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playing koi

 

today you are so much to me that i barely notice all the other insignificant things

that fall from the eyes of time like sprats and minnows

sprinkling the pond of my ambivalence while you,

you rage above me, splitting the skies,

sending koi carp crashing like thunderous waves on a hand painted sea.

◄ victory lap

cruel sea ►

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Martin Elder

Thu 14th Apr 2016 20:55

I can see this so vividly reminding of some Japanese paintings I have seen. Nice one Stu

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