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The beginning

When the sun’s shining,

The water is a promising, azure blue

But when the darkness falls,

The dark waters gobble up everything, leaving no clue.

 

The garden smells heavenly,

The bright flowers, the delicate butterflies

But when the light’s gone

Thorns prick, bugs bite and beauty is a pack of lies.

 

After a long wait, the light is here,

But the knowledge of all being a cycle

Breeds distrust and fear.

 

After a long wait, to look forward to the day,

Let this hope forever stay.

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tryingthings

Sat 21st Oct 2023 08:38

Thank you all for your kind words!

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Manish Singh Rajput

Sun 15th Oct 2023 17:57

Wow! Every line is so rich and fragile, this is a beautiful poem.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 15th Oct 2023 17:25

Stimulating take on "beauty is in the eye of the beholder" in
the life we live.

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