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John Coopey

Thu 23rd May 2013 23:01

Tim just wants a big Chopper.

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John Coopey

Thu 23rd May 2013 23:00

"Born to be Mild"

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John Coopey

Thu 23rd May 2013 22:47

If ever I'm on duty, Tim, I'd be happy to take you on a tour.

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Tim Ellis

Thu 23rd May 2013 22:44

One of the many sights in Yorkshire I've somehow not visited yet. Interesting stuff John!

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Tim Ellis

Thu 23rd May 2013 22:34

That's quite witty (or maybe I'm just going through exactly the same phase in my life...)

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John Coopey

Thu 23rd May 2013 22:13

Hello Richard.
Danes Dyke - yes. In fact, we've just had a week at Sewerby.
The boats? I'm sure I will have as a kid. I'm absolutely certain about the Hispaniola, though; and bashing the Germans in Peasholm Park!

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Rachel Bond

Thu 23rd May 2013 22:11

Thanks for your comments x

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John Coopey

Thu 23rd May 2013 20:55

Hello Richard.
Danes Dyke - yes. In fact, we've just had a week at Sewerby.
The boats? I'm sure I will have as a kid. I'm absolutely certain about the Hispaniola, though; and bashing the Germans in Peasholm Park!

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Julian (Admin)

Thu 23rd May 2013 20:27

Richard, thank you for your positive comments about the site. very welcome indeed. came at a good time.

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Tina Ford

Thu 23rd May 2013 18:58

Thank you Freda, it was a true experience of mine. I am happy you like my poems and thank you for taking the time to read them :) x

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Tina Ford

Thu 23rd May 2013 18:56

Hello Freda, thank you very much for your lovely comment x

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Freda Davis

Thu 23rd May 2013 18:14

I am enjoying going back over your entries Tina. There are lots of things I really like: what you write about, your stories, the humour. Great stuff.

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Freda Davis

Thu 23rd May 2013 18:10

Very clear, and a powerful message Christina.
A simple structure which you don't lose control of, helps to take us through to the conclusion. You handle the rhyme well, and it doesn't distract from the story you are telling.
The key moment "until one day I believed the mirror" which is the beginning of the renewal, is so well put. Writing this kind of experience is never easy, whether it is lived or imagined, but it is an important story to tell.

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Freda Davis

Thu 23rd May 2013 17:59

really funny. well spotted Lyn.

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Richard

Thu 23rd May 2013 16:53

Hi Dom the Bolton Neo sounds interesting maybe you can let me know the date in June when you find out

cheers :)

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Frances Spurrier

Thu 23rd May 2013 16:39

Don't quote Shakespeare or the Bible in your poems guys. You'll be in for it good n proper.

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Nigel Astell

Thu 23rd May 2013 15:47

Old Oak
is your
protected shelter.

Golden leaves
turn brown
then crumble.

Love sunset
wishing hard
eyes open.

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Tina Ford

Thu 23rd May 2013 11:34

Thank you x

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Tina Ford

Thu 23rd May 2013 11:34

Thank you x

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Tina Ford

Thu 23rd May 2013 11:34

hahah thank you x

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Tina Ford

Thu 23rd May 2013 11:33

Thank you x

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Dominic Berry

Thu 23rd May 2013 11:24

Scott Devon and Neo Poetry-Matrix of Neoartists have made a friendly, caring, supportive and fun space for poets with the NEO:LIVE event in Bolton. I heartily recommend it. Nat and Paul Blackburn were excellent, well-organised hosts and will be guest poets at the next one in June. I'll be going to cheer them on.

Bolton is easier to get to from Manchester than Manchester folk might think, a few quid return on a train that takes just a few minutes.

It is dead hard setting up and running an event, it takes a bucket load of work (recalling Bang Said The Gun: Manchester and Freed Up) and I know the effort Scott and co have put into making this splendid event.

