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John Togher

Tue 9th Apr 2013 16:13

Compere for the night is Paul Blackburn.

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tony sheridan

Tue 9th Apr 2013 15:50

Well said Laura!! Take care, Tony.

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 9th Apr 2013 15:41

tell that to miners and other production workers who had their lives dedstroyed by her policies and stubborn refusal to recognise the 'working' class. Very difficult to look after your family or others when your livelihood is smasshed in front of you. Unfortunately too many people took her literally in 'looking after themselves' at the exclusion of others - I'm happy that you didn't MC - but the majority DID and that's why we have the society we have today.
Ian

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 9th Apr 2013 15:28

Maggie Thatcher was vilified for her comment about "society" but how much attention was given when she went on to stress the value and importance of the individual taking control of and responsibility for his or her life. This was mendaciously commented on as "selfishness". Bilge! It is common sense that if you look after yourself and your future, you are in a position to look after OTHERS...a point so conveniently missed by critics. I started work at 16 and now I can help family (and others) because of early sacrifice and foresight. In bygone days, this was expected as a part of wider "family responsibility", something that many in modern times, by their own chosen life-styles, have moved away from, encouraged by the something for nothing culture that has emerged in my adult lifetime.

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Neil Fawcett

Tue 9th Apr 2013 15:04

Says it all Laura:(

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 9th Apr 2013 15:02

Poignant & true, Laura. This media salivation is sickening when the toll of destruction and misery she oversaw is taken in the balance.
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 9th Apr 2013 14:58

Aye :-)

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Laura Taylor

Tue 9th Apr 2013 14:22

Yup

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Laura Taylor

Tue 9th Apr 2013 14:19

Aye, she was very good at that

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leonidas

Tue 9th Apr 2013 10:14

At last the Iron Lady's days are over
Shed no tears at her departure
For all the good she did, she left as bad
Don't be mournful, don't be sad
Speak no evil of the dead,
Just remember what she said.
There's no such thing as a community,
The selfish gene seeks its immunity
From the problems of society;
We live in fear of Thatcher's legacy!

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Tue 9th Apr 2013 09:41

She did do well, for herself and all of her millionaire friends. I wouldn't be surprised if she's already closed down half of the furnaces in hell and that she'll privatize the others. Still her legacy lives on with Cameron and his cronies still doing her work by trampling on the less fortunate in our society.

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Isobel

Mon 8th Apr 2013 23:15

Thanks for commenting on my coat poem Yvonne and apologies for the delay in my thanking you - things are a little manic over school holidays and I forget to do things.

Your comment was bang on - and my pockets are full of loose buttons :) x

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John Coopey

Mon 8th Apr 2013 22:43

Excellent tribute, 'Arry.
I hope it got you some beer and grub.

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Katy Megan Hughes

Mon 8th Apr 2013 20:09

Hi Brian thank you for your comment on Irish Sea - glad you liked, Katy

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 8th Apr 2013 19:18

thanks again Yvonne - glad you liked 'jigsaw' - I would have put it in the competition but I'd already submitted 'in the frame' so felt it wasn't right to send in a second
Ian

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pauline sewards

Mon 8th Apr 2013 09:07

Really enjoyed these poems, love the use of full and slant rhyme and the word play and diverse imagery. Do you perform these poems?
I especially enjoyed Her Habitat as it turns dark with the minute description of the spider's habitat.
Thanks for posting, I will be reading them again
Pauline

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tony sheridan

Mon 8th Apr 2013 09:07

Thanks alex. Take care, Tony.

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pauline sewards

Mon 8th Apr 2013 09:01

Thanks very much Charlie. I have exactly the same thing re days of the week - although my Tuesday is maroon ...
Lovely to have your comment x

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Sun 7th Apr 2013 23:11

I is 'ungry for more H!.x

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BRIAN EVANS

Sun 7th Apr 2013 22:42

you are very welcome Pete ye i did enjoy B

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Pete Slater

Sun 7th Apr 2013 21:47

Evening B.
Glad you enjoyed reading WONDERING.More importantly .... thanks for your kind comment, I REALLY appreciate it mate.
Thanks again
Pete The Bus Driving Poet.

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BRIAN EVANS

Sun 7th Apr 2013 20:53

very well composed, and beautifully written congrats. Peter B

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Paul Maxey

Sun 7th Apr 2013 20:50

Ah John, "Don't look twice its Celulite" is
a wonderful take on a song by his Bobness
the Zimmer frame man !
regards Paul

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BRIAN EVANS

Sun 7th Apr 2013 20:48

truly beautiful Katy a kiss B

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John Coopey

Sun 7th Apr 2013 20:16

Hello MC,
Glad you liked,"Don't Think Twice..."
I myself was rather pleased with it technically although I always make the mistake of posting stuff as soon as I've written it - then decide there were lots of bits I could have improved.

