<Deleted User> (6895)
Wed 3rd Jul 2013 21:17
mucho excellentio Signor Whiteley!
Ciao for now!xx
Comment is about The Jesus Gene (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley
thanks for your comments on 'Northern Lights' Laura, glad you liked it - that sort of stuff isn't everyone's cup of tea so wasn't SURE HOW IT WOULD GO DOWN :-)
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
Original item by Laura Taylor
Thank you Sadie, appreciated, my first ever comment anywhere on this one!
Comment is about Hubris (blog)
Original item by Christopher Dawson
<Deleted User> (11225)
Wed 3rd Jul 2013 14:26
I really like this one, Dave.
There is so much honest feeling in it.
Comment is about 52 Hertz (blog)
Original item by Dave Bradley
Captures the mood of solitude well.
Comment is about From A High Window (blog)
Original item by David Blake
Indeed :-D
Comment is about I just like art galleries and getting pissed (blog)
Original item by John Darwin
<Deleted User> (11247)
Wed 3rd Jul 2013 01:53
a picture paints more than words can say
to bring wonder to ones day
the art to bring all together
to communicate from one to another
for in art a community is bound
for a new discussion to be found
to look apon the hand of the present
with a question to cause dissent
but the gallery of life dose contain
the mischief of those who have no shame
but then the brush becomes the light
to light the way to clear ones sight
for all art has this power
to tumble down deceptions tower
to right a wrong with a painters song
to show the truth so the lie be gone
and we all have this itch to scratch
to see the truth, the power to act
so find a wall big and white
and get your paint brush ready to fight
get some black paint so all can see
and write in big words
‘I’m with the free’
Comment is about 'This is a time for poets to speak up for the powerless' (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
And yet there was a time when the underclass had the opportunity to get an education, to learn to appreciate canonical poetry and to write it.
That raw ability won't just disappear because the opportunities aren't there - instead it will be channelled into words of the street - for want of a better way of describing it - and there will be good and bad examples of it - just as there is of poetry written by the middle classes.
Comment is about Kultur Kampf (blog)
Original item by J F Keane
I recently wrote a poem, in part on this subject.
It takes little more than basic research in order to find that black people are 30 times more likely to face stop and search in the UK than white people. Not 3 times more, 30 times more!!!
This is a national disgrace make no mistake.
Comment is about Lemn Sissay condemns police stop and search behaviour (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Hi. M.C.
Thanks for the encouragement. My poem "My Poetry" makes me seem a little thinner skinned than I am. I wrote a short not great poem telling people where they can kiss me. I may post it later.
You also write music! I'm jealous, not really. You're multi- talented. Is it possible to post your song here?
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Poetry performance is all well and good. Performance is not the issue that this poem is trying to address - only what is performed (or written, for that matter): a quite different thing.
Comment is about Kultur Kampf (blog)
Original item by J F Keane
John, the words at the top of Write Out Loud's home page say: "Encouraging poetry performance." Are you saying we are quite wrong to do so? Is it all a waste of time, in your view, because only the middle-class know how to write poetry? I would say that you've rather tied yourself in knots, just in order to follow the form of the sonnet, and might have expressed your argument more clearly in free verse. It seems a bit much to bring bestiality into the argument as well ...
Comment is about Kultur Kampf (blog)
Original item by J F Keane
<Deleted User> (9882)
Tue 2nd Jul 2013 16:44
dearie me! you need to let life into your life!
Comment is about Kultur Kampf (blog)
Original item by J F Keane
Yes, vulgarity is vile in poetry and everywhere else. At a deeper level, the lionization of plebeian culture is just praising an unsuccessful, dysfunctional culture. The underclass generally don't raise successful children, tend to live in poverty, generally fail in education and are prone to crime and intolerance. In short, their culture is inferior to middle class culture in every way. And so the question naturally arises: why should their 'literature' be set alongside that of the middle class, when it is clearly the product of an inferior, dysfunctional culture? We need to stop pretending that hip hop 'slams' produce poetry even remotely comparable to canonical literature expressed in classical/traditional forms.
