Thanks very much Nick.
David
Comment is about IMPATIENT SPRINGTIME (blog)
Original item by David Subacchi
Beautiful - just beautiful. I love the same lines Jonboy chose - they are so startlingly original.
Comment is about Horse (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
Amazing piece Marianne-lots of depth and delicious description;'If I could pierce that needle point of the moon fixed in your eye,or chocolate fold my hair,through your mane,moor wild,could I come iwth you,into the night?'
Stunning.
Comment is about Horse (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
<Deleted User> (10993)
Fri 22nd Mar 2013 18:05
Thanks for interesting comment on 'She'. I'm a girl and u probably be right, be stuck on my roundabout forever ! x
Comment is about Rachel Bond (poet profile)
Original item by Rachel Bond
Kenneth Eaton-Dykes
Fri 22nd Mar 2013 17:51
Skillfully graphic, Very moving,
Comment is about Humanity Lost (blog)
Original item by Simon Austin
To the point and unwavering Chris! Sentiments I entirely agree with-'what we need now is a soft pastel re-focus on aspiration'
Thing is,I can actually imagine this lot saying that!Great poem mate!
Comment is about Think TANK! (blog)
Original item by Chris Co
To the point, Chris. I was in a waiting room this afternoon and picked up The Times - not something I'd normally read. Page 8 has a graph (source IFS) which shows how changes since 2010 have adversely affected different sections of society from the poorest to the richest. To be fair, the richest line was worst on the graph, but only by a little. Almost as badly affected were the poorest in society - far worse than the middle class. Every government minister should have a copy of that graph (and your poem!) on their wall but that's too much to hope for.
Comment is about Think TANK! (blog)
Original item by Chris Co
I love communicating with people via poetry too Cynthia - that's what I love about live performance and about this site.
I suppose Dave is just highlighting the danger of when we start to lose sight of other people's worth - when it all becomes about ourselves and our own egos. That's when we stop listening and we stop hearing what others have to say.
Comment is about ....of words or people (blog)
Original item by Dave Bradley
You very much bring the horror of the holocaust to life with your poem, Simon.
I'd agree with Dave that this is a very powerful poem.
Comment is about Humanity Lost (blog)
Original item by Simon Austin
OH you lucky girl! I so wish I could have been there with you. I can imagine it now - you, me and Alvin on the front row, lapping it all up :)
I love your review Francine. It's positively exploding with excitement and happiness.
Laura, you'll have to buy a book and appreciate him - he's brill - I think one of Carol Ann Duffy's favourite poets too. He is just so clever and dry and very, very, funny.
Comment is about What Billy Collins taught me about my first ever poetry reading… (blog)
Francine, this is the kind of website that honours honest, personal freedom to share such special experiences. You go, Girl!
Comment is about What Billy Collins taught me about my first ever poetry reading… (blog)
Very appropriate lines, Dave, to be well-considered by us all.
I please myself, writing for no one else; but, the thrill of being read, and appreciated, is unparalleled. It's the reader's connection with my personal thoughts that leaves me breathless: I have expressed something 'worthy' of sharing. I'm too proud to push myself on anyone. So - why can't words and people coexist?
Comment is about ....of words or people (blog)
Original item by Dave Bradley
Well it might deter me this weekend as we are currently lying a foot deep under the white stuff here, and more heavy snow forecast tomorrow. It's being in Yorkshire that does it. In the Pennines. In the snow. Brr!
Comment is about Ploughing through the snow? Write Out Loud at Middleton on Sunday (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Marianne, I'm pretty sure I've shared this before, but - I used to haunt cemeteries everywhere, loitered in graveyards. Somehow, they are a visible bridge to the former lives of others, not gloomy at all. Like - they hold the greatest secrets we yearn to know, laughing rather kindly as we pound our breasts! I've had an extraordinary experience I might share sometime, when I'm brave enough.
