<Deleted User> (18980)
Thu 4th Oct 2018 14:48
Hi Keith - obviously I am not in the loop because I thought attitudes had changed considerably and the behaviour you have described is to a large extent a thing of the past.
Aside from the sentiment Keith, it is a well constructed piece which rhymes...which is in itself not your usual way so respect for that.
Comment is about Old and Gay (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
I don't care if you're homo or hetero
It makes no damn difference to me
As long as you're kind and you're caring
Which I'm sure you are and'll always be ?
Comment is about Old and Gay (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Despite a long and difficult road attitudes are gradually changing Keith ?
Comment is about Old and Gay (blog)
Original item by keith jeffries
Big Sal
Thu 4th Oct 2018 13:55
Right-wingers get pretty sensitive when called on their own shit, but they always cry wolf when someone on the left of the spectrum tells them something in return. My favorite is when one of them gets called racist, bigot, or anything true, they automatically go into defensive kitty mode and try batting that ball back at 'em.
As if 'snowflake' is any sort of intelligent denigration, now they all pat themselves on the backs like good little dogs. I love poetry like this.
Highly enjoyable poem, and the sentiment is top notch, well done Janey.??
Comment is about Respect to the Snowflake Generation (blog)
Original item by Janey Colbourne
Big Sal
Thu 4th Oct 2018 13:48
Unique in presentation and substance. ?
Comment is about A.I. Graveyard (blog)
Original item by Andy N
Big Sal
Thu 4th Oct 2018 13:42
I love the idea of the beacon. I recently wrote a poem along a similar vein..the beacon being their love. Thank you..enjoyed this..?
Comment is about Before the dawn (blog)
Original item by Mark Mr T Thompson
It is timely to have this reminder of National Poetry Day and
any input or action that contributes to it has to be welcome.
So - without fear or favour...write on!
Comment is about Write Out Loud Helps You Join the Celebration - Somewhere! (article)
Original item by Mike Took
Powerfully put. However, today's generation has more going for it than any other, with awareness and
advantages and an ability to act not given to those before
who were caught up in world conflicts beyond their control
and suffered beyond imagining before returning from the
conflagration to light the way and provide the shoulders upon which today's generation stands and looks ahead. ?
Comment is about Respect to the Snowflake Generation (blog)
Original item by Janey Colbourne
Thanks for the responses. I am persuaded that what goes
around comes around - and that "life" is a regenerational
process. Is it Buddhism that believes that we return in a
life form that reflects our previous existence and deeds -
up or down?! So - soar like an eagle or creep like a snail...
mind how you go! ?
Comment is about QUESTION (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
elPintor
Thu 4th Oct 2018 12:17
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=42yUeYKNYck
..only entertaining myself.
Comment is about IS and IS NOT (blog)
Original item by nunya
elPintor
Thu 4th Oct 2018 12:15
Thu 4th Oct 2018 12:04
such a very powerful piece Janey oozing with sincerity.
Thank you. Jemima.
Comment is about Respect to the Snowflake Generation (blog)
Original item by Janey Colbourne
And what did you call your 67-line form Tommy? I couldn't see it listed in one of the all-time greats of poetic frustrations (sorry, forms). Perhaps the collators banged their heads silly trying to work out if it qualified
I'm gonna stick with Adelaide ?
Comment is about What's Going On? : An Adelaide Cinquain a la DM (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Last stanza love it swallowed by a gigantic ..whole..?
Comment is about Intimacy (blog)
Original item by Robert C Gaulke
Don I invented a 67 line verse that has 8 words per line that contains only 10 vowels per line and must use the letter "Q" 13 times in total, that if read upside down near the back door you will get exceedingly annoyed.
Do try it Don and I'll see you in the outpatients.
Comment is about What's Going On? : An Adelaide Cinquain a la DM (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Wonderful writing Avishek....thank you..?
Comment is about Murky (blog)
Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH
Thank you for reading Taylor. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment is about Fourteen Divided By Two (blog)
Original item by Adam Whitworth
Some politicians I am sure start off with good intentions..but..as Lord Acton so eloquently put it 'Power tends to corrupt and absolute power corrupts absolutely'
On that basis what chance is there..enjoyed the poem thank you..❤
Comment is about Keeping Up Appearances (blog)
Original item by Trevor Alexander
<Deleted User> (9882)
Thu 4th Oct 2018 09:51
delightfully deep dude! write on!
Rose ?
Comment is about Murky (blog)
Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH
<Deleted User> (9882)
Thu 4th Oct 2018 09:49
love your soap-boxing mode Trev!
Rose ?
Comment is about Keeping Up Appearances (blog)
Original item by Trevor Alexander
Enjoyed this Adam thank you. ?
Comment is about Fourteen Divided By Two (blog)
Original item by Adam Whitworth
Thankyou for your likes and all the comments it produced. I found it an interesting area to explore?
Comment is about Who Holds My Key? (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (19836)
Thu 4th Oct 2018 07:53
Indeed a question to which there is no answer.
Fantastic poem; great theme. Love it!?
Comment is about QUESTION (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Beautiful poem Ray, read it twice and thrice..?
