On "piecemeal" - Thanks DavidRLM, that is so true! And that something however little or significant is sometimes the only thing we have of the other person. Much appreciated, as always 🙏🏻🕊️🌷

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Original item by David RL Moore

Thanks DavidRLM, that is so true! And that something however little or significant is sometimes the only thing we have of the other person. Much appreciated, as always 🙏🏻🕊️🌷

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Original item by Red Brick Keshner

Hi RBK,

Poetry can be smoke and mirrors, but always there is something of the author in the words.

David

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Original item by Red Brick Keshner

Life can only be understood backwards,but it must be lived forwards...

Comment is about Hindsight's light (blog)

Original item by Keletso

…this was birthed of a thought (sometime in 2013) on poetry and interactions on poems and poets 🙏🏻🕊

Comment is about piecemeal (blog)

Original item by Red Brick Keshner

Just a quick one.

they are trying to force homosexuality upon me. I am a Hetero Sexual whom is not even bi curious.

it is a way that the authorities insult people. they have targeted my children to try to use them as gagging tools.

now they are raping me under what is known as 'still.'

It is something that The School of Signals warned the public of back during the war in Afghanistan and I am wondering if the CO of The School of Signals is still alive after giving the whole world tip off.

It is also something that is mentioned and referred to by The Geto Boys - Track called 'Still.'

It can send you insane. What we are dealing with is alien tech at cosmic level that is sometimes allowed to our security services. Spook is arrived at by knowing that MI5 etc do collate INT on a THz Frequency that we cannot see. It is like we are on BBC1 and they have access to all channels on the TV. It is something that NASA too are trying to tip the public off about as they talk of a possible Convergence.

If you have ever seen a rabbit mating, they do it so quick - like a pneumatic drill. That is how I am experiencing being raped.

I know we are having cosmic inquiry, my fear is that our original labtechs are raping me to silence my testimony of what is happening to peoples all over this Terra Formed DNA Knocking shop.

This is often why former SF wollers end up taking thier whole families life before thier own.

I was just a regular guy from an Estate that Thatcher Labelled CHAV but for the past three decades since leaving the armed forces I have been constantly harrassed and assaulted.

They use excuses but, I am aware of former members of 264 SASSIGS whom know of what I talk who tell me, it is not the Operational Tours that have them with PTSD, but being raped under selection process.

They will do anything for you within reason and are brave, but looking back, it is hard for them to discuss the raping they often go through as part of selection.

I doubt bill or david stirling had such practise in mind when forming the tree jumpers of Borneo or the Long Range Desert Group.

But for whom is now in power, you can understand why there is a steep rise of men committing suicide. Over the past five decades there has been the destruction and degredation of every male dominated organisation and industry in the UK, noted by the international community and The United Nations.

Inter Stellar know, and our Earth Authorities are scared.

They have been seen.

I am up at Lossiemouth, where the Typhoons are scrambled for UFO chaseaways.

Comment is about Not Least By I (blog)

Original item by ZTK Space

Thank you so much, Rolph, for such an insightful comment, and for taking the time to interpret the poem so deeply, I'm truly honoured! 😊

Comment is about (Mis)aligned... (blog)

Original item by Holden Moncrieff

Thanks for likes: John C & Marla Joy 👍

Comment is about Pickleball Man (blog)

Original item by Tom Doolan

Many thanks for the kind comments Helene. I recently revisited this one myself and thought it worthwhile reposting.

Comment is about Who Are You? (blog)

Original item by Rob J Mann

I joined Write Out Loud in 2020.

*I'm away for quite some time*

- 'Thank you all for helping Gaza' -

Comment is about The first statue of The Darkborn (blog)

Original item by Auracle

I swear blind I have never been to places. Until Our Gert shows me photos of me there!

Comment is about Nostalgia (blog)

Original item by Trevor Alexander

Thank you Rolph for the kind comments.