Comment is about Marianne Daniels (poet profile)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
Love the imagery especially the stanza,"gravy brown brits" prowling in,really well written piece.
Comment is about Catalonia (blog)
Glorious - just plain glorious. Made my pulse race. I'm with Rachel. What do men see in horses, I wonder. Maybe - wishful thinking?
Comment is about Horse (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
Great article and interview!
Comment is about Indre interviews Laura Taylor for World Poetry Day (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Ahoy there, MC.
Luckily my pond (and house) is protected by a floodbank to keep the river and us separate.
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
hee hee cats too Rachel! x
Thank you for reading x
Comment is about Horse (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
yeah I have! Am a big fan of Philip Glass and they are excellent films!! Yes yes!
Thank you for the comments, I have been writing alot recently and have found myself seeking now, as you so well observed Cynthia, an intense desire to be more clearly understood even though the motive behind what I am writing is still dream-like. I want to always push so your appreciating comments are very encouraging. Thank you.
(hee hee youboob)
Comment is about Small Things (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
Heehee - what an enthusiastic write up! :D You're bubbling over Francine! Glad you enjoyed it anyway. I've never heard of him.
Comment is about What Billy Collins taught me about my first ever poetry reading… (blog)
Hehe Cynthia :D Aye, I get a wee bit carried away with it meself ;)And I'd agree with you, for sure.
Of course, we also have to add in the 'I' to the 'eye' to the 'real eye/s', just to put yet another spin on it! This is the kind of thing that I think about whilst lying down and doing 'nothing' (one of my most treasured 'activities'). And it's why I'm never, ever, bored :D
Comment is about Synaesthetic Symphony (blog)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Really atmospheric and dark piece this. You know what it reminded me of? Have you ever seen the trilogy of films by Godfrey Reggio, Koyaanisqatsi,
Powaqqatsi, and Naqoyqatsi?
This reminds of me the second one, Powaqqatsi. Would recommend you watch them actually, reckon they're right up your street :) Can get them all on youboob.
Comment is about Small Things (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
Wow. The most powerful new poem I've read in a long time. Almost any words feel too glib. If only a few million young people in warlike nations could read this.
Comment is about Humanity Lost (blog)
Original item by Simon Austin
Recycled Prophesies is my favourite one, too! -
I am really looking forward to seeing the anthology next month!
Comment is about Recycled Prophesies (January 2013 Collage Poem) (blog)
Original item by Stockport WoL
'chocolate fold my hair through your mane' what about us girls and horses eh? :)
Comment is about Horse (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
good poe mariane, lovely imagery as you always invoke. i like the 'thread' throughout, the 'muscle of silver' specifically and the contrast of worlds from the 'fields of industry' to the veined palm.
thanks x
Comment is about Small Things (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
<Deleted User> (6895)
Thu 21st Mar 2013 21:33
and the same to you Larisa!!
Lovely poem.xx
Comment is about The Twenty First of March (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
<Deleted User> (6895)
Thu 21st Mar 2013 21:30
blown away-with the greatest of PLEASURE!!xx
Comment is about Horse (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
I would like to congratulate with this day all my dear friends on this site and to express my love to everyone here, to thank everyone for the comments. You've become my dearest and nearest. Happy World Poetry Day! And ....thank you so much for giving me a chance to be with you in one team. Love, hugs and kisses.
With warmest wishes,
Larisa
Comment is about The Twenty First of March (blog)
Original item by Larisa Rzhepishevska
I find a different 'sophistication' in your work, perhaps an intense desire to be more clearly understood as you personally cipher your own world. Your diction is, as always, just superb.
I'm probably way off base. My brain seems to be exploding with meanings probably never meant. I feel like a helpless robot wired to 'receive'- it's very weird.
