Hello Clare,
I am conscious that I seem to follow or precede many of Graham Sherwoods comments. I think we maybe are drawn to similar subjects and styles of writing.
I'm sure that Graham won't mind me saying that considering some of our previous differences it's refreshing to know that often we are on similar trajectories in respect of what we like.
Forgive me, it's merely an observation.
Regarding your poem to my mind it sums up the notion that every beautiful thing comes with some kind of pain, either sooner or later.
But then again life is beautiful.
âLet everything happen to you
Beauty and terror
Just keep going
No feeling is finalâ
â Rainer Maria Rilke
David
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Hi landi,
The still photo (I believe taken from Catch-22) only deepens the mystery of this.
One might conclude that you are identifying with Yossarians dilemma of being trapped in the futility of ridiculous rules, similar in some ways to being trapped within the genetics we inherit.
Always good to read and observe a writer that requires some thought.
David.
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A splendid poem, Naomi. Rhyming words, good flow, encouraging thoughts.
Comment is about BLOOM (blog)
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People fall in love even in the worst of times. The title & last line "Until the day they came" plus the selected poem descriptors (tyranny) & accompanying picture (the knock at the door) evoke creeping facism. Fervently hoping common sense and freedom will prevail. But we humans will always fall in love come what may! A poem that has a touch of hope and a large dollop of sorrow. Well done, Stephen.
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Tue 11th Feb 2025 09:56
Formidable, HĂ©lĂšne. And, you are right: the worm is turning, though not yet everywhere, thankfully.
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Thank you, Graham and Rolph. I'm glad that this poem stirs memories and gives rise to different interpretations. The last line could refer to various, and sometimes rather sinister, events.
And my sincere thanks to everyone who liked this poem.
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Thank you, RBK. I will look forward to reading your poem when it comes out.
Comment is about Forgive, Not Forget (blog)
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Beautiful poem Jonathan.
Let us hope there is time enough still.
David
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This is absolutely lovely Clare. A killer last verse!!
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Thank you all for reading my poem.
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Thanks for likes: Aisha, Red Brick Keshner & Naomi. đ đ
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Thank you so much Flyntland. I'm truly touched that the poem resonated with you on such a personal level, and that you see a connection to your beloved oak tree. That's the highest compliment a poem can receive â to connect with someone and evoke such meaningful feelings. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Naomi
Comment is about A LINDEN'S EMBRACE (blog)
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Mon 10th Feb 2025 14:09
Hello Stephen,
I love how your poem touches on the transient nature of youth and love, highlighting both the joy of a time without care and the inevitable changes that life brings. đ
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about The Day They Came (blog)
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Mon 10th Feb 2025 14:02
Thank you Naomi, Aisha, Uilleam and Red Brick Keshner for your like. Very nice of you.
Regards,
Rolph
Comment is about The World Poisoner (blog)
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Now that makes for a more corresponding connection than my poem of the same title which is more on a personal level and definitely not ready for public consumption in its present state. Been putting it off for quite a while and got a jolt reading your much more well composed one. đ·
Comment is about Forgive, Not Forget (blog)
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Graham, I felt the same way, but also thought the whole thing a bit clunky. I've edited it and rejigged some lines, so hopefully it now has a better flow. Thanks for commenting.
Comment is about Hostage to Love (blog)
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Love the first four lines especially
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Rolph. Thank you for such an intelligent and engaged response. To critique democracy is like a sin against the holy ghost in this secular culture.
Disobedience is the true foundation of liberty. The obedient must be slaves. Thoreau
Comment is about A VIEW of the NEW 1922 - 2022 (blog)
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Well this is intriguing! In fact it reminded me of our first start (my wife and me). We started with nothing at 19 and 18 respectively, a succession of flats/rooms.
I like this piece's brevity and the cliff-hanger last line too!
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And now, fascists, colonialists, including so-called 'Christians' want to take us back to those good old times.
Comment is about Dickens Said It All (blog)
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Thank you, Trevor. I'm sure I will always remember my first day at school and all the early stuff. But at some point middle age will start to get hazy. And what was the name of that...?
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A tender, heartwarming poem, Ralph. Thank you.
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Thank you very much, Rolph. Yes, true forgiveness requires healing and reconciliation. Otherwise, the old wounds just continue to fester, as we have seen all around the world.
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Very moving and effective, John. Sixty-two twice over - far too young.
