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Fourteen Divided By Two

 

Fourteen silent meditative years passed
before the ascetic returned at last.
The man of common sense, a twin brother
asked what "years of denial had amassed"

Whence in fourteen strides the ascetic led 
to the wider river in its deeper bed
and calmly walked over. The twin brother 
paid a ferryman for crossing, and said

"See! With two pennies I have done what you 
have wasted fourteen years the same to do."
In this comedy of the twin brothers
we decide for ourselves just what is true.

We'd upbraid one or upbraid the other
and they yet 
one, born of the same mother.

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Adam Whitworth

Thu 4th Oct 2018 09:55

Thank you for reading Taylor. I'm glad you liked it.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 4th Oct 2018 09:47

Enjoyed this Adam thank you. ?

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Adam Whitworth

Thu 4th Oct 2018 00:36

Thanks Rachel for your comment- even though you've lost me, I'm a bear of very little brain.

I suppose a person might embark on some sort of heavenly quest or may remain content to try to be some sort of successful businessasshole. I suppose most of us tread a sometime-uneasy middle line.

I've flung down these inconclusive lines hoping the reader will "enjoy" having some of the work left to him/her.

elPintor

Thu 4th Oct 2018 00:19

I realize it's somewhat anathematic, but this puts me in the mind of Machiavelli: "the end justifies the means"--reason can be so slippery and serpentine.

Rachel

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Adam Whitworth

Wed 3rd Oct 2018 23:16

Thank you Martin. The story is from an old Hindu parable.

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Martin Elder

Wed 3rd Oct 2018 22:44

The old eternal question of deciding what is truth and what is not. You have tackled this very well Adam. Love it

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