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sarah clark

Thu 10th Jul 2008 22:28

hiya Dave
i love the way your poetry is so describable,
i can see in my mind what you are writing,
like reading a lovely story from a enjoyable book

i hope that makes sence lol

keep up the good work

sez x

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Val Cook

Thu 10th Jul 2008 22:24

Leave Spongebob Squarepants alone you big bully.

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Val Cook

Thu 10th Jul 2008 22:22

Sarah thank you for sharing your poem with us. I am sure many on these boards have read Lenfords beautiful tributes to Una. Write some more poetry Sarah, it can help you get through your pain.

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Zuzanna Musial

Thu 10th Jul 2008 20:09

Dear Friends in Poetry~

Thank you Melanie, Janet and Richard for the wonderful comments. Please know that your support is appreciated more then you feel.

Kindest Regards,
Zuzanna

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Zuzanna Musial

Thu 10th Jul 2008 20:07

Richard, I see my spelling mistake there..It should read DRAMA' - Sorry.

Zuzanna

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Zuzanna Musial

Thu 10th Jul 2008 20:06

Hello, Richard

Your poem has deep emotional base. Well written in a form to be presented in a open microphone and on the stage. It is a play and a dramt as well. You have captured the most trgic feeling of a person who is dying. It shows the feeling of passages in his life the love girfriend, wife divorce, a mistress etc...I see this partially as a dark write. Well arranged and written with a passion of a true poet -Thank you for sharing!

Thank you for the comment on my latest” Beautiful Life”poem.
I appreciate your comments.

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

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Zuzanna Musial

Thu 10th Jul 2008 19:57

Dear Melanie

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment on my poem "Beautiful Life"- Life is beautiful indeed.

Warmest Regards,
Zuzanna
xx

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Shirley Collinge

Thu 10th Jul 2008 18:13

Hi Sarah,

How brave of you to open your heart and your emotions. This is brilliant! I can feel what you are feeling through your poem. At the end your love shines through. This is my favourite so far, looking forward to reading more.

Sincerely Shirley

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Dave Morgan

Thu 10th Jul 2008 17:39

Hi Sarah, let it rip, but remember once it's out there, it's hard to take back. I'm sure your poems strike a chord with many WoL readers. Do you know that other Scouse/Manc (scanc?) poetic reprobate Jackie Hagan. You'd get on well.

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Tony Walsh

Thu 10th Jul 2008 17:34

I'm really pleased to be compering and performing for Apples and Snakes as part of this great line-up. Checkout the poets at

http://www.myspace.com/kat_francois
http://www.myspace.com/emmamcgordon
http://www.myspace.com/tonywalshpoet
http://www.myspace.com/animalwrites

Make a day of it! Hope to see you there -should be a great night.

Cheers

Tony



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Dave Morgan

Thu 10th Jul 2008 17:30

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Richard Brooks

Thu 10th Jul 2008 14:29

a true romantic

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Richard Brooks

Thu 10th Jul 2008 14:27

I'll have her on the wekends, you can have her mon- wed, thurs and fri are her nights off

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Janet

Thu 10th Jul 2008 13:47

Oh,Suzanna, won't you play for me...da da da da da, da da da da. With a banjo on my knee!

It's a bit of a song which reminds of when i used to play the piano and it sprung straight into my mind as i started to write the comment.
Your rose in the picture is called "sonya," and is one which was chosen rather often to be used in wedding bouquets when i was a florist.

Your poem is simply beautiful, excellently written. I love the way you moved from two people in love gradually towards the expression of people having more than one soulmate.

We often think of a soulmate being "the one."
Who we will spend the rest of our lives with. When really, it means someone who we connect to at soul level. Our best friends etc...

Lots of love, nice to see you back in full writing swing. Janet.xxx

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Janet

Thu 10th Jul 2008 13:26

Yep! Everythin's in there!
The true "voice" of alcohol!!
( and its effects on people the world over.)

