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Thu 3rd Nov 2011 19:33

I'm glad you found me? I'm going to read your poems xx

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Nick Coleman

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 19:25

there was a young lady from Senegal
who thought she would like to have a ball
so she sent out a nude picture
to see who would hitch her
but thanks to Julian she got now't at all

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Peter Asher

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 19:20

Thanks... it was just a bit of fun.

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winston plowes

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 19:03

great stuff Peter. Actually I like spam (As in the "meat"). Win

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Nick Coleman

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 18:08

surprising poem - can't say why I like it so much - elderflower lemonade memories

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Peter Asher

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 18:02

There was a young lad from Senegal
who dream't up a way to spam em all
he would request your account
and a certain amount
but never banked on Michael or Paul.

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Thu 3rd Nov 2011 17:46

... commas, full stops... what's that then?
thanks Coopey (geoff)

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Rachel Bond

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 17:42

like :)

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Rachel Bond

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 17:38

thanks for your comment on 'dont paint..' transceptional! xx

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steve mellor

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 17:17

Stella
Somehow, the idea of drinking elderflower lemonade from a sugar-rimmed tumbler sounds particularly refreshing

p.s. the first 'd' in 'lemondade'?
lovely picture

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Greg Freeman

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 17:04

That is a haunting sound. You too, of course, Ann! Beautiful soundtrack.

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Gareth Writer-Davies

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 17:04

Unveiling of new statue of Sappho this Saturday at noon. Will be reading a poem along with two colleagues inspired by Sappho.
If you are near Letchworth, come along!

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steve mellor

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 16:33

Hi Ann
I meant to say in my earlier 'thank-you' that I enjoyed listening to the great north diver. I'm afraid I didn't catch first time around.
Is that you reading?
I don't have the facility to 'audio' my stuff, and I'm not sure what I'd sound like. I used to tape-record 'letter' donkeys years ago, and it never sounded like me

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steve mellor

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 16:27

Good afternoon (again)
your comments, as ever, are much appreciated. the ramblings of one returning to childhood are just that, but it makes one realise the things that one took for granted perhaps

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 16:26

Great to see poets and poetry getting rewarded.
Well done, that man!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 16:23

Great fun - especially for those of us who have
often wondered! This is well done.

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steve mellor

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 16:12

Hi Ann
Pleased you enjoyed 'Childhood'.
I've found that just about anything and sneezing is painful. I have (on the odd occasion) sneezed whilst breaking ****, and that is unbelievably painful. You don't know which end to concentrate on :-))

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<Deleted User> (6315)

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 15:14

Made me chuckle at lot!... :)

Oh and John?..they ALWAYS have a sister!!!

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Ann Foxglove

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 15:12

I know this has been on before but I couldn't get the audio to work before so I gave it another go. Call it a duet!

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steve mellor

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 14:52

Hi M.C.
Absolutely no apologies necessary. The end result was still the self-interest of the Union man.
Strawbs? - You won't get me I'm part of the Union'

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steve mellor

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 13:20

Great poem
Come on John - you're already hitched aren't you? Think of the needy (me)

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 13:06

Hello, Winston! Thank you very much for commenting on "I've learned" . I've made some changes there and would like to know your opinion. When you have time, please read the changes.
With warmest wishes,
Larisa

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 13:03

Hello, John! Thank you very much for commenting on "I've learned" . I've made some changes there and certainly would like to know your opinion. When you have time, please read the changes.
With warmest wishes,
Larisa

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 12:57

Thank you my dear friends for your comments. I've made some changes. So, please, do me a favor and tell me what you think about them.

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 12:38

Does she have a sister?

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Cathy Bryant

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 11:19

Hi Emma - lovely to meet you in Wolverhampton. I love your poems! I'm Maturing as a Poet made me laugh like a nutter.

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Marcia Calame

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 11:17

Yasus Afari and Marcia Calame will be performing a night of FIREWORDS. Alongside PING WING, who will make you laugh all the way.

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Marcia Calame

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 10:52

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Nick Coleman

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 10:43

congrats Chris

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Nick Coleman

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 10:35

Oh to be in love again!!!!

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Greg Freeman

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 10:30

Many congratulations, Chris

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Philipos

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 10:16

'Undermined', I thought you were referring to the goo ants converted their prey into. Gourmand slobbering jelly eh? OK we'll go with that.

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 10:15

Can't use the audio yet, MC, as I'm at work. But the lyrics work on their own.

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 09:52

Hello Greg. Yes, you're right "Now, then" is a Yorkshire greeting similar to "Sithee!" and you're right it is more a tone of challenge than of caution. I could imagine two stags greeting each other that way!
When I first came to Barnsley as a 22 year old I nearly fainted when my landlady called me "cock". A boy can get the wrong signal!

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 09:44

Sorry Larisa - spelled your name wrong!

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John Coopey

Thu 3rd Nov 2011 09:43

Hello Larissa
I agree with Win. The stanza about love is a cracker! The first three lines are wonderful.
Have you tried non-rhyming poetry? It must be awfully difficult to write in a foreign language within the constraints of rhythm and rhyme.
I always check your work because I recognise the unique challenge it poses you.

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winston plowes

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 22:52

I’ve learnt to understand that….
Love can't be found where it doesn't exist,
Love can't be hidden where it is.
And... always has it’s own sound .

I have been pondering this part for some time... (And listening for the sound). Maybe I should be feeling its sound? Loved this section Larisa,

Win x

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Greg Freeman

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 22:26

Hi John. I always thought "now then" was just a kind of Yorkshire greeting, like "hello", but with more of a challenge to it.

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 22:25

You are a woman of great insight Laura. ;o)

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 22:24

Thank you, dear Stella!

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Wed 2nd Nov 2011 22:21



I’ve learnt to be patient,
Though not everyone knows it.
It’s better to be absent
Than to throw a stone into a shit.


Larisa I think this so far is my favourite poem written by you..most enjoyable :-) x

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Rachel Bond

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 22:12

guitarnverse 4 doggers wipeeee

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Jeff Dawson

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 22:06

Nice one Rach, yes the general Bolton mindset is not to be arsed, keeps us chilled, most of the time! Wish Bolton could win a few more cups!

yes I can still be arsed and will be organisin a Guitar n verse 4 Doggers so will give you and Laura a shout! Great poem Jeffrey Vernon Dawson X

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<Deleted User> (7212)

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 21:45

...gave me shivers - marvellous !!

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<Deleted User> (7212)

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 21:41

Norick Abe was a motorcycle GP racer of some distinction...

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 21:27

I have used verse in some letters to my local
MP when it seemed appropriate. There are times
when a few pithy lines can be far better than
anger indulged in at length!

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Philipos

Wed 2nd Nov 2011 20:22

Hello John, 'Undermined' guess the insect world is pretty gory eh? A sort of mass Hoovering device for recycling. Can't help being mesmerised by it though - often think of comparisons with human heirarchies.

Thanks for commenting.

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