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Paul Maxey

Sun 7th Apr 2013 19:51

Hi Solar, thanks for your comment!x

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Sun 7th Apr 2013 16:53

well 'ard!x

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Sun 7th Apr 2013 16:51

loved the poem and format-excellent!x

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Sun 7th Apr 2013 16:41

really good poem.x

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 7th Apr 2013 16:40

From nursery rhymes on, kids love the rhythm and rhyme still found in poetry. As they grow older, they can be introduced to more relaxed forms that may exercise the memory. It follows that having been exposed to the variety, youngsters might feel able, indeed keen, to write their own stuff. Mr Heaney is right in his stated belief that the younger the better when it comes to learning (almost anything for that matter!). As for Lord Derby's yawning(!) - check Youtube for the variety of uploads of, and hits on, this venerable old music hall song. It should teach us something about staying around and being remembered/enjoyed. I agree with JC about getting stuff into schools and will be offering free volumes of my own collection of verse/lyrics to a local school for its use. They can only say no.

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Sun 7th Apr 2013 16:39

Marvellously 'pieced' together Winston
reminds me of 'Family values'by Maureen Duffy.x

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Sun 7th Apr 2013 16:35

haha!....still no dents in your armour Racheal!x

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Rachel Bond

Sun 7th Apr 2013 16:24

thank you soalr...they dont know whats good for em ;)

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Sun 7th Apr 2013 16:08

I also thought the deluge of comments would have appeared by now,
my opinion of this poem Racheal....

FANTAZMAGORICAL-and then some!x

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winston plowes

Sun 7th Apr 2013 14:18

Inspired by Cathy Bryant's poem Take -

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dorinda macdowell

Sun 7th Apr 2013 06:43

I shall look forward to hearing more tomorrow evening!

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Isobel

Sat 6th Apr 2013 23:42

To answer your question MC, I'd say it depends on how it's done. When you are taking the mick out of anyone there's always a fine line - for me at least.

I think I don't like this one because it seems so very personal - one woman being undressed and scorned. I suppose I find it hard cos that woman could be any number of friends of mine - very many of us carry a few extra pounds and how many people would survive that kind of close up scrutiny?

I know John won't mind me commenting negatively cos I think he's robust enough to take it - just as I am. As I said earlier, I like very much of John's work, which is why I often comment on it. In any case, I seem to be the lone voice in the wilderness - perhaps I'm the one with the faulty sense of humour :)



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tony sheridan

Sat 6th Apr 2013 23:31

We all " pass the buck! " Nice one. Take care, Tony.

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Steven Waling

Sat 6th Apr 2013 21:46

I like this, John. Some good images there.

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Pete Slater

Sat 6th Apr 2013 20:45

Hi Yvonne
Seems the challenge worked. Glad you like the result. I was pleased myself (is that too much ego?)Thanks for the positive comments, they give me the idea I must be doing something right.
Cheers.
Pete.

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John F Keane

Sat 6th Apr 2013 18:42

Yes I did. You can find out more here:

http://www.facebook.com/HeatonsArtsTrail?fref=ts

We are not being asked to leave the Gallery yet but it would be wise to think and plan ahead. If alternative venues are available, we should consider them. Also, collaborative activities with artists and sculptors are intrinsically enjoyable.

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David Subacchi

Sat 6th Apr 2013 18:16

You can find more of my poetry including some videos by searching on SUBACCHI+POET

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Maggie Waker

Sat 6th Apr 2013 17:27

I wonder,did John write this? Sounds very interesting both from the poetry point of view and the artists. Can you tell me how to find out more?
I dont think Kro bar is an accessible venue at present - it has lots of stairs, dont know about the Blue Cat, more likely to be accessible. There are lots of venues in the Heatons and the area would suit me fine, but will other people be able to get to that area easily? Are we being asked to leave the Art Gallery?
Maggie

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Yvonne Brunton

Sat 6th Apr 2013 17:20

we choose the risk - to take or shun
chances taken, lost or won
but has the horse with muscles strained
had risk assessment fully explained?
a racehorse lives to race and run
and not be put in a sesame bun.

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Yvonne Brunton

Sat 6th Apr 2013 12:01

Love the last 3 lines. A good read. Surprised you've not entered it in the comp.

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Yvonne Brunton

Sat 6th Apr 2013 11:56

Now you feel

The money burning

A hole in

Your future
Love this line it echos the desperation and cynicism of the whole mortgage cycle. Love the whole poem. You've definitely got a way with words and poetry.

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Sat 6th Apr 2013 10:37

Got it! The person working for the newspaper who gathers up all the letter 'O' and puts them under a steam iron - that's who is the 'O' presser - Oh shit, missed the point again, never mind, ta muchly, nick.

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Sat 6th Apr 2013 10:32

More handouts? - Bah, humbug! - but really it's very good, ta muchly, nick.

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Sat 6th Apr 2013 10:28

the pleasures of age are increasing 'in creasing' ta muchly, more please, nick.

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Sat 6th Apr 2013 10:20

TC hast thou resorted to my level? - Hurrah! ta Nick.

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