I was impressed by the variety and quality of the open mic. There was a lot of comedy that proper made me laugh but never did it get to the point where poets with quieter, subtler, more serious work were not able to make the space their own. The audience laughed and listened in equal measures and, speaking as someone who often feels music and spoken word do not work well at the same event, the balance of guitar and voice throughout the night was spot on. Who can resist a chorus of 'Common People'?

Nat is a stunning poet, I am dead jealous of his 'Half' poem and his songs are exceptional. Both he and Paul have great comic timing and were so generous and giving in their hosting - I'm really looking forward to seeing them guest.

Well done all involved. NEO:LIVE is a special event.

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Jonnie Falafel

Thu 23rd May 2013 10:24

Oh dear! There's trouble at 't mill

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Ian Whiteley

Thu 23rd May 2013 10:02

Hi Richard

you're nearly right - I'm on at Cadence on 18th July - it is my book launch event (book is titled 'A Step Towards Winter')but it isn;t really baseds around Poe - although 'That Which Autumn Leaves' is in the collection and a couple of the other poems are quite dark. Hope your reading of 'In The Belly Of The Whale' went down well :-) look forward to meeting you at Cadence
Ian

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Greg Freeman

Thu 23rd May 2013 09:20

In the Guardian story Ira Lightman is quoted as saying: "Everything online by David R Morgan that I could find since Jan 2011 I could trace 90% of to another person's poem."

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Isobel

Thu 23rd May 2013 08:48

NO worries Alex - you can't force poetry, it has to be inside you wanting to come out. I'm glad to hear that this particular theme isn't :) x

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Richard

Thu 23rd May 2013 08:07

Did you ever go to Danes Dyke John
Sail on the Flamborean or the Bridlington queen The Yorkshire bell,,,its nuts they just stick in your mind like toffee, did you ever meet the guy who used to play the fiddle on those boats?

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Richard

Thu 23rd May 2013 08:04

Thanks Alex it is a poem which is very much meant to be performed and I give the lines the right weight internation etc

Its kind of about an opinion held by one person for another, and if you like the opinion is so dark and wrong and the victim of this opinion is just sending out a reaction questioning those opinions held in the darkest exaggerated way.
Basicly saying your wrong, I am not this bad person you say I am

Not really higher level more a Stream of consciousness


Thanks hun

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Jonnie Falafel

Thu 23rd May 2013 07:19

When does allusion, quotation or inspiration become plagiarism? To what extent did this poet plagiarise? Whole works? Fragments, Odd lines? David Bowie has described a songwriting process which begins with an existing song. Then he modifies the melody and the lyric repeatedly until a 'new' work emerges. Plagiarism. There was a big controversy a few years back alleging that Dylan plagiarised songs on the album Love & Theft. Well of course there's a clue in the title. I looked into this a bit and you could find inspiration from previous works or thematic similarities but nothing I'd call plagiarism... musically it was a different matter. But then he's always taken other people's melodies!

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Simon Marks

Thu 23rd May 2013 02:57

Many thanks Lynn!

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Greg Freeman

Thu 23rd May 2013 00:09

It's the democratic ethos of Write Out Loud, Tim. We all take our turn in posing next to the lead story, whatever it may happen to be. A new pic with every click. No one hangs around there for long!

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John Coopey

Wed 22nd May 2013 23:35

Glad you liked "Filey" Richard. You're right about so many of those other Yorkshire coast towns (I'm not so sure about Brid, though!). The attraction of Filey for me personally is its memories rather than any intrinsic character.

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John Coopey

Wed 22nd May 2013 23:31

What ho, the Old Devonian! I think Torbay outshines Filey in just about every aspect I can think of!

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John Coopey

Wed 22nd May 2013 23:30

Glad you liked "Filey", Yvonne. Next time I catch you there you can have a lick of my lolly.

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John Coopey

Wed 22nd May 2013 23:28

Thanks for your thoughts on "Filey", Harry. I have to confess it's a little more down-beat than I paint it.

