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What Do I Write to Increase Comment ?

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What Do I Write To Increase Comment?

 

What do I write

To increase comment?

Write doom and gloom?

Or fun I want sent?

 

There seems so much written

About doom and gloom

I prefer laughter

Brightening the room

 

But...

 

Seems I could risk

Losing comment

Despite it's my laughter

I want to see sent

 

Don Matthews August 2018

◄ Teaching Brian Drivel

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Himani Tyagi

Fri 4th Jan 2019 10:48

Thank you so much for this sharing.

Himani Tyagi

Fri 4th Jan 2019 10:48

Thank you so much for this sharing.

Himani Tyagi

Fri 4th Jan 2019 10:48

Thank you so much for this sharing.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 14th Nov 2018 14:51

Never fear to bring good cheer
It's what brings other poets here.
When with gloom we're inundated
Be sure to know you're vindicated!

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Don Matthews

Wed 14th Nov 2018 14:27

It's interesting when I reflect back on writing this. At the time I seemed to think doom and gloom was getting the comments and laughter wasn't. I wanted to bring brightness to the site.

OK, comments are nice but let's face it we basically write for ourselves. But now we have the internal tug-of-war. Cathartic verses the need to be recognised and appreciated.

I'm a Spike Milligan type character. We both went to the same School of Silliness...oh, I've told you this already. Poor Spike - "I told you I was ill" - they thought it was a joke - he then up and died ?

<Deleted User> (19913)

Wed 14th Nov 2018 08:42

Ha Don. You made me giggle. I can only write about what I'm dwelling on in the moment and don't stop to think how it will be received. Something goes on a loop in my brain and it won't stop until it comes out. It's interesting to have comments but irrelevant for me as the act of penning is cathartic. That said, thank God I have a day job though.... ?

<Deleted User> (18980)

Wed 14th Nov 2018 07:30

Don chuck in a few f's and c's. That should do it.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Wed 14th Nov 2018 07:14

Room for both Don..keep us laughing x..?

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 14th Nov 2018 07:11

No comment, Don. ?

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