This really moved me. its so peaceful. well done. love it.
Comment is about Sing Me To Sleep (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Jason Baylor, thank you so much for your comment.
Comment is about Ungracfully Confess (blog)
Original item by Amanda Ann;
Very True Dorothy Nature is part of that infinite intelligence that always adjusts and adapts. Thanks for reading
Comment is about Side By Side (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Adam - don't let me be your guide to a good poem. Plenty of people here like long poems. I just fall asleep. Each to his own my friend.
Kate - 'So few words but speaks volumes'. This to me is the art of poetry. Why I like a well-crafted haiku. Short, succint but speaks volumes. Thanks for bringing this up Kate
Ruth - Oh sorry. Nearly forgot you. Yes, I really like it.
Comment is about Side By Side (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Crossed eyes
can't decide
truth or lie!
Comment is about What's Left? (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
You're jolly right Jennifer. You or I would not want to be plain old jennifer and don would we? Hey? Why are you jennifer Malden and not Jennifer Malden?
Miss Muse Thalia is also a bit puzzled at this also?
Comment is about My Muse is Getting Fussy (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
So many good reasons to stick your neck out Ruth and write this excellent poem.
Comment is about Giraffe (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
I like your Musing on a Muse Kate.
I have just been told the Golden Rule of maintaining a healthy muse relationship.
Rule 4: Never ever, not once, consummate your relationship with your muse
Thalia often tempts me Kate but you will be pleased to know I say no blossom each time. She keeps coming back for more, little vixen, but I gotta be careful not bite the hand which feeds me. Am I doing the right thing Kate?....
Comment is about My Muse is Getting Fussy (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Nice Don! Of course she's getting uppity/fussy if you don't concede her a capital letter. She did come up with something though.
Jennifer
Comment is about My Muse is Getting Fussy (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Thank you Jennifer, much appreciated, and those were some of my favourite lines too.
And thank you Lisa for liking.
J. x
Comment is about The Deity Screams (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Wow! Terrifying - agree about the rhyme scheme - especially liked 'let your tongue taste the bitterness of lies - all mercy is spent - and the last verse. Definitely has a biblical sound or perhaps Mother Nature? It is a really powerful image and would be amply deserved!
Jennifer
Comment is about The Deity Screams (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Thanks Dorothy, Ruth, Adam and Heart. I've had this image in my head for some time now and it's taken a while to form into words but it's nice that it has because now I can stop thinking about it.?
J. x
Comment is about The Deity Screams (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Been reading your poems and bathing in this powerful imagery. God's muffled cough is great....
Comment is about Modern Crusader (blog)
Original item by Heart of Lead
Your poems are powerfully crafted and always a journey to somewhere epic. Thanks for sharing.
Comment is about The Deity Screams (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Reminds me a bit of the fog coming in on its little cat feet in that poem by Sandburg. I admire your gift for short and to the point. I bet Don gets through all your poems. Mine are too long but I tried on Sound of Rain.
Comment is about Side By Side (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Beautiful. And the brevity is stunning.
Part of our problems today is because of our disconnect with nature.
Ruth this is a massive invitation for us to cohabit with nature.
Let it resonate guys.
Raj
Comment is about Side By Side (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
An epic almost Biblically poetic description of climate change enjoyed the dramatic image you directed with your words. x
Comment is about The Deity Screams (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
<Deleted User> (22444)
Tue 27th Aug 2019 12:44
Oh I LOVE this. It's going on my wall at work tomorrow. So few words but speaks volumes. ?
Comment is about Side By Side (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Thanks Kate, it's reassuring to know that some of the image that was in my head successfully transferred to paper.
J. x
Comment is about The Deity Screams (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
Thanks Heart, all of these nursery rhymes and early rhymes are so deeply imbedded in our psyche, that they resonate with is all, I think that's perhaps why we all love them so much, because they reach down to the inner child.
J. x
Comment is about A Childhood Nonsense Rhyme From Where I Was Born (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
A good poem for putting matters into perspective.
Thanks
Keith
Comment is about Face Off (blog)
Original item by d.knape
<Deleted User> (22444)
Tue 27th Aug 2019 11:44
I love this D. It brings to mind our obsession with youth and what a mistake that is. I saw a woman on the street the other day whose lips arrived half a metre before she did. She was distorted by her attempt to remain youthful and the effect inspired sadness rather than admiration. Out of warranty is fine with me
Comment is about Face Off (blog)
Original item by d.knape
<Deleted User> (22444)
Tue 27th Aug 2019 11:41
Yes, it seems everyone knows it, or a part of it. A version. I love how old poetry is like a collective memory. Some bits of knowledge passed down but from where, we do not know. To read something I have only heard and probably in Canada... I am thankful you wrote it down here so that our collective memory might be refreshed.
Comment is about A Childhood Nonsense Rhyme From Where I Was Born (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
<Deleted User> (22444)
Tue 27th Aug 2019 11:40
I read this a few times Jason. Very powerful.
Comment is about The Deity Screams (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
I don't personally have faith, but in my mind's eye I could see a raging God tearing out the pages of the story he'd written and dashing them into the bin. I don't believe that will happen, it just seemed a really powerful image. I hope I've done it justice.