Comment is about Small Things (blog)
Original item by Marianne Daniels
The mystery of 'eye' is as old as humanity. All mythology and ancient wisdoms focus on its 'meaning': what is 'real' as perceived by the physical 'eye', and 'realized' by the 'inner eye' of understanding/realization. It's a marvel to consider, as deeply as you can go in your own thinking, to feel the searching power of other kinship minds. An unparalleled journey. IMO, almost every major idea boils right back to this main conceptual conundrum.
Yeah, yeah - I'm done. I get carried away.
Comment is about Synaesthetic Symphony (blog)
Original item by Laura Taylor
The Twilight Cave
Trust is broken
by jealous eyes
as the bat
wings flap to
fly back home
from your cave
into her arms.
Comment is about Suspicion (blog)
Original item by Katy Megan
steve mellor
Thu 21st Mar 2013 14:52
I think it more likely that they came to their senses. Have a good time
Comment is about Cheltenham poetry festival welcomes 'unsung heroes' (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Many thanks Cynthia and Dave
I've been fascinated with the 'art imitating life' idea behind life modelling/all art tbh, and have been putting together lines for this for a while now. I love how it's all just representation, but that the representation itself is a real thing. We use real things/tools to recreate the tool we use for art. How one perspective is completely different from another, but that everything feeds into everything else.
I've also been looking for a place to juxtapose 'realise' with 'real eyes' for bloody ages too now, since I had a little epiphany about them one late night, soaked in smoke and merlot ;D So am made up about that ha :D
When you 'realise' - you see with 'real eyes'.
Very simple, but quite wow, to me, anyway!
Comment is about Synaesthetic Symphony (blog)
Original item by Laura Taylor
i agree with nigel.. a review would be nice. i'll do on my blog too
Comment is about Stockport WoL (group profile)
Original item by Stockport WoL
a good un also here guys. recycled memories is my favourite bit (did i write that? lol)
Comment is about Recycled Prophesies (January 2013 Collage Poem) (blog)
Original item by Stockport WoL
my favourite one of these so far, must admit. i agree with meshach it's worth having this as a collage book of poems.
look forward to volume 2 in the future too
Comment is about March Madness (blog)
Original item by Stockport WoL
am away for a few days but i know my copy has arrived in the post. well looking forward to seeing this
Comment is about Write Out Loud Stockport's protest and collage anthology (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Incidentally, does the rogue comma on the Stones album sleeve make it racist?
Comment is about Paint It Beige (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Thank you Chris for your comment on THE NEED. I am an accidental poet and have only been writing for 2 years. Having no idea of the structure of poetry as such, I simply write. It is encouraging to have other opinions, especially if you enjoyed what you read.It's also good to leave a reader wondering, it exercises the mind.
Thank you.
Comment is about Chris Co (poet profile)
Original item by Chris Co
<Deleted User> (10993)
Thu 21st Mar 2013 10:02
Love your bio and sample page.
Comment is about Rachel Bond (poet profile)
Original item by Rachel Bond
Hello Dave,
Glad you enjoyed 50 Shades of Earl Grey.
Comment is about Dave Bradley (poet profile)
Original item by Dave Bradley
Sorry for steaming up your spex, Mama!
Comment is about Yvonne Brunton (poet profile)
Original item by Yvonne Brunton
A sad time that didn't really need many words.
If it touched you I am pleased.
Thank you.
Cheers. Pete The bus driving poet.
Comment is about BALLOONS (blog)
Original item by Pete Slater
Thank you Chris for your comments. I am an accidental poet and have only been writing for 2 years. Having no idea of the structure of poetry as such I simply write. It is encouraging to have other opinions.
Comment is about THE NEED (blog)
Original item by Pete Slater
darren thomas
Thu 21st Mar 2013 08:20
I'm not really a huge fan of 'ranting' but the sentiment behind this is impossible to ignore. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment is about Stop! (blog)
Original item by Noetic-fret!
<Deleted User> (6315)
Fri 22nd Mar 2013 21:36
Aye Chris..far too many folk I know are being adversely affected...a great poem.. :)
Comment is about Think TANK! (blog)
Original item by Chris Co