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Thu 4th Oct 2018 14:57

We have much to thank the snowflake generation for e.g. Brexit and Trump. If only they'd got out of bed, tore themselves away from computer games, and got out and voted!

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Thu 4th Oct 2018 14:48

Hi Keith - obviously I am not in the loop because I thought attitudes had changed considerably and the behaviour you have described is to a large extent a thing of the past.

Aside from the sentiment Keith, it is a well constructed piece which rhymes...which is in itself not your usual way so respect for that.

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Don Matthews

Thu 4th Oct 2018 14:31

I don't care if you're homo or hetero
It makes no damn difference to me
As long as you're kind and you're caring
Which I'm sure you are and'll always be ?

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Don Matthews

Thu 4th Oct 2018 14:27

Despite a long and difficult road attitudes are gradually changing Keith ?

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Big Sal

Thu 4th Oct 2018 13:55

Right-wingers get pretty sensitive when called on their own shit, but they always cry wolf when someone on the left of the spectrum tells them something in return. My favorite is when one of them gets called racist, bigot, or anything true, they automatically go into defensive kitty mode and try batting that ball back at 'em.

As if 'snowflake' is any sort of intelligent denigration, now they all pat themselves on the backs like good little dogs. I love poetry like this.

Highly enjoyable poem, and the sentiment is top notch, well done Janey.??

Comment is about Respect to the Snowflake Generation (blog)

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Big Sal

Thu 4th Oct 2018 13:48

Unique in presentation and substance. ?

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Big Sal

Thu 4th Oct 2018 13:42

Great piece.?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 4th Oct 2018 13:03

I love the idea of the beacon. I recently wrote a poem along a similar vein..the beacon being their love. Thank you..enjoyed this..?

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 4th Oct 2018 12:51

It is timely to have this reminder of National Poetry Day and
any input or action that contributes to it has to be welcome.
So - without fear or favour...write on!

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 4th Oct 2018 12:41

Powerfully put. However, today's generation has more going for it than any other, with awareness and
advantages and an ability to act not given to those before
who were caught up in world conflicts beyond their control
and suffered beyond imagining before returning from the
conflagration to light the way and provide the shoulders upon which today's generation stands and looks ahead. ?

Comment is about Respect to the Snowflake Generation (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 4th Oct 2018 12:30

Thanks for the responses. I am persuaded that what goes
around comes around - and that "life" is a regenerational
process. Is it Buddhism that believes that we return in a
life form that reflects our previous existence and deeds -
up or down?! So - soar like an eagle or creep like a snail...
mind how you go! ?

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Andy N

Thu 4th Oct 2018 12:25

1st in a series

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elPintor

Thu 4th Oct 2018 12:17

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=42yUeYKNYck

..only entertaining myself.

Comment is about IS and IS NOT (blog)

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elPintor

Thu 4th Oct 2018 12:15

Thanks so much, Taylor.

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Jemima Jones

Thu 4th Oct 2018 12:04

such a very powerful piece Janey oozing with sincerity.
Thank you. Jemima.

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Don Matthews

Thu 4th Oct 2018 10:08

And what did you call your 67-line form Tommy? I couldn't see it listed in one of the all-time greats of poetic frustrations (sorry, forms). Perhaps the collators banged their heads silly trying to work out if it qualified
I'm gonna stick with Adelaide ?

Comment is about What's Going On? : An Adelaide Cinquain a la DM (blog)

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 4th Oct 2018 09:58

Last stanza love it swallowed by a gigantic ..whole..?

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 4th Oct 2018 09:57

Don I invented a 67 line verse that has 8 words per line that contains only 10 vowels per line and must use the letter "Q" 13 times in total, that if read upside down near the back door you will get exceedingly annoyed.
Do try it Don and I'll see you in the outpatients.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 4th Oct 2018 09:55

Wonderful writing Avishek....thank you..?

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Adam Whitworth

Thu 4th Oct 2018 09:55

Thank you for reading Taylor. I'm glad you liked it.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 4th Oct 2018 09:52

Some politicians I am sure start off with good intentions..but..as Lord Acton so eloquently put it 'Power tends to corrupt and absolute power corrupts absolutely'
On that basis what chance is there..enjoyed the poem thank you..❤

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Thu 4th Oct 2018 09:51

delightfully deep dude! write on!







Rose ?

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Thu 4th Oct 2018 09:49

love your soap-boxing mode Trev!






Rose ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 4th Oct 2018 09:47

Enjoyed this Adam thank you. ?