Comment is about Split Personalities (blog)

Original item by Rick Varden

Binte, A city's shame, a silent call. Well said. Marla

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Original item by Binte Afroz

Chris, I'll have to read this a few more time to better understand, but it is good. Marla

Comment is about Miracles (blog)

Original item by Chris Armstrong

Small things irritate us, Big ones we ignore. so true. Marla

Comment is about Egocentricity (blog)

Original item by pallavitryingthings

Mike, very touching. Marla

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Original item by Mike Bartram

Stuart, I like this one a lot. It reminds me of a phrase I heard recently, "wabi sabi" which means to embrace simplicity and imperfections of life to be more content and happy. (which is worth a lot). Marla

Comment is about The Life We Should Lead. (blog)

Original item by Stuart Vanner

Trevor, I really like this one. I think nostalgia can be good thing, but the saying is true, you can't go back. The now is where we reside. Good job, Marla

Comment is about Nostalgia (blog)

Original item by Trevor Alexander

Hi Leonidas,
Your poem is deeply moving. The imagery of waking up to confront a world still asleep powerfully captures the struggle for change. I can feel the frustration of trying to awaken others while they remain oblivious. The journey from confusion to clarity, even when the world stays blind to it, resonates with the challenges we face in making others see what we know to be true. It's a strong reminder of the persistent battle for understanding and transformation. Thank you for this thought-provoking piece.
Regards,
Rolph

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Original item by leonidas kazantheos

Dear pallavitryingthings,

The way you juxtapose our trivial irritations with the cosmic scale of existence is powerful, highlighting how small and fleeting our individual concerns are in the grand scheme of things. The recurring theme of overthinking, overaspiring, and overrated self-importance speaks to a universal truth we often overlook. It’s a humbling reminder to step back and consider our place in a much bigger world.
Great job!
Cheerio,
Rolph

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Original item by pallavitryingthings

Dear Holden,

Your poem "(Mis)aligned..." creates a powerful image of feeling out of sync with the world around you. The tension between clinging to past values and the need to find purpose in a rapidly changing world is palpable. I love the contrast you draw between innocence and the more "counterfeit" aspects of modern life. The yearning for alignment—both personally and within society—is something that many can relate to, especially in times of uncertainty. The imagery and choice of words pull the reader into a reflective, almost disorienting space, which makes the poem feel deeply introspective.
I love it. Thanks for sharing.
Regards,
Rolph

Comment is about (Mis)aligned... (blog)

Original item by Holden Moncrieff

Dear Flyntland,

The way you bring her (the wild country crow) to life with such personality—fearless, confident, and cunning—is truly engaging. I love how you highlight the mutual understanding and respect between you two, framed by the subtle exchange of food and protection. The communication between you and Corra, though unconventional, feels incredibly authentic. Your portrayal of her intelligence and independence, along with the tenderness you offer in return, makes this poem both charming and evocative.
Thank you for it!
Regards,
Rolph

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Original item by Flyntland

Dear Stephen,

The way you balance the possibility of forgiveness with the necessity of remembering is poignant and reflective. You capture the deep scars of conflict—emotional, physical, and societal—and the weight that history carries. I especially appreciate how you highlight that true healing cannot come without acknowledging the past, no matter how painful. It’s a sobering and necessary reflection on the importance of memory and the costs of forgetting.
Fantastic words!
Cheerio,
Rolph

Comment is about Forgive, Not Forget (blog)

Original item by Stephen Gospage

Hi Stuart,
The questions you raise about pleasure, satisfaction, and the pursuit of happiness resonate deeply. I particularly appreciate how you challenge the notion that happiness comes from wealth or possessions, instead pointing to the value of living modestly and embracing the unknown. It’s a refreshing reminder that true fulfillment may come not from what we have, but from how we live and the freedom we find in simplicity.

