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Tue 10th Dec 2019 02:07

Wow Dorothy, thank YOU for your beautiful feedback. You took the poem to a whole new level. I appreciate you! I love that Elvis video too. When I was a little girl, I used to try to sing and move like him. I thought I could be the first female Elvis impersonator when I grew up! ?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Tue 10th Dec 2019 01:13

Wow John, you have created a masterpiece with this one! From the first line, I feel as though you are leading a journey through the wild open moors on a magic carpet ride that serenades the soul and makes us fly high between valleys of slumbering reality. Thank you. ? I’m adding this to my book of favorites where your poems have a commanding place! ❤️

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John Marks

Tue 10th Dec 2019 01:03

my humble light of being.

“Learn this from water: loud splashes the brook but the oceans depth are calm.” Buddha

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y43W5yMaZO0


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Do.RoThy

Tue 10th Dec 2019 00:34

I'll try this myself sometime..... May b it works.....what say Donny dear? On a ride!!!

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Don Matthews

Mon 9th Dec 2019 22:05

I like this Tom....

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Don Matthews

Mon 9th Dec 2019 21:56

I notice Brian you did not make a comment on the poem? Surely this is the whole purpose of a comment box?......

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Don Matthews

Mon 9th Dec 2019 21:49

Like Po I really enjoyed this.....

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DIY

Mon 9th Dec 2019 21:46

Hello, Cynthia

I enjoyed reading your poems and especially I like "GIRL IN A LAKE".
i look forward to reading more of your work.

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Don Matthews

Mon 9th Dec 2019 21:39

I like he term 'differently able'. I was born with a 'differently able' condition and thank God for it. Without it I could not write what I do.

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Tom

Mon 9th Dec 2019 17:45

Ah thank you. 'Why Poems' was the fastest poem I've ever written and I was quite pleased with the results (although I guess I stole most of my ideas of Vautaw's original). ?

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dorinda macdowell

Mon 9th Dec 2019 16:31

I won't be able to join you this evening; the cough/cold which has attacked me just won't go away! As most of you may recall, I always bring some chocs for our Christmas meeting: never fear! - I shall bring some next time and we can have a belated Christmas celebration in January!
Have a brilliant evening, enjoy - and a very blessed Christmas to one and all!
Love Dorinda x

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 9th Dec 2019 15:58

You raise an interesting point Brian.
As someone who has reduced severely my number of posts, preferring to delete each one after a day or so, I sometimes feel that the blog section has indeed become another social media portal for our most prolific posters.
In other world (one with far more development resources than WOL possesses) it might be better to have different genre sections, such as, autobiography, humour, natural world, political, social commentary etc etc.
As it is it appears the humorous sector is currently ruling the roost, whether this puts 'serious' posters off I don't know.
Personally, I prefer to seed my own blog, with a link from my profile.

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Cait Abbott

Mon 9th Dec 2019 15:20

Thank you all for your comments?

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Nigel Astell

Mon 9th Dec 2019 14:43

Bear behind
screaming heard
sneaking up
old lady
spotted my
pants down!

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Nigel Astell

Mon 9th Dec 2019 14:37

Ruth
We shall lock horns tonight at Stockport W O L
may the best Krampus poem win!

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 9th Dec 2019 13:21

Parts of this site are gradually morphing into Facebook, Instagram, Twitter etc. And posters of quality are slowly ceasing to post or comment. Not sure what the answer is...WOL is a broad church but some members are kneeling down but refusing to pray.

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d.knape

Mon 9th Dec 2019 12:21


Those beasts of yore, of flanks and fin
death takes them down to fate so grim
to ocean depth, it's sink or swim
neer more the whale be seen again.

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Tom

Mon 9th Dec 2019 12:08

Fantastic writing Cait, really enjoyed this.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 9th Dec 2019 11:46

IMO, absolutely superb. And sensuality is the least of it! I found POWER! Your second line is stunning, steering your thoughts, and the reader, straight into your work.

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Do.RoThy

Mon 9th Dec 2019 11:36

Donny dear......sheeessh........DND. The poet's at work.....(hush!).... Yes tz sensuous, snakey n winey..n stufff...?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 9th Dec 2019 11:33

IMO, imaginative and brilliantly expressed. Sort of like a stick to a weary traveller. Not a limousine! Just a stick to brace against, to share your weight as you walk, because the Walking is the purpose.

Or not.

I really enjoyed this work. Made me think.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 9th Dec 2019 11:22

Well put and thought provoking. I do struggle with 'differently able.' But mostly with the concept/label of 'different' which is just an opinion based on someone else's idea of 'normal' which most often is simply 'common'. And that is a bucket of worms!

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Don Matthews

Mon 9th Dec 2019 11:07

Good golly gosh!
Meld water/wine
Snake arms round neck?
Bods intertwine?


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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 9th Dec 2019 11:02

As happens so often, one small thing stands out in memory like biting on a sweet currant in a plum pudding.

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Do.RoThy

Mon 9th Dec 2019 10:24

Sensuous!!! ?

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Do.RoThy

Mon 9th Dec 2019 10:22

Hahaha!!!

Trust me Don, I'm going shopping those pink n my fav mauve perfumed toilet roll.....jus thinking will i b able to use them for the right purpose.....hehehe!! I guess, i should, but mauve my fav colour....what if mauve has lavender perfume.....awwww!!! Then i will nt b buying.....toilet spray..... Lolzzzzz!!! But I'm still thinking mauve is my fav colour then will i b able to use it for the right purpose..winks!!!!