Comment is about EPITAPH (blog)
Original item by ray pool
A powerful piece of poetry... Thank you..?
Comment is about IS and IS NOT (blog)
Original item by nunya
<Deleted User> (18980)
Thu 4th Oct 2018 06:56
I guess if there are more forward steps than backward ones that is the best we can hope for. Good piece Trev.
Comment is about Keeping Up Appearances (blog)
Original item by Trevor Alexander
Natasha Bowman
Thu 4th Oct 2018 04:00
I love this poem. Boys are ThE WoRsT ? but what can we do we need the to reproduce??. Great poem now one of my favorites.
Comment is about do i cross your mind? (blog)
Original item by Grape
Big Sal
Thu 4th Oct 2018 03:05
You keep surpassing yourself Avishek, keep writing how you know how and let the words flow. ?
Comment is about Murky (blog)
Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH
elPintor
Thu 4th Oct 2018 02:41
Thanks, Big Sal...you always seem to say what you feel in the moment. Be well, to you too.
Comment is about IS and IS NOT (blog)
Original item by nunya
Big Sal
Thu 4th Oct 2018 02:38
Last line holds itself like a vigil to long forgotten emotions we didn't know we still had in our back pockets. Nicely done.?
Comment is about do i cross your mind? (blog)
Original item by Grape
elPintor
Thu 4th Oct 2018 02:37
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Partition_of_the_Ottoman_Empire
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t7WWcvaS1dg
"you've got to know your history..."
Comment is about IS and IS NOT (blog)
Original item by nunya
Big Sal
Thu 4th Oct 2018 02:36
Beautiful with bathos injected into it for good measure. Excellent poem very much worthy of its namesake.
??
Comment is about EPITAPH (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Big Sal
Thu 4th Oct 2018 02:35
Honest as it is full of life and imagery.?
Comment is about Tick Tock (blog)
Original item by MyDystopiA
Big Sal
Thu 4th Oct 2018 02:34
Like a ballad to the death of innocence.
You always manage to pack so much power into short lines, it's always a refreshing read.
Be well.?
Comment is about IS and IS NOT (blog)
Original item by nunya
Thanks Rachel for your comment- even though you've lost me, I'm a bear of very little brain.
I suppose a person might embark on some sort of heavenly quest or may remain content to try to be some sort of successful businessasshole. I suppose most of us tread a sometime-uneasy middle line.
I've flung down these inconclusive lines hoping the reader will "enjoy" having some of the work left to him/her.
Comment is about Fourteen Divided By Two (blog)
Original item by Adam Whitworth
elPintor
Thu 4th Oct 2018 00:32
"I aim for the sun
and within my guilt
I come undone."
Icarus escapes with or without wings...
Rachel
Comment is about Stuck (blog)
Original item by MyDystopiA
elPintor
Thu 4th Oct 2018 00:19
I realize it's somewhat anathematic, but this puts me in the mind of Machiavelli: "the end justifies the means"--reason can be so slippery and serpentine.
Rachel
Comment is about Fourteen Divided By Two (blog)
Original item by Adam Whitworth
Hi Sal. I think that's because the past is epic in all its miseries joys. Sometimes, I feel the past - even the very distant past - closely and intimately. Common humanity is not bound by time: empathising with the people of the past is no more difficult (easier in some ways) than empathising with the people of the present. As to vocabulary, dear Sal, I think you might be practising the ancient English art of self-deprecation! Thanks, as ever, for noticing my work, few do. Occasionally, I think of switching to prose but I just drift back to poetry, it is my natural medium. All good wishes, John
Comment is about A lamentation upon the fall of Constantinople 29th May 1453 (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
elPintor
Wed 3rd Oct 2018 23:46
I've been caught talking to myself one too many times, Ray. Subtleties have a way of taking on the air of private jokes--even the hecklers get more laughs on the outside.
Still reading though not commenting much, lately,
Rachel
Comment is about SIMPLE FARE (blog)
Original item by ray pool
Thank you Martin. The story is from an old Hindu parable.
Comment is about Fourteen Divided By Two (blog)
Original item by Adam Whitworth
Wed 3rd Oct 2018 23:08
thanks for reading my poem.
I wish i was
a Registered anything...
unfortunately they do not register poets
if they did I would probably not get a tag
for pedigree.
Comment is about Shanice Matos (poet profile)
Original item by Shanice Matos
The old eternal question of deciding what is truth and what is not. You have tackled this very well Adam. Love it
Comment is about Fourteen Divided By Two (blog)
Original item by Adam Whitworth
This sounds almost Shakespeare like Mark. A very fine piece of poetry as well as being concise and to the point
Nice one
Comment is about QUESTION (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Ray this definitely reads like it should be a folk song and a very fine one at that
Nice one
Comment is about EPITAPH (blog)
Original item by ray pool
<Deleted User> (18980)
Thu 4th Oct 2018 14:57
We have much to thank the snowflake generation for e.g. Brexit and Trump. If only they'd got out of bed, tore themselves away from computer games, and got out and voted!
Comment is about Respect to the Snowflake Generation (blog)
Original item by Janey Colbourne