Great Pete, the range of emotions are far too many to mention.
Thanks for your comments, they're more than welcome. Janet.xx

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Sean Stanley

Thu 10th Jul 2008 13:18

Glad you understand it Janet! I think I wrote this in the theory of the absence of someone I knew once and how they can change in such little time!

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Janet

Thu 10th Jul 2008 13:17

Oh, you poor thing! Surely you could have done better than that. ha ha.

The "lady" that is, not the poem!
Just a little joke. Hope you don't mind. Janet.x

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Janet

Thu 10th Jul 2008 13:12

That's the trouble when we put people on pedestals. They tend to fall off.
Sorry if my comment appears flippant but it seems apt for this poem.
Love Janet.x

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Janet

Thu 10th Jul 2008 13:05

Hi Mirna, i do hope they find each other.
Soulmates. Everyones dream come true.
Lovely as usual, Janet.xx

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Janet

Thu 10th Jul 2008 13:01

This poem is very imaginative.
I did read it the other day but it didn't make much sense to me.
When i looked again today, i found i was scrolling through it a section at a time.
Doing that helped the punctuation which is missing throughout.
It's quite light 'n' very nice i think.
Thankyou, Janet.x

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Pete Crompton

Thu 10th Jul 2008 10:30

yo Nat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! where are you mahhhn.
X RAY SPECS GO FOR IT!!!

double glazing for the eyes n the munchkins......yummmie 24hr garage

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Pete Crompton

Thu 10th Jul 2008 10:21

excuse the pun but 'cheers!' Sarah. Now get writing!

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Pete Crompton

Thu 10th Jul 2008 10:17

Costa de la Luz is gorgeous. I recommend the 'Arte Vida' Hotel, Just to the North. Absolutely gorgeous place.

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Melanie Rees

Thu 10th Jul 2008 09:40

Fantastic poem

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Melanie Rees

Thu 10th Jul 2008 09:39

Hey you

I agree with Sarah. i like this poem because it's honest, but it does not seek to degrade the city. With your imagery, you have captured the rawness, without falling upon cliches and stereotypes...
thank you

Mel

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Melanie Rees

Thu 10th Jul 2008 09:35

I love the use of colour in this poem, the pink bar contasting with the yellow and dirt. Very effective.

Mel
x

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Melanie Rees

Thu 10th Jul 2008 09:34

Beautiful Mirna...simply beautiful

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Melanie Rees

Thu 10th Jul 2008 09:33

Oh Zuzanna, this is beautiful. I love the description of the rain and the line 'singing a song of love'

Well done you

Mel
xx

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Zuzanna Musial

Thu 10th Jul 2008 06:39

Hello dear friends in poetry~

Jeff, Shirley, Janet and Melanie-
Thank you all for the fabulous comments! Yes I agree with all of you that once in a while we can do something different. It happened to me once… lol

Well this is life...And really enjoyed the time with my red-orange hair...Smile

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

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Zuzanna Musial

Thu 10th Jul 2008 06:24

Dear Melissa

The poem is much different from your usual writes. It is very imaginary and took me floating with you in the space, that was a travel in a outer world. Very modern writing;

Thank you really enjoyed this one.

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

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Zuzanna Musial

Thu 10th Jul 2008 06:17

Hi, Antonio

Do not worries the rain will stop. The rain is good for the hair as it suppose to be a clean water and soft, so I was told...Smile.
Great poem and much on time!

It has been raining here too for the last week.

Get a rain coat!

Thank you,
Zuzanna

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Zuzanna Musial

Thu 10th Jul 2008 06:11

Hello, Richard

The poem is really nice. It actually shows what life would be to live in here for you. You brought all the visual pictures of an ‘Indian Burial Ground’ in your poem. Excellent imagination!!

Pleasure to read; thank you!

PS: Thank you for your concern, I am fine just had a writers block...Sorry.

