No more

will I tolerate

your gentle storm

smudging its way

across my sky


It sits 

over the sun

and hardly

seems to care

where it is.


I wait for it

to blow over,

to dissapate,

to fade-

or move on.


But still

it lingers-

like that kiss

you gave me-

full and heavy.













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Tommy Carroll

Wed 17th Sep 2014 22:07

''...full and heavy'' weight. Tommy

ps maybe pressing, perhaps pointing. tc

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 17th Sep 2014 11:24

The idea of a gentle storm smudging is a really nice touch and the comparison of a kiss and the storm, very clever.

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Patricia and Stefan Wilde

Tue 16th Sep 2014 21:45

sooo nice to see you back-and!-in style!xx

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