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Switch on the dark,
it's the right place to be.
Embraced in the black
that's reflected in me.
I can stop.
Stop with the thinking,
the feeling of sinking,
the sense that the whole world
around me is shrinking,
I am not.
Ignoring the noises,
not listening to voices,
denying my choices,
I am done.
Undone.
 

◄ Monkey on the park

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Preeti Sinha

Sun 17th Aug 2014 14:02

I am done. Undone.

Nothing more needs to be said...

Brilliant!

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Andy N

Thu 16th Jan 2014 13:06

i would probably split this up a bit, Kath but it's a top piece. particularly like i am done / undone at the end but a top piece all the same.

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alan barlow

Wed 15th Jan 2014 05:07

oh how i "get" this very succinctly put so ultimately appropriate

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Dave Bradley

Tue 14th Jan 2014 19:29

I was very struck by this Kath, especially the opening few lines.

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