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M.C. Newberry

Sun 21st Nov 2021 18:03

It is a tragedy twice over when someone devoted to the well-being of others should fall victim to infection and could not be
saved. And at such a comparatively young age too. Covid-related takes on a new painful meaning in such cases.

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kJ Walker

Sun 21st Nov 2021 17:43

Thanks Keith and Stephen. I'm glad I didn't fail to disappoint. ?

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jan oskar hansen

Sun 21st Nov 2021 17:30

I have said this before poetry is not an artform

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 21st Nov 2021 17:26

Why do I now want a drink of something I don't like...Good one ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 21st Nov 2021 17:05

? Love it! As Keith says, you never fail to disappoint!

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 21st Nov 2021 17:01

Nice one, Keith. Has a lovely dreamy, ethereal flow to it. ?

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Candice Reineke

Sun 21st Nov 2021 16:07

Thanks for taking us on your walk around Barcelona, Julie - ‘twas lovely!

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Stephen Atkinson

Sun 21st Nov 2021 14:19

Thought so...?

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keith jeffries

Sun 21st Nov 2021 13:57

Kevin,

Thanks for this. You never fail to disappoint. The descriptive quality of all your poems is vivid. You take the reader right to the event.

Keith

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raypool

Sun 21st Nov 2021 12:06

Sounds rather inspiring Greg! The Autumn is a nice time for reflections of all kinds. Unfortunately, we travelled via Sandown Park to visit my nephew last night who lives in Teddington, and we were well stuck in traffic for about three miles due to the rugby! (The royal parks have now closed Bushey Park to through traffic so we had to crawl to Kingston Bridge overtaken by smug cyclists! On the way home M3 there was a massive hold up on the smart motorway due to an accident. Happy days. Good to see live poetry going on again.

Ray

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Greg Freeman

Sun 21st Nov 2021 11:49

Sorry for offending any northern sensibilities, Ian! Not intended, of course. Thanks for reading, mate.

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Ian Whiteley

Sun 21st Nov 2021 11:29

the 'rugby' to which you refer is 'rugby union' despite southern bias it's not the only, nor even the best, 'rugby' played in this country. That, of course, would be 'rugby league' ?

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jennifer Malden

Sun 21st Nov 2021 10:51

Let's hope so! Very comforting and so well put and written as always. You never disappoint.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sun 21st Nov 2021 10:47

Thanks for the comment Brenda! Jennifer

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 21st Nov 2021 08:14

Better to die, I think Jennifer. Life is a story, stories are meant to have meaning, and a start, middle and an end. Without those things, it becomes a spreadsheet. I don't want to live a spreadsheet, no-one does.

J. x ❤❤

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julie callaghan

Sun 21st Nov 2021 07:53

Thanks for the likes and for the comment Stephen A. I will try.

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d.knape

Sun 21st Nov 2021 02:59

Now that I think about it
what I thought I thought
is not much of
a thought.
?

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 20th Nov 2021 22:43

Thank you, as always, Keith & Stephen for your kind & encouraging comments. ?
And for the likes Rudyard, Holden, Pete, & Brenda.

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keith jeffries

Sat 20th Nov 2021 20:04

Freed from the expectations that killed my soul.......these words are so powerful and contain a significance which afflicts so many people in today's world.
Thank you for this

Keith

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keith jeffries

Sat 20th Nov 2021 20:01

A poem of liberation.
Keith

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keith jeffries

Sat 20th Nov 2021 19:58

You write with a great passion identifying your soul as your real and true identity. You have or are perhaps passing through the experience of coming to know yourself, the inner self. This is an edifying process as it will be of assistance to you in your life and writing. I have read through a number of your poems which are impressive. You have the spirit of a writer and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Thank you for becoming a member of this site as you will be an inspiration to others.
Keith

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John Coopey

Sat 20th Nov 2021 19:47

Thanks for the Likes, Holden, Stephen A, Stephen G, Aisha and Jennifer.
My mate Bruce also remembers a delivery of concrete arriving just before knocking off time. We threw it down. British workmanship at its finest!

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 20th Nov 2021 17:25

Thank you for the like, Jennifer. No shame in that!

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jennifer Malden

Sat 20th Nov 2021 17:19

Have to confess used to go to occasional cricket matches either for one of the players or the teas! Jennifer

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Brenda Wells

Sat 20th Nov 2021 17:17

Lovely, there is just something so magical about meeting a fox, a really special moment. Thank you for sharing

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 20th Nov 2021 17:05

Thank you Stephen, Rudyard and Holden for the likes.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 20th Nov 2021 17:05

Nigel - thanks very much for the verse. I remember a teacher telling us "the first thing to learn is that it is a bad idea to be hit by a cricket ball". Rarely have truer words been spoken.

Thanks, Greg. My original line was "Garfield Sobers running up to bowl" but in fact Sobers never seemed to run. When he bowled fast, he, well "glided" is as good a word as any. It must have been wonderful to be there at Headingly. All I can say is that I would not have liked to face Bob Willis on that day. I am sure that just his look terrified most of the Australians.

