QUESTION

Do we die and then move on,

To re-appear new born upon

This stage which bid the flesh goodbye,

To see life with some other's eye

And once again set out to make

The journey that is ours to take?

Is that the plan for you and me...

This essay in eternity?

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◄ OCTOBER

WINNERS & LOSERS - Saturday rhyme time ►

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 4th Oct 2018 12:30

Thanks for the responses. I am persuaded that what goes
around comes around - and that "life" is a regenerational
process. Is it Buddhism that believes that we return in a
life form that reflects our previous existence and deeds -
up or down?! So - soar like an eagle or creep like a snail...
mind how you go! ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 4th Oct 2018 08:29

Love the rhyme....love the poem..?

<Deleted User> (19836)

Thu 4th Oct 2018 07:53

Indeed a question to which there is no answer.

Fantastic poem; great theme. Love it!?

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Martin Elder

Wed 3rd Oct 2018 22:39

This sounds almost Shakespeare like Mark. A very fine piece of poetry as well as being concise and to the point
Nice one

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