Changes
the mountains
are growing
green again
i know the bend
of your hand now
daylight gathers
into a slow burn
and i am not ready
for sleep
Comments
This is like a little jewel to me - startlingly simple and direct - the juxtaposition of the imagery works very well and gives pause for thought. A poetic piece.
Ray
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<Deleted User> (13762)
Sat 16th Apr 2016 21:37
Yep I agree with Ray - nice one