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Thanks for the Likes, Redbrick and Tom.
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Uilleam, absolutely! It's humbling to think about how much we don't know, despite all our advancements. The "arrow of time" debate is a perfect exampleâhow we confidently march forward in time, yet can't fully grasp what it even is. Philosophers and scientists have been wrestling with these questions for centuries, and yet, reality, existence, and consciousness remain some of the most profound mysteries. It's almost comical how we pretend to have it all figured out when, in truth, we're just scratching the surface. Here's to embracing the wonder and the questions!
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Robert Mann, thank you for your words! I'm truly glad it resonated with you. Your support means a lot.
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Flyntland, thank you so much for your incredibly kind words! I'm truly touched that the poem resonated with you so deeply.
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Uilleam, magic stuff, indeed! That cocoa powder sounds like pure nostalgia. Thereâs something so special about those simple, homemade recipesâno additives, just real ingredients and good memories. Your dadâs drink sounds like the kind of comfort that canât be replaced by anything store-bought. Cheers to the real stuff and the warmth it brings!
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HĂ©lĂšne, I'm glad you liked the poem! Thank you.
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Graham, thank you for your words and your movie recommendation!
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"Derek disagreed" extremely clever Jonathan.
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Love this! Brilliant Derek. I think Einstein would approve.
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Thanks for your likes and comments:
Red Brick Keshner
Tom Doolan
Holden Moncrieff
K. Lynn
Rolph David
Naomi
Comment is about Haiku for 2025 [No. 9. Testicles] (blog)
Original item by Uilleam Ă Ceallaigh
Thanks for your comment, Rolph.
A. It depends on what you mean by âmeditativeâ!
B. a âseasonalâ reference is no longer regarded as necessary in modern English Haiku.
May I refer you to the OE reference Dictionary, in accordance with which, my âtraditionalâ use of two metaphors does involve the ânaturalâ worldâŠ.a ghastly scene indeed on which to meditate! đ
For the sake of clarity: my metaphors refer to a failed politician turned gossip columnist, who evidently regards some human lives (those of Palestinians) as being of less value than others.
No offence taken!đ
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Sun 9th Feb 2025 13:00
Thank you Marla and Rolph! I think, the idea that the macro is depicted/replicated in the micro has really captivated my mind. The cyclic nature of things (set to continue unless the learnings are implemented) is scary at the same time reassuring. It is quite mind bending to even attempt to understand the grand scale!
Comment is about Egocentricity (blog)
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Your poem is both strong and serene,
and could also describe my much-loved Oak Tree which stands, strong and dependable, in my garden.
I planted it about 35 years ago and it has rewarded me with its shade and ambiance. "A silent solace" indeed.
There are so many phrases that resonate with me that I felt I ought to stick to one, otherwise I would just reprint the whole poem.
A beautifully written poem that only you can write. Thank you
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Loving the last line, bringing together polarised ends of human experience. đ·
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On ânot to the swift â- Thanks kindly HĂ©lĂšne đđ»đđ·most definitely includes the poets of our contemporary generation/s đ
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Thanks kindly HĂ©lĂšne đđ»đđ·most definitely includes the poets of our contemporary generation/s đ
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On ânot to the swiftâ - Thanks Mike! Good to know what works in any given poem. You are much appreciated đđ»đđ·
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Thanks Mike! Good to know what works in any given poem. You are much appreciated đđ»đđ·
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Hey Rolph,
I canât tell you how much it means to me to hear your thoughts on the poem. You really captured the essence of what I was trying to expressâthe struggle of caring for someone else while hiding your own feelings. Itâs not always easy to put those emotions into words, so knowing it resonated with you like this is really special.
I truly appreciate you taking the time to reflect so deeply on it.
Take care,
Naomi
Comment is about THE CRACK IN THE SHELL (blog)
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Thanks, Maria. Because light takes time to travel, everything you see is - by a fraction of a fraction of a second - in the past. So you are the centre of - for you the only - present.
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Thankyou Graham and Rolph and to those who have sent likes.
People can graduate from little lies to huge ones.
The trick is seeing the small ones before it's too late and the accumalative product of the lie has created seemingly unstoppable power and wealth.
Calling it out is the thing, even then look at what is going on in the world right now.
David RL Moore
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Tom Doolan
Tue 11th Feb 2025 16:02
Excellent work Naomi. đ
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