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

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Zuzanna Musial

Thu 10th Jul 2008 05:23

HI, Jeff

Thank you so much for your comment and the concern...Sorry for my absence...Writers Block:(
Other then that I am fine...lol

Kind Regards,
Zuzanna

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Zuzanna Musial

Thu 10th Jul 2008 05:20

Hello my friends in poetry ~ thank you so much-- Janet, Melanie, Antonio and Jeff for the lovely comments. You are all very precious to me. Sending my love to you!

Thank you for your concern.
I am doing fine… :)

Warm Regards,
Zuzanna

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sarah clark

Thu 10th Jul 2008 02:15

lovin ur poetry
great to see a fellow manc here lol

keep up the gud word girl
ur poetry is wicked!

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sarah clark

Thu 10th Jul 2008 02:04

'Depression was my friend
understood me so well
the time we spent
writing till he goes
his pain my prose'

you have a fantastic way with words

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sarah clark

Thu 10th Jul 2008 01:40

im not just saying this
but ...
this poem is one of the best ive read!

i feel i can relate to it very much
i can feel where the poem is coming from
if you know what i mean

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Pete Crompton

Thu 10th Jul 2008 00:03

cheers!

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mr stephen

Wed 9th Jul 2008 22:11

Pete,
I really like this poem.

And congrats on your win.

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mr stephen

Wed 9th Jul 2008 22:10

Hia Tony,
I didn't know you were on here. Hopefully, I'll see in Wolvers again.

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Richard Brooks

Wed 9th Jul 2008 21:42

Zuzanna where are you?! Hope your well

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Janet

Wed 9th Jul 2008 21:37

NOT AGAIN!! you daft moo, thought you had a new jacket with a hood?
I ordered a dry day for tomorrow! Don't worry!
love Janet.xx

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Janet

Wed 9th Jul 2008 21:12

No! Really? Well i can't believe it!

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Janet

Wed 9th Jul 2008 20:59

Hi Richard, Thanks for your comments, they really are very much appreciated.
I hadn't heard about the reps in Spain. We were a party of 8 women ranging between the ages of 30 and 55. Each time we went down the strip as it's called, young lads called reps insisted on literally man-handling and scooping us up off the floor in a bid to get us into bars where they got tips for doing it. I blame the tour companies myself. They really should be more responsible when training them up. It wasn't even high season. Everyone complained.

I meant to tell you last time i visited your profile. When i read "The poet and his muse." Just 2 nights before i had a dream very similar to what is written. I was washed up on shore and a man breathed life back into me. I felt it was significant . Though i don't remember him being a poet or writing a poem for me.xx

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Shirley Collinge

Wed 9th Jul 2008 19:11

Hi Jeff,

Thank you for reading more of my poetry and for taking the time to leave a message. It gives my confidence a real boost when I get a positive response. I do not mind criticism though.

My Dad used to play there too. It is a wonderful place. Who would believe there is so much nature so close to Manchester? This Boggart is supposed to pinch our picnics according to the legend. Great place eh? I hope it brought back fond memories.

Shirley

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Pete Crompton

Wed 9th Jul 2008 18:22

says me with spelling mistakes ! HA! oops sorry!

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Pete Crompton

Wed 9th Jul 2008 18:22

Great stuff. A good way to get the pain, anger and frustration out and turn into something positive. I reckon also before you post its good to run it on a spell-checker, its easy to want to post it soon as you wrote it so you can share it with tte world and thats the buzz with poems! but spellcheck it first just in case and it makes it even more powerful!

Keep writing. If you get any ideas for a poem just write one line of it, and then keep it for a rainy day you never know the one line can become a poem.

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Richard Brooks

Wed 9th Jul 2008 12:16

I live in manchester when I'm uni and all of this is very true! The thing I hate the most is what they've done with OK cafe! It had a nice working man feel to it and now it looks like a tendy wine bar like everywhere else

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Richard Brooks

Wed 9th Jul 2008 12:15

got your last blog, strong stuff! if its competely autobiographical good luck!

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Tony Stringfellow

Wed 9th Jul 2008 10:09

Would anyone like to come on to Page One to talk about the comp...?

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