Comment is about Kultur Kampf (blog)
Original item by J F Keane
Hehe - I think the pictures are already in your mind my friend, so perhaps the DVD is not essential... ;) Thanks as ever for your comments, best wishes, Dave
Comment is about Deep & Divine (blog)
Original item by Dave Dunn
Ouch! This brings back a hurtful memory. Back in the 70s I took a solo walking holiday down the coast of North Somerset/Devon and one of my holiday accessories was a pair of - you guessed it - Ray-Bans! Sadly, I made the mistake of hooking them in a shirt pocket and after gleefully jogging along a stretch of beach - the multi-pebbled variety - I found I'd lost them. NO chance of locating them on that huge stretch of shore and I had to give up looking and - muttering angrily - trudge on! They were a mere forty quid then but it was a painful lesson when a weekly wage was less! I never bought another pair.
Comment is about Ray-Bans (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Hi Shirley - develop a thicker skin and keep writing. You are not alone in enduring the "slings and arrows of outrageous fortune". A song of mine was recently marked 2/10 and described as "very poor quality" by a BBC Radio Country music DJ. The words she used were far from "fair comment" as they made no effort to differentiate between tune, lyric, arrangement, vocal, recording etc. In short, they were unprofessional, but there you go! Critics are not always right. In my case, someone took the trouble to put "Good track" beside the same song elsewhere - which helped even things out.
Comment is about My Poetry (blog)
Original item by Shirley Smothers
It is a one-off week early event this month. Nothing we could do about it. Sorry if people miss out, but we'll be back next month, second week in August for the Slam and back to normal with the open mic night in September.
Comment is about Write Out Loud at Wigan tonight (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
How have you got on with the earworm poetry cd?
Comment is about Laura Taylor (poet profile)
Original item by Laura Taylor
good stuff, john. tightly wrote all round even though my favourite bits are the first four lines. good stuff man. get it in your next book!
Comment is about Kultur Kampf (blog)
Original item by J F Keane
<Deleted User> (9882)
Tue 2nd Jul 2013 09:25
Cliff,wired for sound? wired to a pacemaker and zimmer frame more likely Steve,haha!
I think 'Quilled memorandum'a better title mm?
but then what do I know,not being..authorial!
neat piece Mr.H.x
Comment is about Pen To Paper (blog)
Original item by Steve Higgins
<Deleted User> (9882)
Tue 2nd Jul 2013 09:11
Bejairzus,and begorrah Johnno!
not like you to overlook the obvious!
-this one,by the well known Scottish lyricist,
Jumpin'Jock McFlash..(he's a gas!gas!gas!)
Radon (sung by Muddy Golly-aka-Dirty Golosher)
_______________________________________________
Radon,Radon felled me,
felled me,and I know I will be
leaving here very soon,for the ce..me..t'ree.
(and/or)
Radon,I've got that dizzy,scarey feeling,
that Radons gonna blow off my ceiling
and I know I will be cartwheeling
up and out to sea!
______________________
and so on and so forth-or fifth.
seeya,Coopeychops!x
Comment is about Ray-Bans (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
You make a great point.
Nicely stated. I told my husband I know I must be getting old. But when did vulgarity become acceptable or funny?
This made for thoughtful reading.
Shirley
Comment is about Kultur Kampf (blog)
Original item by J F Keane
Hi Andy,
Thank you for your kind comments on 'Echo' - very much appreciated.
I haven't written anything in forever - told Isobel I would, so...
xx
Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)
Original item by Andy N
Hi Cate,
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on 'Echo' - very much appreciated.
xx
Comment is about Cate (poet profile)
Original item by Cate
I can't resist designer frames
they're great for pullin' guys or dames
but there's a cure for my addiction
for now they're made to my prescription.
They're not that 'cool' you might agree
But I don't care now I can see!!
No longer following the masses
Now that I wear my unique glasses.
Love the song XX
Comment is about Ray-Bans (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
<Deleted User> (6895)
Mon 1st Jul 2013 21:17
assuming we instigated your involvement in this comp,we(Mr Wilde in particular)should have mentioned to you there might be the question of commision.And not neccessarily in the form of dosh,if you win.
He will be praying like crazy,that you do!
but he is more than sure,in considering his'fee'-you will be praying for a much,much lower placing-lol!
Great poem Katy.xx
Comment is about Untuned Radio (52 hertz) (blog)
Original item by Katy Megan
<Deleted User> (6895)
Mon 1st Jul 2013 20:53
is there a DVD to accompany this poem Dave?
or would it be too explicit for the faint hearted?
Like wot we are....not!