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Don Matthews

Thu 4th Oct 2018 08:48

Thankyou for your likes and all the comments it produced. I found it an interesting area to explore?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 4th Oct 2018 08:29

Love the rhyme....love the poem..?

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Thu 4th Oct 2018 07:56

beautiful

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<Deleted User> (19836)

Thu 4th Oct 2018 07:53

Indeed a question to which there is no answer.

Fantastic poem; great theme. Love it!?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 4th Oct 2018 07:32

Beautiful poem Ray, read it twice and thrice..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 4th Oct 2018 07:30

A powerful piece of poetry... Thank you..?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 4th Oct 2018 07:28

Like this ..a lot thank you.?

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Thu 4th Oct 2018 06:56

I guess if there are more forward steps than backward ones that is the best we can hope for. Good piece Trev.

Comment is about Keeping Up Appearances (blog)

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Natasha Bowman

Thu 4th Oct 2018 04:00

I love this poem. Boys are ThE WoRsT ? but what can we do we need the to reproduce??. Great poem now one of my favorites.

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Big Sal

Thu 4th Oct 2018 03:05

You keep surpassing yourself Avishek, keep writing how you know how and let the words flow. ?

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elPintor

Thu 4th Oct 2018 02:41

Thanks, Big Sal...you always seem to say what you feel in the moment. Be well, to you too.

Comment is about IS and IS NOT (blog)

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Big Sal

Thu 4th Oct 2018 02:38

Last line holds itself like a vigil to long forgotten emotions we didn't know we still had in our back pockets. Nicely done.?

Comment is about do i cross your mind? (blog)

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elPintor

Thu 4th Oct 2018 02:37

Big Sal

Thu 4th Oct 2018 02:36

Beautiful with bathos injected into it for good measure. Excellent poem very much worthy of its namesake.

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Comment is about EPITAPH (blog)

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Big Sal

Thu 4th Oct 2018 02:35

Honest as it is full of life and imagery.?

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Big Sal

Thu 4th Oct 2018 02:34

Like a ballad to the death of innocence.

You always manage to pack so much power into short lines, it's always a refreshing read.

Be well.?

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Adam Whitworth

Thu 4th Oct 2018 00:36

Thanks Rachel for your comment- even though you've lost me, I'm a bear of very little brain.

I suppose a person might embark on some sort of heavenly quest or may remain content to try to be some sort of successful businessasshole. I suppose most of us tread a sometime-uneasy middle line.

I've flung down these inconclusive lines hoping the reader will "enjoy" having some of the work left to him/her.

Comment is about Fourteen Divided By Two (blog)

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elPintor

Thu 4th Oct 2018 00:32

"I aim for the sun
and within my guilt
I come undone."

Icarus escapes with or without wings...

Rachel

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elPintor

Thu 4th Oct 2018 00:19

I realize it's somewhat anathematic, but this puts me in the mind of Machiavelli: "the end justifies the means"--reason can be so slippery and serpentine.

Rachel

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John Marks

Wed 3rd Oct 2018 23:57

Hi Sal. I think that's because the past is epic in all its miseries joys. Sometimes, I feel the past - even the very distant past - closely and intimately. Common humanity is not bound by time: empathising with the people of the past is no more difficult (easier in some ways) than empathising with the people of the present. As to vocabulary, dear Sal, I think you might be practising the ancient English art of self-deprecation! Thanks, as ever, for noticing my work, few do. Occasionally, I think of switching to prose but I just drift back to poetry, it is my natural medium. All good wishes, John

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elPintor

Wed 3rd Oct 2018 23:46

I've been caught talking to myself one too many times, Ray. Subtleties have a way of taking on the air of private jokes--even the hecklers get more laughs on the outside.

Still reading though not commenting much, lately,

Rachel

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Adam Whitworth

Wed 3rd Oct 2018 23:16

Thank you Martin. The story is from an old Hindu parable.

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d.knape

Wed 3rd Oct 2018 23:08

thanks for reading my poem.
I wish i was
a Registered anything...
unfortunately they do not register poets
if they did I would probably not get a tag
for pedigree.

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Martin Elder

Wed 3rd Oct 2018 22:44

The old eternal question of deciding what is truth and what is not. You have tackled this very well Adam. Love it

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Martin Elder

Wed 3rd Oct 2018 22:39

This sounds almost Shakespeare like Mark. A very fine piece of poetry as well as being concise and to the point
Nice one

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Martin Elder

Wed 3rd Oct 2018 22:37

Ray this definitely reads like it should be a folk song and a very fine one at that

Nice one

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