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Stephen Gospage

Tue 29th Dec 2020 15:31

A genuinely moving poem.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 29th Dec 2020 15:22

Cheers, Jeff. All the best for the New Year.

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trevor homer

Tue 29th Dec 2020 14:50

You may not have heard of Rick, but he and his cardigan are stalwarts of black country poetry slams and Brum Radio poetry. You can't take everything seriously and besides, it's harder to be funny than it is to be serious, poetically speaking.
Have a good one. Ray and Aviva

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 29th Dec 2020 14:28

I've enjoyed the choice of poems from this source and can only wish
the very best for the future - for himself and the poems he's yet to
write..

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Michael Kwack

Tue 29th Dec 2020 14:09

Shifa, Ghazala, Aviva,
Thank you all
for liking, and hitting the like.
--Michael

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Michael Kwack

Tue 29th Dec 2020 14:03

Quite right.
I think I will rise and raise a glass to toast
to all the eternal,
and the going and coming.
Thank you again Paul.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 29th Dec 2020 13:52

Snowdrift window brings warm hellos
in doing so waves heartbreaks goodbye.

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Michael Kwack

Tue 29th Dec 2020 12:58

Thank you Paul
for dropping in and lines off here,
letting me feel welcomed back
from months of vacation.

M. (A.G.)

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raypool

Tue 29th Dec 2020 12:56

Thanks for the likes Trevor and Julie, and for putting it into words Tony.

Ray

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raypool

Tue 29th Dec 2020 12:53

Hi Trevor. It is true that on a stage props are vital, and the intellectual hanging woolly thing is vital - that goes back many decades. I must confess I had a thing about suede waistcoats for reading poetry, but it's really an affectation. I like the tribute aspect of this - but a Xmas sweater is never better, and as for the Matt Baker squeaky toy style - no thanks.

Prepare for a happy new year. Ray

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Philipos

Tue 29th Dec 2020 11:33


Hi Aisha and thanks for commenting on the Rusting Barge.

It gave me an opportunity of visiting your site and I enjoyed the sincerity detailed in your work.

I hope we will be seeing much more from your electronic pen.

Blessings.

P

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julie callaghan

Tue 29th Dec 2020 09:55

No Hugh! You must always pick up sh1t
To stop another accidentally stepping in it
? thanks for bringing a smile.

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julie callaghan

Tue 29th Dec 2020 09:39

Thanks for the likes and the comments.

Here is my wish for twenty twenty one
Soon of covid news there will be none
Soon the virus will be history, long gone
Soon the vaccine rollout will all be done
Soon the Coronavirus battle will be won

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John Coopey

Tue 29th Dec 2020 08:05

Thanks for the Likes, Aviva, Aisha and Paul.

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Erin Nicole

Tue 29th Dec 2020 07:12

Marcus,
You have the gift of subtlety in your writing and I think you should continue to post. I enjoy your work. You’re talented. Keep going ! ?????☺️

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Hugh

Tue 29th Dec 2020 06:44

She will read this from up above,
And cherish your words of true love.

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Shifa Maqba

Tue 29th Dec 2020 05:30

Paul, it's always a delight to read your comments. Thank you for the lovely poetry too!

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J.D. Bardo

Tue 29th Dec 2020 01:44

thank-you for the likes everyone, and for the comment Keith, so appreciated.

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Hugh

Tue 29th Dec 2020 01:03

Hopefully when 2020 is done,
2021 will bring lots of fun.

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Mark McCray

Mon 28th Dec 2020 23:33

No problem, Ms. Nicole. Appreciate the feedback.

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keith jeffries

Mon 28th Dec 2020 23:00

Trevor,

Thanks for your comments on 28 December. They are always a source of encouragement when it comes from a poet such as yourself.

Happy New Year
Keith

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 28th Dec 2020 21:09

Keith I answered something similar privately (without the living in the Middle East part of it)

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keith jeffries

Mon 28th Dec 2020 21:04

John,

Thank you for this poem which resonates with me after living and working in the Middle East for nearly ten years. It felt a strong sense of outrage as it is clearly barbaric in the extreme and quite unnecessary in today's world. Yet it is the religion to which the slaughter adheres. Religion can be very cruel in other ways too.

Keith

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John Marks

Mon 28th Dec 2020 19:52

Thank YOU dear Keith. I wish you joy in the new year.

“When you do things from your soul, you feel a river moving in you, a joy.”
― Rumi

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keith jeffries

Mon 28th Dec 2020 19:46

A poem which exudes determination and perseverance. One which I think we can all relate to.
Thank you for this
Keith

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 28th Dec 2020 18:49

Happy holidays Kimberly! Thanks for stopping by. I wish you a year of abundant energy and prolific writing! ?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Mon 28th Dec 2020 18:18

An "epiphany filled journey" is the greatest gift of life. So glad your soul is tuned in. It's an honor to be dancing in the light with you Po. Shine on my friend. ?

