Hi Ann;

Many thanks for spotting the typo's on 'the other side'. I occasionally do miss them (advantage of my disabilities)and have corrected them..

I will have a think about the 6th stanza, but thank you for thinking it's a top poem! lol xx

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Hi Ann;

Many thanks for spotting the typo's.. I occasionally do miss them (advantage of my disabilities)and have corrected them..

I will have a think about the 6th stanza, but thank you for thinking it's a top poem! lol xx

Comment is about The Other Side (Space Poem) (blog)

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no it was was-War and no bleedin PEACE! I remain yours with a blindfold on and earplugs in-in case you go to hordio-later Lovely-xx

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Joke explanation for she who has been too cosseted-or is that corseted? soldier tells comrade he would rather be in bed with a book and a big busty blonde than on the battlefield-his buddy astounded that he even thinks about taking a book to bed when he has more than enough to occupy mind-(and body)remarks that the book must be a very good read that it distracts him from carnal activities-the first soldier replys who said I could read...it was supposed to impress the naughty lady....gerrit? PHEW!xx rsvp? not till me musskels bulge!

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I like this Andy. I'm not sure if the 6th verse is a bit of overkill? Just for me maybe. But as you sometimes say - top poem! xx

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I nearly fell off the monkey bars in laughter at your amazing humour! indeed a stick of 'Blacky' rock-with the name Gemma all the way through-it shall remain unsucked!now my musskels need to bulge!

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in your case sweet feline,the delete button shall only gathereth dust-f'rever! get yer ski,s ready! yours stiffly(all over)Stef on a stick-xx thou shall never gettereth on my wickly moor bahtat-enjoy your day dear friend.(monkey bars are calling-wonder if they sell jungle joose...tee hee)

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Lynn,expect a stick shaped parcel very soon-ta Mrs D-Stef-xx

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Thanks Freda for commenting on-'Shes back'best regards Stef.

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lovely freda... i think you change the beat in the poem just right on the last stanza.. top stuff x

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Although I did think 'blanket was a bit of a cliche.

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How right you are Ray. I will remove the extraneous syllable pronto.

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It is good, I can imagine the hoover and I like the idea of the woods as a safe haven. For rhythm's sake, should be "defoliating drains" surely.

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Lovely Freda-especially the last verse-thank you-Stef.

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I like this Mike. It is certainly true that innocence can stem from new generations not enslaved to the past...so long as they can escape the old teachings and bigotry.

Are the final lines and allusion to 2001 A Space Odyssey...not sure as it has been a while since I saw the film/thought of the Arthur C Clarke.

Certainly in that film one of the main themes is the evolution of man, from primitive to higher being. This is something that echos through this poem in its own way.

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Thank you Ann for comments on "Space". I think it is you that are kind! Tootsies are sore so I'm off to beddybies with pain killers. xx

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I really enjoyed this John.

Love the manner of the nostaglia.

The love for something missed that you simultaneously knew was flawed and a royal pain the rear.

A real narrative.

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I like this Dave, enjoyed your read of it in Wigan as well.

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I'd never go anywhere near so far Haha...but I simply don't like the colour irrespective.

Funny...a smile raiser :)

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thars put a pooim on fer thee lass!

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being a southerner means-you drink tea with your little finger lifted-you eat cucumber sandwhiches-you pronounce your h,s! you would,nt be seen dead in a flat cap-you dont take ferrets to bed-you say yah instead of yeah! you don,t fart in public-you feel as though you are slumming when you talk to rough Rossendalers-lol! you come on here wiv yer fancy ways n airs n gravies-lol!! you don,t laugh at sad northeners who try ter make yer laff-go on Lady Lynn-put down the bone china and grin! I,m even bowing as I write this comment to your Ladyship-bless her n may all southerners sail in her-one way! haha-cheers me owd mukker-scruffy likeable northern loon-xx-xx-the kisses were aimed at yer boots-yer majesty! lol!

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My grandmother actually learned Russian in her 60's in order to be able to recite Pushkin to me as a child.