Great job!
Regards,
Rolph

Comment is about The Life We Should Lead. (blog)

Original item by Stuart Vanner

Dear Flyntland,

Your comment about Naomi's poem really struck a chord with me, especially in light of how much women were once made responsible for, both within their homes and in society. Beyond what you mentioned, women were often blamed for a whole host of societal issues—like the reputation of their families, the moral conduct of their communities, and even economic stability. If a child went astray or a family faced hardship, the woman’s role was always scrutinised. It’s heartbreaking to think about how women were held accountable for things beyond their control, like a husband's infidelity or the actions of others in the family. And even worse, when women themselves were victims of sexual violence, they were often blamed.

Thankfully, these times have hopefully become a little better, and there has been some progress in how we view women’s roles. Though not perfect, the shift in attitudes over time brings hope that we’re moving towards a more equal and just society. Naomi’s poem is a reflection of that struggle, and your reflection on it adds another important layer to the conversation.
Take care,
regards,
Rolph

Comment is about THE CRACK IN THE SHELL (blog)

Original item by Naomi

Dear Naomi,

You’ve captured so powerfully the struggle of caring for someone else while silencing your own emotions to protect them. The way you describe walking on eggshells and building walls to shield your true feelings is so vivid—it made me feel the emotional weight of that experience. The tenderness and burden of constantly tending to someone else’s moods, only to feel your own heart wither in silence, is devastating. I can feel the ache behind the words, and your poem paints a picture of the exhaustion that comes with losing yourself in someone else’s needs.
Great job!
Take care,
Rolph

Comment is about THE CRACK IN THE SHELL (blog)

Original item by Naomi

Dear David,

The way you explore how identities and symbols can be manipulated to conceal darker truths is both chilling and thought-provoking. The imagery you use, especially the comparison of a cross to a Hakenkreuz (swastika), powerfully illustrates the corruption of what was once pure. The poem feels like a warning about the danger of surface-level respectability hiding corruption beneath. For me it's a haunting and timely reflection on the lies we build upon, and their inevitable consequences.
Great! 😊
Regards,
Rolph

Comment is about One thing becomes another (blog)

Original item by David RL Moore

Hi Ralph,
What a great poetic reflection on love, loss, and the quiet joy and pain of revisiting past relationships.
Its emotional depth and rich, nostalgic imagery make it a compelling exploration of the human experience across time.
Thanks for sharing!
Regards,
Rolph

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Original item by Ralph Dartford

Hello Uilleam,
Thank you for your comment.
Have a nice weekend.
Take care,
regards,
Rolph

Comment is about The World Poisoner (blog)

Original item by Rolph David

Dear Rick,

The way you juxtapose contrasting traits and moods within a single persona paints a vivid picture of the internal conflicts and contradictions we all carry. The repetition of “innumerable characteristics” emphasises just how multifaceted we are, reminding us that identity is never simple or static. It’s a powerful reflection on the fluid, unpredictable nature of who we are.
Great job!
Regards,
Rolph

Comment is about Split Personalities (blog)

Original item by Rick Varden

Dear John,

What a thought-provoking piece that critiques the tension between democracy and mediocrity. Your use of Ovid’s quote highlights a deep disillusionment with the modern world’s focus on greed and superficiality, while contrasting it with lofty ideals of liberty and freedom. The poem’s biting tone and vivid imagery make it clear that you see through the hollow promises of contemporary society, urging a reflection on what true freedom means.
Regards,
Rolph

Comment is about A VIEW of the NEW 1922 - 2022 (blog)

Original item by John E Marks

Dear Uilleam,

Your Haiku for 2025 [No. 9. Testicles] reads more like a senryu than a traditional haiku. While haiku typically focus on nature and seasonal imagery, senryu explore human nature, often with satire or dark humour—exactly what your poem does so effectively. The sharp critique of media figures and Islamophobia, combined with the blunt humour of Talking Testicles, makes this a biting and timely commentary rather than a meditative reflection on nature.
A bold and thought-provoking piece! I love it.
Take care and no offence!
Regards,
Rolph