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John Coopey

Wed 22nd May 2013 23:27

Thanks for your thoughts on "Filey", Ian. The first time we went there in the in-law's caravan some 30 years ago, we decided to go the week after Easter. We thought it would be packed for Easter week. When we got there it was shut.

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Katy Megan Hughes

Wed 22nd May 2013 22:52

That's really made my day, you saying that! Glad you are enjoying my work : )

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Wed 22nd May 2013 22:14

This bleeds beautifully. Kudos.

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David Subacchi

Wed 22nd May 2013 21:54

Thanks Steve. Glad you like it.

David.

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Tim Ellis

Wed 22nd May 2013 21:50

I doubt my friend Felix is going to be too happy if he notices his photo posted right beside this headline on your home page...

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Lynn Dye

Wed 22nd May 2013 21:07

Love this, Dorinda, very enjoyable.

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Lynn Dye

Wed 22nd May 2013 21:02

Good one, Dorinda, gave me a chuckle too.

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Lynn Dye

Wed 22nd May 2013 20:54

Hi Marksy, as a fellow part time misfit, I really enjoyed this poem :-)

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 22nd May 2013 19:40

thanks for commenting on 'in the belly of the whale' Cynthia - it approaches Isobels brilliant conceptual introduction at a slightly different angle - but hopefully carries the spirit of the topic
cheers
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 22nd May 2013 19:36

thanks for your kind comments on 'in the belly of the whale' rachel - i'm so pleased that you picked up on the title - which just dropped into my mind as i wrote it ( the original title was to be 'the lonely call of mankind' but i was so pleased when a lightbulb went on and that title surfaced (whoops, mixed metaphor there - but you know what I mean). I love your 52 hertz effort as well by the way - very image rich and loving the quasi-religious angle to it. I love poetry that tells a story in a more oblique way, using image and suggestion rather than direct reporting - and yours ticks all the right boxes on that score - well done :-)
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 22nd May 2013 19:31

thanks for commenting on 'in the belly of the whale' isobel - i'm quite pleased with it as there are a lot of subtle references in there - including the title. I was interested in the discussion going on at the moment about forced deadlines and topics - I love the challenge - and as your conceptual intro was already fully formed i thought i'd go for a less obvious slant on it. no doubt this would dissapoint whale lovers everywhere :-)
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 22nd May 2013 19:28

thanks for commenting on 'noticed' John - I know what you mean about life/wife/knife/strife - but like to think you can be creative with adjacent words to give them a bit more of a unique slant - hopefully that worked. Glad you enjoyed it
Ian

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 22nd May 2013 19:25

thanks once again for your comments on 'noticed' Yvonne - I'm glad you like the 'flag' words earlier in the poem - I had an exchange of views with Harry on this - I wrote them in early because this man lived like a ghost when he was alive - he was a ghost when he died. So you got it spot on regarding what I intended. Very perceptive as always :-)
Ian

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Chris Co

Wed 22nd May 2013 18:49

I'm just glad it seems to have worked and that some people have liked it. I was a little unsure as to whether it would work or not. It's a little different stylistically for me, but I wanted to take a chance with something.

The Garden Gray - why not if the weather is kind - thx for the great support! Not sure I can live up to such high praise, but your generosity of spirit and support of my poetry is something that is really helpful!

Hey Pete, yea I was trying to turn the poem around on the listener, it seems to have worked to some degree - so that's nice. :). Hopefully I can make Rochdale for your Sunday night - I'll try. I'd like to hear your set.

Hi Isobel, again really glad you like the poem. I'll certainly perform it at Wigan. I guess it does reflect a little of the good, the bad and the envy hehe. That could be a poem title right there!

Thx for the positive feedback - V much appreciated and thx for reading...


Best of

Chris

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Richard

Wed 22nd May 2013 18:45

Liked this very much I think if you know the place you love the place.
for me the ne coast is full of magic
Whitby
Robin hoods
Scarborough
brid Flamborough Head the light house
and maybe for me best of all cpt cooks village or staithes thanks for this poem




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