She said no westerner could ever understand the beauty of his phrasing and rhymes unless they understood Russian. My grandmother was a remarkable woman...I think she is the reason I try to write poetry to this day...and she's been dead these thirty years.

Thank you for the insight into writing in two languages. Fascinating.

Jx

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aw ta Lynn-somebody likes me-even if they are a southerner!! ta chuk-Stef-xx

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oh Lynn!I was absolutely distraught about your comments ruining my masterpiece....HAHAHA!!..hey girly-you can say what the flip you want to me no probs-stop being a worrier! no-my mad half hour came to an end-was only for a larf-hows the plates of meat love? must be so painful-let it recover properly,don,t go jogging just yet-and leave the penny farthing in the garage-tee hee-catch you later chickamungus-yours trooly-Likeable Loon(that one got no votes-grr-haha)love-Stef-xx-B-xx

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Thank you for your observations on my poem.It was mercury the element...well spotted, de-capitalised now. It was a reference to 'fluids' always finding their own level through the topography...finding the quickest route down, the 'line of least resistance' until it pools...into a small 'moon' that mirrors the large moon in the sky. the idea of mercury was also reference to the colour and the effect that, as they warm up, most (all?) fluids run faster and faster. Mercury always seems to be a speedy little fluid...even though it is a metal.I still think, as Isobel said, it's missing one more line now, I think I've edited it too hard and lost a certain degree of oblique reference to what the guilt was all about. I was trying to capture what I think the French refer to as 'post coital tristesse'...or something.

Post coitum omne animal triste est —"After sexual intercourse every animal is sad".


Glad you liked it.

:)

Jx

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It was mercury the element...well spotted, de-capitalised now. It was a reference to 'fluids' always finding their own level through the topography...finding the quickest route down, the 'line of least resistance' until it pools...into a small 'moon' that mirrors the large moon in the sky. the idea of mercury was also reference to the colour and the effect that, as they warm up, most (all?) fluids run faster and faster. Mercury always seems to be a speedy little fluid...even though it is a metal.

I still think, as Isobel said, it's missing one more line now, I think I've edited it too hard and lost a certain degree of oblique reference to what the guilt was all about. I was trying to capture what I think the French refer to as 'post coital tristesse'.

Post coitum omne animal triste est —"After sexual intercourse every animal is sad".

...or something.

Glad you liked it.

:)

Jx

Comment is about Sometimes (extended rhyming mix) (blog)

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I like the way you tie the two spaces together. Space is quite scary - inner and outer! xx

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Thank you so much Lynn - Love Visits from Another Planet. You are very kind! Hope the tootsies are OK! xx

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I like the idea of this, Ann, wish I'd thought of something similar! I like your poem too, inspirational... :) xx

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When I read your poem, Carole, I naturally had to do some research to see what this Fibonacci sequence and poetry was... I find it fascinating and will try it when I have some time.

I love raspberries too - reminds me of summertime, picking them off the bushes in France as a little girl : )

Your poem is very sensual, and says so much in so few words.


p.s. I give you an A+

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Spoken like a true Yorkshire man! Very funny John - at least you ate it...
It's hilarious when people pile their plates high with stuff they can't possibly eat. I can remember doing that when I was much younger - tomatoes bouncing off all over the floor. I've learnt to be more modest with age. Would love to see this performed. x

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Very funny, hyperbole well done, telling a good story with nifty rhyme. I can't imagine any offense given in use of the Chinese background or the broken English. The situation could have been in any environment.

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I have the benefit of only this version. It is really good. Are you referring to the planet or the mineral? Capitalisation implies the planet. What is the scientific background of 'lines of least resistance', since you use the reference so solidly?

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I know lots of 'real men' who wear pink trousers. The last verse actually made me feel antagonistic, not amused; it seems a slur rather than a jest; very Delphic.