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Original item by Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Dear Hélène,

Your Song for Democracy is powerful and deeply moving. You beautifully capture courage, unity, and the strength of compassion. I love how you remind us that beneath fear and hate, we all seek kindness and connection. Thank you for sharing your inspiring voice!
Regards,
Rolph

Comment is about Song for Democracy, in 2 parts (blog)

Original item by Hélène

A simply beautiful poem, Eduardo. Can't wait to see the movie, Graham. Check out this video of Bob & Joan (Bob choosing to sing melodically instead of gravelly. I like both versions of his voice).
https://youtu.be/YVWouDqZp0E?feature=shared

And here's a 2022 interview w/ Dylan. What a wizard with words; free flowing poetry.
https://www.reddit.com/r/bobdylan/comments/zq1vox/new_dylan_interview_bob_dylan_on_musics_golden/?rdt=42601

Comment is about Bob Dylan (blog)

Original item by Eduardo

For reading and liking

My grateful thanks go to Tom - Stephen G and Aisha
also to Holden - Yanma and Naomi.

Comment is about CORRA (blog)

Original item by Flyntland

A compelling poem, Rob. I read it twice to let the words sink in. Well done!

Comment is about Who Are You? (blog)

Original item by Rob J Mann

This is very original Helene! I think the message is "listen" G

Comment is about Song for Democracy, in 2 parts (blog)

Original item by Hélène

Anything Dylan related (Bob or Thomas) is up my street! If you haven’t seen the new film go!!
I like the subtle shift in this poem.

Comment is about Bob Dylan (blog)

Original item by Eduardo

Thanks Roplh,
I've been watching the Trump-Musk omnishambles unfold with increasing horror. 'Reform' it says, on the rocket.
We in the UK have our own 'Reform'; which is in fact, a business, posing as a political party; aiding and abetting the war-criminals and kleptocrats in our own government, currently destroying UK democracy and freedom of speech, by persecuting Jews and journalists who are opposed to genocide.

Comment is about The World Poisoner (blog)

Original item by Rolph David

Thankyou Graham,

Many thanks to those who have given likes.

David

Comment is about One thing becomes another (blog)

Original item by David RL Moore

Indeed, Graham. Three years of tragedy and sacrifice and so much comes to depend on this moron and his bunch of freeloading cronies.

And my thanks to everyone who liked this poem. Forgiveness will come, though not quite as quickly as the Pope seems to think it should.

Comment is about Forgive, Not Forget (blog)

Original item by Stephen Gospage

Yes, to the streets & to the courtrooms once again we go.

Comment is about We Rise (blog)

Original item by Hélène

Thanks for extra likes: Holden, Aisha & Annabelle 👍

Comment is about In Your Arms (blog)

Original item by Tom Doolan

So many good words in this!

Comment is about Return to Waterloo (edited) (blog)

Original item by Ralph Dartford

These words stood out

‘ they profess their own enlightenment with eyes as cold as stone’

Comment is about One thing becomes another (blog)

Original item by David RL Moore

Thanks so much...2 Grandchildren now by Rachel's older sister (both adorable!!) I am very lucky!

Comment is about 'Baby Bear' (blog)

Original item by Mike Bartram

Welcome back! Ukraine faces another serious threat now the Trumpster is around again

Comment is about Forgive, Not Forget (blog)

Original item by Stephen Gospage

Thank you for your kind words Flyntland. It means a lot to me that the poem spoke to you.
You're right. It's funny how those old ideas about women still stick around.
Even if nobody says them out loud anymore.
I appreciate you bringing that up.

Comment is about THE CRACK IN THE SHELL (blog)

Original item by Naomi

Wow, Thank you Marla☺️

Comment is about THE CRACK IN THE SHELL (blog)

Original item by Naomi

With all due respect, H.,
I've not lost hope and
I'm not crawling into the cave of despair.
I'm fighting to make things better.

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Original item by Hélène