Sep 2022 13:07

I admire this poem very much, John.

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Flyntland

Mon 19th Sep 2022 11:41

My thanks to Frederick - Holden and Massoud for taking the time to read and like.
Stephen I agree it is not a pretty poem and thank you for your comment, you are a great confidence giver when I have chilling doubts.

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John Coopey

Mon 19th Sep 2022 10:39

Brave submission, Steve.
I'm not an avid monarchist nor an avid republican. I am conflicted between the theory and the practice. In theory, I prefer by far an elected leader rather than one based on inheritance. In practice, I look at who this would have given us over the last 50 years, eg Boris and Margaret Thatcher.
Paradoxically, a monarch would have been (and still is) far less divisive for the nation than any elected partisan leader.
On balance therefore I find myself a reluctant monarchist.

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John Coopey

Mon 19th Sep 2022 10:31

Enjoyed this, Steve. Pleasingly without gushing sentimentality.

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John Coopey

Mon 19th Sep 2022 09:55

Thanks for the Likes, Stephen, Frederick, Flyntland and Holden.

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Steve White

Mon 19th Sep 2022 09:53

Cheers Graham!

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