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keith jeffries

Sat 20th Nov 2021 15:04

I read with growing interest your poem 1990. Somehow it was akin to reading something which resembled a literary frieze which left me wanting to meet and speak with the man with the black beard and Russian hat. He cuts an enigmatic figure. You possess a unique style of writing which is quite fascinating. At times it is disjointed but the reader is spurred on with renewed interest. I have read some of your work so far and look forward to more.

Thank you for this

Keith

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Candice Reineke

Sat 20th Nov 2021 14:50

An extremely important debate between two opposing views! ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 20th Nov 2021 13:27

Thanks Jennifer. I took a lot of pleasure rendering unexpected
service of various sorts, recalling the look on one lady's face,
after she "lost" her money in a recalcitrant parking meter that
refused to register its payment and she had approached me on
my patrol with her tale of woe, a clearly stressed law-abiding woman trying to do the right thing but failed by unforgiving
technology..
I took great pleasure in giving the meter a good thump that
saw it display an instant accurate reading. Her expression
varied between shock, disbelief and relief as I ambled away
on my patrol. Well, it wasn't all "sticks and stones", you know - and a sense of fun certainly helped! ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 20th Nov 2021 13:02

Paradoxically uplifting in a downbeat reflective way. There has
always been a certain melancholy in the soul in these islands
and this sees its expression in these evocative lines. That said,
I like to see November as a "glass half full" sort of month, with
nature quietly preparing for the renewal ahead.

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keith jeffries

Sat 20th Nov 2021 12:55

I am in absolute agreement
Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 20th Nov 2021 12:53

One of the pleasures of my career at the sharp end of London
policing back in the day was being expected to treat everyone
"irrespective of race, colour, creed or social position" just the same.
This suited me fine as it was always a question of being polite
at the outset and expecting the same in return. Anything from
one extreme to the other across the social spectrum didn't help the subject of my attentions. Take as you find - that always
went well. Class lies in the individual,, not in perceived wealth
or social status, with the small "Henry Higgins caveat" that
using the English language deserves proper respect! ?

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raypool

Sat 20th Nov 2021 12:35

Thank you so much Jennifer. This was bitter sweet as so close to the truth, and casting a big cloud - though as you see he was not unhappy feeling more or less in control. He became a much gentler man in the home - he could be a real handful before he got dementia.

Ray

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jennifer Malden

Sat 20th Nov 2021 10:47

Really loved the urbane urban fox! Je nifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 20th Nov 2021 10:20

November is the start of winter, and the earlier darkness is rather sinister and heavy with foreboding . We also li nk it to an approaching end, and most of my friends say it is their least favourite season. Beautifully sad and melancholy. Jennifer

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Greg Freeman

Sat 20th Nov 2021 10:08

Well played, Stephen. You're right, cricket is not in a good place just now. But some wonderful lines here, about the true spirit of the game ... 'Garfield Sobers gliding in to bowl' evokes so many good feelings. My 'I was there' memory is of the last day of the Headingley Test in 1981. Bloody hell, that's worth a poem, too!

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jennifer Malden

Sat 20th Nov 2021 10:03

Alwaysbetterand better. Found this really moving. 'a transitory tale of woe with nuggets of gold' could beautifully describe so many lives. Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 20th Nov 2021 09:57

Fantastic! Loved 'the staff would swarm........., so well rendered. The police in those days were considered friends by most people, and often did much more than just their duty. Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 20th Nov 2021 09:49

Lovely! Kindly ironic. Really admire you and Jason who write poems for their in laws! Probably he was happer 'running the show, going to meet his friends' etc. Only problem perhaps when wanted to go AWOL. Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 20th Nov 2021 09:41

Thanks Holden, Rudyard and Jed for the likes!

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Candice Reineke

Sat 20th Nov 2021 01:41

I appreciate the kind words, Holden! ??

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Nigel Astell

Sat 20th Nov 2021 01:13

It is okay
to be yourself
inside your poem
only those reading
are let in.

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Nigel Astell

Sat 20th Nov 2021 00:47

Shiny polished cannon ball
spinning right at you
a don't hit hurts
I say old chap
that's simply not cricket!

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jennifer Malden

Fri 19th Nov 2021 17:50

Thanks Stephen G. this really happened and I had met many foxes before, but usually trotting busily somewhere, with 'no time to stop and stare'. This one surprised me by staying so relaxed!
Thanks again, jennifer

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 19th Nov 2021 17:46

I love this poem, Jennifer. It warms the heart.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 19th Nov 2021 17:44

The game of cricket is, quite rightly, taking a bit of a pasting at the moment. But memories still remain; here is one of them.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 19th Nov 2021 17:29

Thank you, Kelvin.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 19th Nov 2021 17:16

Agree with the general sentiment, Hugh, although 'cesspit of sleaze' is a bit strong (Poetic licence - how do you apply for one?). Most MPs do a decent job.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 19th Nov 2021 17:10

An audacious and optimistic poem. Great work.

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