Unsure
Tired and lonesome in this cold shield
The crops have dried yet it is damp in this field
A hasty man lets out a long awaited sigh
There is a great ugly spider climbing up my thigh
The wind is windy yet the sun is cold
The walls i live within is riddled with mould
I try to stay warm yet all of my jumpers are wet
There are no coats hung up, there are no blankets left
Splatters of melted butter are stuck to my plate,
From the crumpets I ate on an earlier date
The dishwasher needs emptying, the towels aren’t drying
It is too cold to open my windows, there is no point in trying
The sun is shining yet my home is dark
I think this poem has lost its spark
Russell Jacklin
Fri 2nd May 2025 12:44
The spark is fine, I can assure you that most people will recognise your words but you are the one who strung them together so eloquently. As one Peterborough born poet to another (I still live here) well done