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Good comments 

Friday, 31st August 2018

 

It is reciprocal 

for any individual

to respond the call

and smash the wall

 

yes, if one comes with the gesture

make sure

that he is  responded with

an answer clearly worded 

 

but not always

as it may not show the orderly way

to read and respond

sometimes you may not find the mood

 

but make a point

and maintain

the habit of responding 

by positively sending the comments

 

I have found 

and gained the ground

with no obligation at all

to fall in negative lines

 

Hamukh Amathalal Mehta  

Jadia4708au

◄ It's pleasure

Some mission on ►

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Don Matthews

Tue 19th Nov 2019 22:04

I bend my gramma, spell rong
Don't care if given shit
I am a happi little poet
Will keep on with it

So there....

😋

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poemagraphic

Tue 19th Nov 2019 20:38

Hi Hasmukh

Great piece of work.

I dread to think how many have left WOL (and other areas of their lives behind) for fear of ridicule and mockery.

I feel at times that some fail to understand this is a global site with global visitors. English may not be a language that is native to them.

Spelling and grammar has put off many a GREAT poet.

Whatever type of prose or poetry one writes, a small simple comment encourages immensely.

However one... Just one! Negative or flippant comment, can destroy what 100 positive comments have achieved in inspiring one to write and post 'in public'.

Critique is something lots of here at WOL, do look for, to help us improve our craft.

All to often, I feel, this is sadly lacking.

Lisa's comment to you, is commendable. I fully concur.
Po

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Tue 27th Aug 2019 10:32

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lisa donohoe

Wed 21st Aug 2019 09:26

Brilliantly put ?
Very enjoyable. To capture the essence of validation and approval without caring to much is unique. Well done

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