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Thanks for your comments Laura . I love raspberries :) and my mate Ian set me the challenge of a fibonacci form which i was pleased to undertake :)

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Thanks very much for your comments on Raspberry fib . It started out as a challenge from a freind , and turned out quite sweet I think :)

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thanks for your comments on raspberry fib :) I don't know about when to stop or start really . My freind here Ian Hayles loves the constraints of form and half challenged me to write a fibonacci sequenced poem. This really appealed because I love the Fibonacci sequence ( nature never wastes a pattern ) and raspberries are just such a fruit.
others seem to repeat or take a set finish . I suppose in research I could've found out the sequence end for a rasberry and used that .. I have only looked at a couple of websites for guidence ,wiki being the simplest so far

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Wow. This is pretty damned impressive. Massively sensual and erotic in content and a really complex form . Brilliant! Yes, I think I can almost taste that raspberry too. x

Comment is about Raspberry fib (blog)

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Delightful piece. Gotta try the form. How do you know when to stop? Just instinct? Or line spacing?

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Mornin Win

Oh yes, it's THE most complex album I've ever heard, musically and lyrically. And, even after obsessing over it for a year, I was STILL hearing things in it that I hadn't heard before.

They did an album before that one, but no more. Jeff M basically withdrew from the band and refused to tour the album, and pretty much had a breakdown. He's resurfaced from time to time, but not done anything like that again.

If you're interested in finding out more about the band's birth and dynamic (hugely interesting btw), there's a cracking little book by Kim Cooper on Amazon.

What I would say is...don't give up on it too early, and I hope you get as much out of it as I have.

:)

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Eh up John - no worries, I enjoyed reading it and commenting. I think a man writing about the female orgasm is very interesting, because although you can observe certain things, (and if properly in touch, can sense the orgasmic energy 'rising' as it were, and share that) you never really know exactly how it feels, so it's quite difficult to do successfully.

Love that lifting hips line :)

Thank you for your very lovely comments on my poems too btw. I wasn't quite sure what you meant by 'expressive freedom', but I am always ready to accept a compliment graciously ;)

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Yep, liking this more now, minus the 'pouring' :) 'Runs' is much more like it ;) I do like the 'belly, hips and thigh' line - it's always 'belly' for me, NEVER 'tummy'. Tummy belongs to the realm of childhood, not adult female sexuality.

I think this reads beautifully now. Have you considered making this into something more...like a serialised thing, with other moments and episodes? I reckon that'd be dead interesting :)

Comment is about Sometimes (extended rhyming mix) (blog)

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Mornin Isobel! Ta for comments on my little experiment. Re the guide to puberty book, personally I would MUCH prefer my daughter to be able to have the knowledge of, and access to masturbation/vibrators. That's by the by now cos she's 19 - but wouldn't YOU have loved your own vibe at 15? Damn sure I would. If you can satisfy yourself sexually, there may be much less of an urge to get someone else to do it for you, or at the very least, sate the urge to do it RIGHT NOW without protection. And shouldn't girls learn to love their own bodies, and know what they are capable of? That's a precious gift - not something to be muddied with other people's 'morality', don't you think?

Anyhow, food for thought :)

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Well said Val - I confess there are times when I prefer to be invisible, but I'm too noisy to be ignored when I require attention, hehe. Best wishes, Dave

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Hi Val, thanks for commenting on 'The World Grew Younger' - it is somewhat shorter than most of my work, hehe Best wishes, Dave

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Hi John, thanks for commenting on 'Brimming' - although I don't always use rhyme, I doubt I would like writing as much without it :) Best wishes, Dave

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Good morning Ann-re the virus warning-was,nt my geekiness-twas forwardededed on from someone elses clever awarenesessess-but the thought of you being electronically obliterated nearly madeded me half smile-but then being the loveable rogue I am,I thought better,and softly cursing being overtaken by my saintly side of my dual personality(there is an end to this!)I came to my senses..!-no seriously,if you can, please let other people know-hope you are sharing Mr Sunbeam with me today-enjoy!..S-xx

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Love this John . I enjoy my Chinese Buffet,but can't eat a lot,then find I am hungry an hour later.X

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Good poem,its the hairy noses that give me the shivers. Love to hear you perform this one Pete.X

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Nice little poem, says it all Dave.

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