I cn buy anyother colour, but Donny dear, mauve is my fav colour, hw cn i lev it??

If i buy brown, be sure to receive the courier in ur inbox........hehehe ?

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Do.RoThy

Mon 9th Dec 2019 08:08

If you succeed to figure it out lmme know......hehehe ?

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Do.RoThy

Mon 9th Dec 2019 08:07

Indeed R.

Thank you?

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Do.RoThy

Mon 9th Dec 2019 02:43

A beautiful song to start this lovely day....thank you for this song....?

A meaningful poem, deep, intense, succinct and piercing the dark human soul, enlightens the mind and making us HUMAN in the real sense of being one. Thank you!!

This poem needs to be published, circulated and read out loud!!

May the humanity within us live long and strong, it will surely make our homes, work places, neighborhoods, country n yes our world a much peaceful n better place to live in.

God bless you immensely for this.?

Today seems to be a spiritual awakening day....i have the spirit waking within me too....may it be contagious and passes through to everyone....Good way to start the day?

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Do.RoThy

Mon 9th Dec 2019 02:34

Now you have a reason!!!

Love doesn't need one,
but you atleast have one.

Peace?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 9th Dec 2019 02:13

Welcome TrixTex. From one seeker to another, we seem to gravitate to the same places, like here in this virtual world of word wizards. Namaste. Write on!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 9th Dec 2019 02:01

Beautiful insight. Love it. ?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 8th Dec 2019 23:31

Thanks Po. I sometimes feel as though I've survived a couple lifetimes in this one! I am fascinated by reincarnation. I sure hope we take wisdom from one lifetime to the next. Namaste my friend. ?

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Don Matthews

Sun 8th Dec 2019 20:21

While many politicians start out with high ideals and good intentions they are gradually worn down by the system. Or restricted.......

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Sun 8th Dec 2019 18:55

Jeff - I like the piece and I like the passion you've put into it. However, for a piece that started off by trying to bridge the divide it has a massive left bias.

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Lee Harrison

Sun 8th Dec 2019 18:07

Beautiful.
You’re an inspiration Jeff.
Summed it up to perfection, and don’t mind saying brought a tear on.
Keep up the great work.

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Do.RoThy

Sun 8th Dec 2019 14:26

You hv a point Ruth!!

Don me think i will also do skype-ping n amazon jungle-ing both!!! Hehehe..... Gotcha.... Hehehe ?

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 8th Dec 2019 12:55

Just found it, Albert King right? Great song. Have you ever listened to the album, "Indianola Mississippi Seeds," BB King. It's one of my all time favourites.

J. x

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 8th Dec 2019 12:51

I am so pleased to hear that, I used to play with a couple of blues bands, I play harmonica, although I've hardly touched one for about 20 years. I can't place the song but I'm gonna have to check it out now. Thanks Victoria.

J. x

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sun 8th Dec 2019 09:33

Hmmm thing is here Don if you're skyping is really being published? You should self publish and sell it on Amazon....delve into the Jungle!

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Do.RoThy

Sun 8th Dec 2019 06:35

Published!! ?

Donny dear?

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d.knape

Sun 8th Dec 2019 03:03

enjoyed "Why Poems"
beautiful
well written!

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Various

Sun 8th Dec 2019 02:38

I have always loved this song and your words are a worthy beautiful tribute.

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Chris Hubbard

Sun 8th Dec 2019 02:19

Many of our greatest writers, and I claim Clive James as such from both sides of the world, was supremely comfortable and skilled in any number of public genres and literary pursuits. He was a master of many, a true polymath and a peerless observer of the human condition. I asked a bookseller the other day whether they had any of his books in stock, only to be told, sadly no, but that his publisher(s) were already urgently reprinting almost all of his works. He was honoured and admired in life and, of course, will be celebrated and immortalised in perpetuity.

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Do.RoThy

Sun 8th Dec 2019 01:45

Po dear, your words are deep.if only my heart and soul behave themselves well and follow. They like two naughty kids keep bragging n i feel so exhausted n helpless to give them their love. I feel helpless n tired n exhausted n dying n not knowing what is n what will be n what i should do n whether or not...phew.....utter chaos n confusion my little mind has created in my skull....need to bring a mechanic to untangle all the curved wires that are creating short circuit in my head...reflected in my heart n felt by my gentle breaking soul.
I'm sure u r confused too after reading this..phew!!! Phew!!! Phew!!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 8th Dec 2019 01:08

Reads like an awesome blues song. I'm listening to "I'll Play the Blues for You" in the background as I read this poem and the rhythm fits perfectly. Music to the ears of all us survivors. Great title and verse. ❤

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Jon Stainsby

Sat 7th Dec 2019 18:31

Wonderful words, John.

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Andy N

Sat 7th Dec 2019 17:08

Looking forward to this as always too (:

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 7th Dec 2019 14:49

Thanks Philipos, Richard Have you been on the gin as well? More thieving there Nigel!

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 7th Dec 2019 14:45

Sounds like you and Andy are partners in crime with this Krampus thing, never even heard of before he mentioned it! You'll be locking horns as to who has the best poem about it ?

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