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The green grass dies beneath her feet, 
As she holds in her cry to a settle weep, 
Her heart gets taken by her big black sole,
As her eyes change color black as coal,
The wind howls across the sky, 
As her past was all a white lie, 
The trees turn grey with the fading sun, 
And she knew then all was done, 
The time moved slow as the clouds rolled in, 
And soon all remembrance of him would end,  
She waits until the sunset was fully dimmed, 
And once again the moonlight was her only friend.


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Wed 24th Sep 2014 20:54

Thank guys!

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Wed 24th Sep 2014 20:37

the way u compared i liked it. me to do like this that's y oo and that moon was sweet any way u write good ......hari das

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Martin Elder

Wed 10th Sep 2014 10:01

Hi Kassandra
I like the flow of this and the way you have rounded it off 'And once again the moonlight was her only friend'

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