Love it! Very evocative & "tight"
ps - notice only women have commented? I wonder why?
You've added a photo!
Mmmm...
<Deleted User> (7164)
Thu 25th Nov 2010 10:58
I detest raspberries but have to say your poem is certainly a very juicy piece and made my mouth water.
Well done Carole :-)
When I read your poem, Carole, I naturally had to do some research to see what this Fibonacci sequence and poetry was... I find it fascinating and will try it when I have some time.
I love raspberries too - reminds me of summertime, picking them off the bushes in France as a little girl : )
Your poem is very sensual, and says so much in so few words.
p.s. I give you an A+
Wow. This is pretty damned impressive. Massively sensual and erotic in content and a really complex form . Brilliant! Yes, I think I can almost taste that raspberry too. x
Delightful piece. Gotta try the form. How do you know when to stop? Just instinct? Or line spacing?
I love rasberries I can almost taste them, Carole
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Rachel Bond
Sat 15th Jan 2011 02:40
love this carole...tempts my tongue to pleasure deep in this submissive flesh...corrr raspberries eh? ill never look at them the same.
i have no idea how to write fibonacci...will google and have a go. inspiring x