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Tommy Carroll

Wed 11th Mar 2015 19:37

Hi Travis, you've produced a quality piece here, with a gloriously clever last line. Tommy

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Julian (Admin)

Wed 11th Mar 2015 15:16

Trouble is, if they can remember, they probably weren't there. David?

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Tony Kasazkaja

Wed 11th Mar 2015 13:05

thanks Jack, I don't often write humorous poems, but I must admit I rather like this one :)

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Tony Kasazkaja

Wed 11th Mar 2015 13:04

Thanks Jack, much appreciated :)

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Lan

Wed 11th Mar 2015 10:44

Fantastically creepy! I love 'like a scrabble of beetles on porcelain tiles'. Thanks for sharing :)

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Lan

Wed 11th Mar 2015 10:40

Hi Nat, sometimes the briefest poems shine the brightest...this is lovely xx

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David Subacchi

Wed 11th Mar 2015 10:38

You can find more of my poetry on line including some videos by simply searching on SUBACCHI POET.

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Lan

Wed 11th Mar 2015 10:37

Hi Chris, this is so sweet, I hope I have a grandson who feels like this about me one day xx

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Lan

Wed 11th Mar 2015 10:35

I really like this one - great opening image - A waterfall of emotions in a crumpled suit - and the rest, great!

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Lan

Wed 11th Mar 2015 10:29

Hi Travis, I love this!! So clever :)

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jack purvis

Wed 11th Mar 2015 08:46

Took me back. Well written

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jack purvis

Wed 11th Mar 2015 08:41

A picture painted with words

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jack purvis

Wed 11th Mar 2015 08:37

Humorous and satisfying

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Julian (Admin)

Tue 10th Mar 2015 22:58

Thank you for this Cato. It certainly makes me keen to get my hands on this collection.

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LEE BLUNT

Tue 10th Mar 2015 21:30

Good stuff

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LEE BLUNT

Tue 10th Mar 2015 21:28

Excellent review
I have spent a lot of time in Bosnia

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Tue 10th Mar 2015 20:59

Sounds an absolutely bril night Julian, happy memories, wish I was there, enjoy the rest of your stay.

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Tue 10th Mar 2015 18:52

Very nice poem Natalie.x

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Amy

Tue 10th Mar 2015 17:46

I especially love 'it purred with vindictive delight'!
Great word choice and imagery!

Amy
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Julian (Admin)

Tue 10th Mar 2015 14:51

Excellent piece, excellent poet. May you thrive as a writer and performer, Louise. Your performance at our Risk a Verse at the Red and Green Club was one of the best I have ever seen. Promoters please note!

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Nigel Astell

Tue 10th Mar 2015 13:34

Thanks for making sure we had a good meeting last night you did a great job and I thought it went very well.

Good luck with the Ghost project loved what you read last night.

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Darren Lea-grime

Tue 10th Mar 2015 07:37

thanks so much for the comments on my poem 'today.
i have read through some of you poems before and was taken with unraveling, but this one i love as it reminds me of my many restless nights when i didnt put a pen and paper next to my bed

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Tue 10th Mar 2015 06:56

That which does not kill us makes us stronger - Fredrich Nietzsche.

Nice one, Tommy. Enjoyed :)

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Tue 10th Mar 2015 06:51

Thanks for dropping me a comment, Tommy. Had a read through your poems - the cynical tone resonates with me. A nice change of pace from all the usual sorts out there :)

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Angelo Hudson

Tue 10th Mar 2015 04:10

Thanks, I write to emulate a voice for the voiceless as I myself have trouble speaking out.

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John Coopey

Mon 9th Mar 2015 21:01

I hope you enjoyed your research, Greg.

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John Coopey

Mon 9th Mar 2015 20:57

Where do we stand, MC? I'd place myself about October.

