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The cost of fascination

When the falling corpse

Extinguishes the flame,

The Moth or the Candle,

Which is to blame?


 

And who is to blame

When both have been used,

When each trusting heart

Is mangled and bruised?


 

It cannot be helped.

Each Siren must sing.

The needle points North

And Hope must take wing.


 

Those made of iron

May skirt round the fact,

But you can't live and love

And keep balance intact.


 

When the falling corpse

Extinguishes the flame,

The moth and the candle,

Neither's to blame.

◄ Ancient Chinese Proverb

Hills in Lakes... but how many? ►

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 5th Jun 2014 16:26

Dave,
With this metaphor you could go in and out forever...It`s full of further possibilities.
(mind, you`ve used all the major ones)

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Isobel

Sun 1st Jun 2014 22:23

You shouldn't have posted this on the 31st Dave - it has a very short shelf life - much like the moth...

This is a sad one - reminds me of Madame Bovary for some reason. If this is an analogy for doomed romance it works very well. I think it can very easy to be dazzled by someone to the point that you stop looking elsewhere.

I like the subtlety of what you are saying. x

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