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A QUESTION OF FREEDOM !!!

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Breathless is the tamed lover

Who gazes out to sea

No more a chain  - no more a clicked finger

For now he is free

 

The doved island is his goal

As he tries to savour all

But freedom is a strange gift

It pines for company

It yearns for chains once more

 

The Rock of Ages towers high

The graved stone - the gnarled crevices

Poured with briar

Upon its top a bird triumphs

Chirping highly, its tiny feet

Stamping angrily

This is MY tower - get back you human fiend

 

Sorrow?  What is that?  he asks

What is pain?  I cannot say

What is judgement in a land of no conscience?

What is gain?  Why ask for more?

What is ??

 

And so he moves down the path of endless quests

Until he finds - that his quest, is in truth, just questions

Where will it end?

Where will it begin?

When will i see?

When will I truly be free   

 

 

◄ Mickey Finn(Awld Lancy Poem) Anonymoose

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Comments

<Deleted User> (9882)

Thu 5th Jun 2014 21:20

I didn't laugh at the Wildey's comments,honestly! you do believe me don't you Jean?....ahem.

new one on me as well,re the Freedom Tower.
One learn's something new every blogging day!x

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jean lucy thompson

Wed 4th Jun 2014 23:41

ta very much Stefan n pat yuk about the toilet paper not a good image haha thanx anyway tc

<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 4th Jun 2014 20:51

so whats wrong with Blackpool tower then jean? as long as you keep an eye out for seagull bombs-nothing! love your new mugshot! is it our imagination or are you getting younger instead of older-do you know something we don't?

'gnarled crevices'...that reminds us..we need some more toilet paper-haha!

seriously-very good poem.xx

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jean lucy thompson

Wed 4th Jun 2014 00:02

thanx very much solar was looking up a photo for this in google image; called up freedom tower and up came the freedom tower in new York was actually unaware it existed :(

<Deleted User> (9882)

Tue 3rd Jun 2014 14:09

my kind of poem Jean,and beyond any doubt,your best one to date.Brilliant!x

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