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 9th Mar 2015 19:37

thanks for the comment on 'Dexteram Patris' John - yes I also have that vague feeling of looking at my father in the mirror when I shave - I think it's a universal human gliche

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 9th Mar 2015 19:35

cheers for the kind remarks regarding ' Dexteram Patris' MC - I'm pleased that it resonated with you

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John Coopey

Mon 9th Mar 2015 17:09

Yes indeed, MC. Few Scots care to remember that they sought union with England because they went bust sinking money in Panama in an unsuccessful bid at colonialism.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Mar 2015 14:27

More worthwhile work from this source.
Some of the lines still resonate in my head...always a sign
of quality for me.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Mar 2015 13:57

Another welcome chance to laugh out loud on WOL - for
which many thanks! The message is clear and the use
of this old pop song perfect for the subject. I loved
the lines leading up to being "free from Clegg"!
On a serious note - in WW2 the SNP was found to have
sought an understanding with Nazi led Germany just in
case the Allies lost the war (a matter of public record at
Kew). Historically, the Scots have sought their
alliances beyond our shores and England's desire to
regain some semblance of self-government would be under
threat from the influence of a gang of EU mad SNP MPs in Westminster.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Mar 2015 13:33

Anyone who has stared at an old school photo decades
after the event will identify with these touching lines.
We seem to be different beings at various stages of our
lives but I doubt if there is any more vividly recalled
than our "formative years" - with all the joys, dreams and hopes of an unknown future stretching out before us.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Mar 2015 13:23

"These are not great poetry" - so says the reviewer.
But whatever reaches another soul in a meaningful way
can become as much to that person.
Mr Nimoy went with the Bible and did not hide his talents
from his fellow travellers in this life. He left us his own
nods to immortality and would no doubt be pleased to be remembered so fondly in these varied ways.

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 9th Mar 2015 13:16

Thank you Jude, a compliment indeed from you. Slightly undeserving as I have had to make a bit of an apology. See addendum. One of the key things I took from Bob was his astonishment that we reviewed poetry events, rather than reviews being limited to printed poetry. Let's keep doing it!

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 9th Mar 2015 12:59

Having had some back copies of the magazine from my
elder sister, I enjoyed the use of its classified content
in this poetic fashion. I may even advertise my CD there!

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Lan

Mon 9th Mar 2015 11:08

This is lovely - especially how you paint a visual picture, but give a real sense of what was going on behind the photo too, thanks :)

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Lan

Mon 9th Mar 2015 11:01

Hey Andy, I really like this - my favourite part is 'seeing loved ones/ into blushed petals/ trampled onto the floor..' Xx

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Lan

Mon 9th Mar 2015 10:51

Especially love the last two lines xx

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Laura Taylor

Mon 9th Mar 2015 09:29

Hehe Rose - yes, deffo coat time!!

Thanks Lynn - glad you enjoyed it :)

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Mon 9th Mar 2015 08:13

A lot of truth is these lovely lines :)

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Preeti Sinha

Mon 9th Mar 2015 04:43

I like this. I know many people like this. I hope she gets help. You have captured despair so well !
Preeti

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Judy Gordon

Sun 8th Mar 2015 19:14

Terrific review and very informative - not just a poet, a journalist as well! Impressed.

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Sun 8th Mar 2015 10:11

part biographical Patricia? Nice piece.

perhaps losing one of the 'offs?
-She REMOVES the wig? x

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John Coopey

Sun 8th Mar 2015 08:34

Many thanks, MC, for your kind thoughts on my Ring of Fire.

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Marie-Anne Marten

Sat 7th Mar 2015 23:08

I strangely just had that exact conversation in my head while reading what you wrote. With another imaginary/actual person. Great feeling, precise in its absolute.

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Marie-Anne Marten

Sat 7th Mar 2015 23:01

Very strong, love it. Some of your lines are dynamite in my mind. Boom!

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Sat 7th Mar 2015 21:16

Thanks for your opinion Jackie.xx

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 7th Mar 2015 15:57

A Johnny Cash hot hit given the culinary twist by the ever
reliable "Johnny Onthemoney"!
Such inventiveness is beyond "facile" in my own view.

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Tony Kasazkaja

Sat 7th Mar 2015 15:57

thanks Patricia & Stefan, I keep telling myself that I need to write some more cheerful poetry and not to concentrate on doom and gloom so much, I'm starting to sound like the new age Leonard Cohen :P xx

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