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d.knape

Mon 28th Dec 2020 17:36

that's me all right.
signed,
Troublesome Lump

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julie callaghan

Mon 28th Dec 2020 16:59

Thanks to everyone for the likes and kind comments.

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Tony Hill

Mon 28th Dec 2020 15:36

Really like this one, Ray. Tony

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 28th Dec 2020 14:22

The cardigan was cardi-gone!
What a knit-wit

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trevor homer

Mon 28th Dec 2020 14:13

I don't visit the sire as often as I used to Keith, but I always look for your work to offer a constant reminder of what sublime thought can create when put into words. Thank you for your constancy.

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keith jeffries

Mon 28th Dec 2020 14:08

John,

A powerful poem which has truth at its core. There is a good deal of wisdom here.
Thank you for this

Keith

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Mon 28th Dec 2020 13:35

There might be some for which this stays a fact
But I think very few end up like that
Far more find brand new good times in a world so wide
Without the troublesome lump still at their side.
??

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raypool

Mon 28th Dec 2020 13:34

Yes Greg I did the tweaking as I thought your points were well made as always, and thanks for them. It was tricky dicky to convey the actual experience into a cohesive line or two! Another one for the book one day I hope.

Thanks Graham, I do count that experience as a one worth having. Poets I think need to be observers and on the front line in whatever subject they choose to portray. The musical element in backing comedians was always minimal, often just a song that closed their act and a play on and play off.

Paul, that's a pretty good idea - all histories should be recorded as close to the truth as possible. A unique character could always be awkward on many levels but justifiably loved. Thanks for looking in.

Ray

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 28th Dec 2020 11:52

Brilliant mate, sounds about right!

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 28th Dec 2020 11:50

We did just this at Trafford Centre yesterday Greg! Glad you like my Pastor Mick poem, incredible work they're doing ?

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 28th Dec 2020 11:48

Like it Stephen, interesting thoughts. Thanks for your comment on my poem Pastor Mick, inspiring men indeed, cheers Jeff

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John Coopey

Mon 28th Dec 2020 10:04

No team has lost more points in the last 10 minutes than us, Graham. We’d be running away with it if we hadn’t. And 2 points in the last 12 is Sheffield United stuff.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 28th Dec 2020 09:56

Christmas Eve is the clue?

It sounds like you got socks JC, some of us got paracetamol! Blessed relief. Now if we could only stop gifting two points away at closing time I'd be a lot happier!

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John Coopey

Mon 28th Dec 2020 09:39

My response to your opening comment, Paul, about a deal already having been done seems pertinent now. I was wrong about the timing of the announcement which I expected in the New Year. I’d naively overlooked the value of Christmas as a blanket for burying scrutiny. The timing of the announcement, Christmas Eve, is the clue.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 28th Dec 2020 08:53

Thanks very much for your comments, Andy. Sorry to hear about more Zoom bombing incidents - there seemed to be a few at the beginning, but I had assumed that people had become more security-conscious, and that Zoom had stepped up their game, too. We've always been lucky so far in that regard at Woking. Good to hear that Stockport has been doing well - I've mentioned elsewhere about your anthologies. Interesting but worrying when you say that 'quite a few nights have stopped altogether'. Anecdotally I get that impression around London, too - or that some nights are just waiting for lockdown to end for good. I hope that techno-fear is not the reason - Zoom is really very easy to set up and operate, as you know yourself. It's a good way of keeping our poetry communities together.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 28th Dec 2020 08:45

Have you tweaked, Ray? That line in the final stanza reads fine now. Very enjoyable poem.

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deanfraserofficial@yahoo.com

Mon 28th Dec 2020 07:42

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 28th Dec 2020 00:30

Whilst I knew you were a musician, I didn’t pre-suppose that this piece was autobiographical in any way. It appears that it is.
A very complex, chaotic and difficult man, like many a comedian, the only one to make me nearly crash my car!
This is an intriguing snapshot Ray of the funniest one ever!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 27th Dec 2020 23:23

Sounds like a start of another poem Po. I wholeheartedly agree. Off into the wilderness we go! Abundant blessings to you my friend. ??

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Greg Freeman

Sun 27th Dec 2020 19:28

Great poem, Ray. Not sure you need that second line, though, and I wasn't quite certain what the third line in the final stanza meant. I'm nitpicking because this poem is so close to it. Will there be other poems about celebs that you brushed shoulders with, if not actually having to brush their shoulders? This is the way to go for you. Cover of you in a tuxedo?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 27th Dec 2020 19:10

That is a big wish Nicola and I pray it comes true sooner rather than later! ?

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Robert C Gaulke

Sun 27th Dec 2020 17:32

Cheers!

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