Wow.... Absolutely incredible and so very accurate, great job ?
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Big Sal
Fri 4th Jan 2019 23:55
Wise words indeed, Bindu. ?
Comment is about One Life is not enough! (blog)
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Big Sal
Fri 4th Jan 2019 23:50
Big Sal
Fri 4th Jan 2019 23:45
Great sentiment to this piece. Some sound imagery as well.?
On a side note, have you ever tried blue lotus (lily) tea? It definitely kicks lucid dreams up a notch.
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Big Sal
Fri 4th Jan 2019 23:23
A tale of dread unfolds, but all I hear is the buzzing of the bee. . .
Comment is about Come back and haunt me (blog)
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I have read this pome so many times today. The words have touched my soul. ?
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"the stranded and hopeless
blues that plague
the Night"
I resemble that remark
Comment is about Sunday June 24, 2018, 10:14 PM (blog)
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"the stranded and hopeless
blues that plague
the Night"
I resemble that remark
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Hi Ray!
Hope you have a good year! Really loved The INN- to be really nitpicking, 'barman' in the second last verse seems out of context as this is presumably the Roundheads versus Royalists period, and it would have been a tavern/Inn. Wouldn't 'landlord' be better, as barman is a more modern word?
If you tell me to mind my own business or get lost or something coarser, it's quite OK! Anyway really great poem as one expects from you.
Jennifer
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Fri 4th Jan 2019 17:38
Spot on Keith...Empires rise and fall. Britain is still dining out on hers. Spain and Italy are now also rans. I think the USA will endure because of its population and land mass. China is on the rise, but it is based on cheap labour, poor human rights, poor H&S, and poor industrial environment...all of which will come back to bite them I believe.
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um thank you guys
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So grateful for your feed back.. Thank you so much
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<Deleted User> (16837)
Fri 4th Jan 2019 15:43
Wow thank you so much for your feed back and kind words.. It is for you if you can relate love and light to you.
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<Deleted User> (16837)
Fri 4th Jan 2019 15:34
Make life simple for me.
With your reassurances, rid me of my anxieties and doubts.
Place your hand on my beating heart.
Tell me it will all be okay, promise we’ll never part.
promises true that shall never be untrue......the verses from lovers heart....?
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<Deleted User> (16837)
Fri 4th Jan 2019 15:31
Stop and breathe and let it sink in
That you hold the power to change and win
your last couplets are all magic in your poems.... and i simply adore it❤
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<Deleted User> (16837)
Fri 4th Jan 2019 15:28
With her mind at ease and her intentions clear she started to yank all the weeds from her garden.
She sat back and watched the magic blossom from the vibrant colourful garden she has now created and she promised to help plant the seeds for those who lost their garden tools in their time of darkness. Her light shines bright for the whole world
very positive and optimistic approach....well written... some how i can feel, that this poem is for me....beautiful?
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Thank you all for your kind words and feed back. I appreciate it so much?
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<Deleted User> (16837)
Fri 4th Jan 2019 15:22
My intentions are pure so the energy I project will find its way back to me as long as I hold onto my faith as tightly as the little girl held onto her kite.
Deep inside' right down to my core' I know I will be alright and so will you for SURE.
WONDERFULLY written!! nothing could be more true and satisfying..well done?
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Thank you so much.. I found your pome intriguing, I got the vibe is was a metaphor for your emotions. Absolutely brilliant.
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Big Sal
Fri 4th Jan 2019 14:30
I could write a damn tree for a poem. Call it what you will.
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Thanks for reading and liking , Brian, Hugh, David, Ghazal, Anya and Don.
Glad you enjoyed the wild and dark of the poem Jon thanks.
Thanks Mark, I will check out The Listeners. It's a bit of fun conjuring up the past.
Jennifer, just what I wanted to hear! From brain to keyboard to brain, job done!
I'm glad this was enjoyable Po. The mind and the eye can be like a camera, at least for me. Thanks.
Ray
Comment is about THE INN AT THE END OF A LIFE (blog)
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Sounds good read aloud (which hides the spelling misteaks..)(sorry).
I hope the dream wasn't yours, Leah.
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Hi David, thanks for the comment. Yes, we are all searching for some explanation, some meaning. Maybe, discoveries like this help in our understanding, or just open up more unknowns.
Maybe, he will grow one. ?
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Great poem! Nice and brief but conjures up a wealth of atmosphere and delight.
I especially love the reference to candy floss (sweet smell from pink hair to eat), and the sense of awe and wonder in this piece.
Well done Richard mate!
Comment is about Blackpool (blog)
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This is, simply, superb.
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This is, simply, superb.
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Himani Tyagi
Fri 4th Jan 2019 10:48
Thank you so much for this sharing.
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Himani Tyagi
Fri 4th Jan 2019 10:48
Thank you so much for this sharing.
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Himani Tyagi
Fri 4th Jan 2019 10:48
Thank you so much for this sharing.
Comment is about What Do I Write to Increase Comment ? (blog)
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Thank you one and all for your valued comments. Ray, I also think most people are searching for something but don´t know what it is they are looking for. They are lost, vulnerable and afraid. I agree about markets as they are a different kettle of fish altogether with many jovial faces especially from the stall holders.
Keith
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I will write a cheery one tomorrow ? Yes I can still smile
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<Deleted User> (16837)
Fri 4th Jan 2019 06:15
Sad.....but bitter reality of life. We are often wrongly judged and maltreated by people who mean the most to us.....may god make it easy for all of us...ameen
This too shall pass bindu...hv faith n keep going?
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Thanks all for your likes?
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<Deleted User> (19913)
Fri 4th Jan 2019 05:34
John, you just keep getting better. This is going in a frame on my wall.
Comment is about Early morning walk (blog)
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Interesting connection between something as vast as the universe and something as immaterial as FB.
Comment is about The Appreciation (blog)
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A very good “be here now” reflection poem.
Comment is about Early morning walk (blog)
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Hey, this is a good poem for the start of a new year and the reflections that often go along with this time of year.
Comment is about Create yourself (blog)
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Fri 4th Jan 2019 01:27
Thank you David and po for your comments, much appreciated. Thanks Kate and Anya for the likes.
All the best des
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( Tommy takes Ray's coat from off of his shoulders and ushers him towards the bar while winking at Wolf)
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<Deleted User> (19836)
Thu 3rd Jan 2019 23:50
Happy New Year!
Sorry for the belated thank you! Your comment on 'Alone' is greatly appreciated.
Jane
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Ta Don- re 'Expressive Allowence' you are to the point and correct sir.
Tommy
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Life burns you when you reach out for friendship and lose it Don, as you perfectly sum up in a simple message for us.
Ray
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Big Sal
Sat 5th Jan 2019 01:10
Thank you for your thoughtful response and reading of my work.
Enjoy your stay.?
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