J. x
Comment is about The Deity Screams (blog)
Original item by Jason Bayliss
<Deleted User> (22444)
Tue 27th Aug 2019 11:26
Well, being an Aussie I can't say I'm thrilled about the result. At least he is a redhead. ?
Comment is about Ben Stokes (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
I listened to the BBC 5Live broadcast and some of the final runs were responded with in roars of approval and near delirium that were the greatest that I have heard at a cricket match.
Well posted John
Tommy
Comment is about Ben Stokes (blog)
Original item by John E Marks
<Deleted User> (22444)
Tue 27th Aug 2019 11:20
While we are on the subject of muses, I thought you might appreciate this old one I dragged up from my files Don.
Musings on a Muse
He was her muse,
a flint to her imagination.
She hung on every word, not in adoration but because he challenged her at every turn.
There was no convention in their interaction - no "relationship" of which to speak.
But his mind pulled her inward,
his very presence igniting creativity from somewhere deep within.
Was this better than love?
More satisfying than sex?
She would never know.
The only thing she knew for sure was that he helped her see the world a different way.
And she was better for it.
Comment is about My Muse is Getting Fussy (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Wow Anne,
He is ethereal!
So many stories, in a mere flap of a wing!
Comment is about 'My Blue Hen' - Ann Gray (photo)
So very true dear Jason. We are a cruel, selfish kind.
Thank you my friend!?
Mae
Comment is about The Burden of Man- A Ghazal (blog)
Original item by Mae Foreman
Heavy is the burden of man, which is ironic because we're one of the few, if not the only species intelligent enough to know it and do something about it.
It never ceases to amaze me that the most intelligent species on the planet can be so damn stupid.
A great piece of writing, as ever Mae.
J. x
Comment is about The Burden of Man- A Ghazal (blog)
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Comment is about Good comments (blog)
Original item by Hasmukh Mehta
Sometimes one has to let it out, dear Adam! I will visit your profile and read your angry pieces! But you have a point, wallowing on all these unpleasant emotions doesn't do much good. Writing them away though,that is pretty powerful! Thanks for liking and commenting ?
Mae
Comment is about Divine Sacrifice (blog)
Original item by Mae Foreman
Thank you Adam! I'm glad it found a home for it! Also, I'll send you all the details for the Ghazal! ?
Mae
Comment is about The Burden of Man- A Ghazal (blog)
Original item by Mae Foreman
Thalia has told me
To all WOLers tell
Who in our relationship
Holds and rings the bell
Good fella......
Comment is about My Muse is Getting Fussy (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
lol, while I sympathize with the baby in the pram, can't help wondering who was calling...
Comment is about hugh (poet profile)
Original item by hugh
She pushed her pram and lit a fag,
Her skin wrinkled and her cheeks did sag.
Baby's lungs filled up with smoke,
Coughing and spluttering ready to choke.
Her phone rang and gave her a start,
As to the cigarette counter she did dart.
She ignored the ring and switched it off,
Baby in pram continued to cough.
Twenty cigarettes she did buy,
Baby in pram continued to cry
Comment is about Mother Knows Best (blog)
Original item by Chrystel Roberts
No probs, will do, and all I would ask is the same in return.
J. x
Comment is about fallen (blog)
Original item by Chrystel Roberts
Please please someone come up with a better title.
Comment is about If Pessimistically Hopeful (blog)
Original item by Adam Rabinowitz
good laugh, very creative.
write on
Comment is about The Separation (blog)
Original item by branwell kent
As always, you've put a smile on my face!
Thank you
Comment is about Don Matthews (poet profile)
Original item by Don Matthews
Hey Amanda,
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem!It makes me feel good to know that others appreciate my work.
Have a great day
Comment is about Amanda Ann; (poet profile)
Original item by Amanda Ann;
What about Apple? Surely they're not malignant? Are Blackberry's still available ? Ain't heard no cancer deaths from these. Possibility?
Hey Don. Peaches-n-Cream's a new brand in town. Cancer-proof written in 1mth guarantee. Sheesh. Don't make 'em to last these days. Obvious Chinese shit. Oh? Why not? Colour don't suit. Further suggestions needed......
Comment is about Mother Knows Best (blog)
Original item by Chrystel Roberts
I enjoyed this so much! absolutely loved it.
Comment is about Mother Knows Best (blog)
Original item by Chrystel Roberts
Ruth - Thalia my Muse was just playing a joke on me. She hid the bike. I've had strong words to her and she's promised not to do it again......jolly women.
Comment is about Letting off steam (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly
Tue 27th Aug 2019 03:09
Dear Afisha,
thanks for your comment on
"white horses in a darkened field"
poetry is trying...
yet I try
as best I can.
Comment is about afishamongmany (poet profile)
Original item by afishamongmany
Ruth O'Reilly
Tue 27th Aug 2019 16:53
Kate I'm glad that you 'got' how I was trying to say more though chose few words!
Raj Thank you for reading, I like to sometimes aim to construct my pieces as mini meditation which doesn't take you too far away from my main focus.
Adam, Thanks for reading. I do enjoy the length of your poems because they always have a certain flow about them. I must check out the poem you mentioned. As a kid my mom would read Khubla Khan to me which I loved but was somewhat disappointed when she told me it was an unfinished poem....Maybe subconsciously I just want to make sure I finish my poem by having it short!
Comment is about Side By Side (blog)
Original item by Ruth O'Reilly