Yep,you have scored again Mr D!.xx
Comment is about Deep & Divine (blog)
Original item by Dave Dunn
<Deleted User> (6895)
Mon 1st Jul 2013 20:44
ohhhh! get you,O literary lovie!
a'gudden'Steve.xx
Comment is about Pen To Paper (blog)
Original item by Steve Higgins
Dave,
I love this kind of philosophical-ity in a poem, It gives us all a much-needed knock off our complacent certainty.
Comment is about Arriving (blog)
Original item by Dave Bradley
Well swapped, Sound choices.
Comment is about Poetry swap: Write Out Loud and The London Magazine (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Hello Starfish. :) Thanks for your comments on 'Never More To Shine'. - glad you enjoyed it. Best wishes, Dave
Comment is about Starfish (poet profile)
Original item by Starfish
Thank you Starfish. :) Glad you enjoyed it. Best wishes, Dave
Comment is about Never More To Shine (blog)
Original item by Dave Dunn
I believe Alan Morrison is arguing here for a kind of protest poetry in which the message is unambiguous, and in which the worksmanship of the poem – the way it is constructed – does not interfere in the understanding of it. Of course, there is no obligation on individual poets to write protest poetry, or even if they do, to write in this prescribed way. But I believe that if you choose protest as your subject matter, it is a good idea – unless you live under a regime where your message has to be shrouded in metaphor and subterfuge – to make your poem as easy to understand as possible, without detracting from the enjoyment of it as a poem in its own right, so that it may reach more people. Despite the apparent rise of protest poetry, which some might regard as just another publishing opportunity, the number of issues reported in the newspapers each day that are likely to make the blood boil do not appear to be reflected in poetic output. We lack a poetic Dickens, someone able to construct great, lasting art out of anger and compassion. There’s a job for someone there.
Comment is about 'This is a time for poets to speak up for the powerless' (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Lovely place, Cheltenham.
Comment is about Vive la difference: Tennyson's heirs and Thatcher's children (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
I also question the power of art to change anything. The punk rock of the mid-70s was, at the time, a powerful creative movement (albeit far more middle-class than is often said). However, in 1979 Thatcher introduced a new form of populist consumerism and in a few years punk was forgotten or marginalized. Art is a beautiful thing, for sure; but let's not kid ourselves that global power-elites are going to be swayed by a few poems or paintings. Art is like philosophy: it leaves everything as it is (i.e. a pile of shit).
Comment is about 'This is a time for poets to speak up for the powerless' (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
*Caudwell argued that the more “successful” artists of capitalist societies – ie the best adapted – are stylistically incapable of dissent, even when in their interests. This might, then, explain the apparent paralysis of response among the upper poetry echelons to the government’s melting down of our social democracy.*
A more mundane explanation is that those at the top of the social pyramid have no real incentive to challenge/change anything, in that true change would diminish their various privileges. This is why the left-liberalism of metropolitan elites has only widened socio-economic divides - think how the closure of Grammar Schools (a left-liberal policy) has ossified educational inequality and effectively halted social mobility in the UK.
Comment is about 'This is a time for poets to speak up for the powerless' (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Hi Francine, I like the way you have managed to get a feeling of disconnection in this work. A good interpretation of the subject matter.
Cate xx
Comment is about Echo (blog)
Original item by Francine
And I`ve "not arrived at a conclusion" about this poem either Dave but I find it strangely compulsive!
Cate xx
Comment is about Arriving (blog)
Original item by Dave Bradley
Hi John, I agree completely with Isobel. This is so simple but so effective. I always loved your dialect poems, but its good to see you are writing in a range of styles. I love this!
Cate xx
Comment is about 52 Hertz (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
And I love your voice too Francine - am so glad to have you back - WOL wouldn't be WOL without you!
I love this. Love the title and the ideas and the disconnected structure you have used - it really goes well with what you are expressing.
I also like the paradoxes - the appreciation of self within all of the loneliness.
You
are alone
feel the void
expand with every breath
And yet you go on
loving your own voice
Beautiful x
Comment is about Echo (blog)
Original item by Francine
Congratulations John - you've had a lot of success with that poem. x
Comment is about Poetry swap: Write Out Loud and The London Magazine (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Isobel
Wed 3rd Jul 2013 21:24
Oh what a brilliant poem Ian. I love it. I love all the religious symbolism and the irony (you're very good at that) and the very many messages.
What an original piece of work. It makes me think, it makes me feel - and I'm left feeling nailed to a cross. Wow!
Comment is about The Jesus Gene (blog)
Original item by Ian Whiteley