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Graham Sherwood

Sat 20th Sep 2014 12:11

Bang on John,
There's an awful lot of my acquaintances that almost wish they had voted yes.

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John F Keane

Sat 20th Sep 2014 08:49

Nigel

Might be an idea if you posted her email address on here.

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Andrew Brown

Fri 19th Sep 2014 23:50

A lot of tension in these few words. Particularly like him looking nervously at the reel of seconds.

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John Coopey

Fri 19th Sep 2014 23:46

Top stuff and nonsense, TT.

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John Coopey

Fri 19th Sep 2014 23:33

It never hurts to tell someone you love them.

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Aprilia Zank

Fri 19th Sep 2014 23:27

Great sense of rhyme and rhythm, Andrew, and of course highly entertaining!

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Aprilia Zank

Fri 19th Sep 2014 23:22

Very telling, great sense of alliteration!

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Aprilia Zank

Fri 19th Sep 2014 23:15

Great command of words and rhymes!

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Fri 19th Sep 2014 21:03

Reading this Candice,I'm almost sat across the table from you,
wishing I could be feeding the humming bird from the palm of my hand-great poem!x

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Mikhail Smith

Fri 19th Sep 2014 19:25

.. yes Cynthia, it was me .. you wrote it in the comment box, how fleeting is fame ? .. if I'd known you were at the Waterside I'd've read some stuff .. you were trying to guess my ancestry .. it's Lancashire/Irish, Normandy, Viking, going backwards, I've got 'Dupuytren's contracture' on the left hand, so did my uncle. so I know the Viking bit's right !!!

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Cathy Crabb

Fri 19th Sep 2014 08:42

Thank you so much for your thoughts on this. I have edited and also taught should be taut Cynthia yes, I am terrible at spelling and always rushing.

I can't just leave that school run behind, I have to have something more than photographs! Cx

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Preeti Sinha

Fri 19th Sep 2014 03:12

Lovely

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Preeti Sinha

Fri 19th Sep 2014 03:11

It hurts, doesn't it? Hope you're good :)

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Fri 19th Sep 2014 03:10

Preeti Sinha

Fri 19th Sep 2014 03:07

Haha Solar :0 Fair point!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 18th Sep 2014 21:45

Thanks, Natalie - glad you enjoyed it. I can't claim to be the vocalist - that's Pete
Dymond from Diamond Studios in Bristol.

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Thu 18th Sep 2014 15:22

Hi Sunny.Cool poem-I LOVE that word-'risibly'..!.x

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Thu 18th Sep 2014 15:14

I consider myself-'shamed into appreciation'..;0)


and! theres bugger all wrong with being schizophrenic-as long as you both get on ok with each other!....;0)...x


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Preeti Sinha

Thu 18th Sep 2014 13:47

I am sorry to hear that. Glad all turned out well :)

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Preeti Sinha

Thu 18th Sep 2014 13:46

James, thanks for reading and your uber cool comment :)

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Anthony

Thu 18th Sep 2014 13:46

I enjoyed listening to your poems on Tuesday. Can you recommend any other poetry nights worth visiting?

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Ad Astra

Thu 18th Sep 2014 13:25

Hey Natalie, thanks for the feedback. Really appreciate it. I wanted to bring out the whole philosophical concept between doing things with your head and your heart. With regard to language, I've always loved the classical language as opposed to modern language, so i try to keep that gentle touch wherever i can. I think it brings out the effect better. Thanks anyways :)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 18th Sep 2014 13:16

How did you come across 'To plumb the depth of soul....'? I remember sharing it recently with someone, quite personally. Was that you?

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Thu 18th Sep 2014 11:17

Indeed Preeti, a brain hemorrhage. Family arrived in time :)

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James Roper

Thu 18th Sep 2014 09:25


Nice, I find this relatable. And you also scare me....

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James Roper

Thu 18th Sep 2014 09:10

It is fantastically meta.

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Preeti Sinha

Thu 18th Sep 2014 04:57

This is as gorgeous as you!
Love it.

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Preeti Sinha

Thu 18th Sep 2014 04:55

"Just to taste

for a moment, what it is like

to unfold the meaning of it

all with colour."

This is beautiful, delicate and so tender.

Love it, Charlie :)

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Preeti Sinha

Thu 18th Sep 2014 04:53

Brilliant in its simplicity :)

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Preeti Sinha

Thu 18th Sep 2014 04:52

So simple and yet so effective!

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Preeti Sinha

Thu 18th Sep 2014 04:51

I love this one, Alex

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Preeti Sinha

Thu 18th Sep 2014 04:50

This is wonderful, a little dark.

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Preeti Sinha

Thu 18th Sep 2014 04:48

Haha! Poor you :)

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Preeti Sinha

Thu 18th Sep 2014 04:47

Lovely.

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Preeti Sinha

Thu 18th Sep 2014 04:46

Hi Alex,
Thanks for reading my poem :) Glad you liked it!

Preeti

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 18th Sep 2014 00:08


Dave,
Like your `doubling` word play in this

and the sunny optimism.

(just catching up)

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 17th Sep 2014 23:57


Good man Steve!
Wait till your sent for.

(Like the humour of stanza three)

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 17th Sep 2014 23:50


STEVE,
As someone who has recently been conferring with God (and the N.H.S.) about my prospective mortality I like the `stand to` feel of this.

I like particularly the disillusionment of stanza five and the word-play about desertion and its consequences.

The whole thing rings true about the essence of courage.

Thanks.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Wed 17th Sep 2014 22:07

''...full and heavy'' weight. Tommy

ps maybe pressing, perhaps pointing. tc

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Wed 17th Sep 2014 22:04

what? eh? hm? ...and? (giggle) Tommy

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Alex mills

Wed 17th Sep 2014 22:04

:)) x

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Preeti Sinha

Wed 17th Sep 2014 18:25

Thanks for your thoughts on "Garbled" :)

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Preeti Sinha

Wed 17th Sep 2014 18:24

Thanks Charlie :) So glad you agree ;)

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Alexandra Parapadakis

Wed 17th Sep 2014 17:51

Ahh thank you for spying that! x

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Greg Freeman

Wed 17th Sep 2014 16:51

McGonagall and McGonigal on the same bill? Has that ever happened before?

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charliebrogan

Wed 17th Sep 2014 16:38

This is great and funny! I would be exactly the same haha.
Wonderfully written x

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 17th Sep 2014 11:27

You've really succeeded in capturing the essence of this black hole the subject is in. The whole work feels suppressive and dense. Well done.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 17th Sep 2014 11:24

The idea of a gentle storm smudging is a really nice touch and the comparison of a kiss and the storm, very clever.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 17th Sep 2014 10:59

Hello Dieana,

Welcome to Write Out Loud, we hope you have a good time exploring the site. We're really looking forward to reading some of your work and I know that you’ll get a warm welcome from the other WOL-ers too.

It would be great if you could upload a picture of yourself, it’s really good to see what our fellow poets look like.

Have a good browse around, there’s work here on virtually any subject and there’s always lots going on. If you have the time to make some comments about the work of other poets please feel free to do so, it’s often the best way to get some constructive feedback about your own work too.

If you experience any technical problems there’s usually somebody who’ll help you out so just ask and someone will get back to you reasonably swiftly.

WOL is a friendly, creative and unassuming place, so welcome from all of us once again.

Graham @ the Write Out Loud Team.

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