Goodbye Girl

(I was trying to write something with that nursery ryhme rythym, something like Pippin Hill, and this is what came out, not quite what I was looking for but here goes . .)


Pretty girl, lovely girl,

won’t you marry me?


Together now, you and me

So happy we could be


Gorgeous girl, bonny girl

Only you can set me free


Sadly girl, madly girl

Don’t you hear my plea?


Foolish girl, silly girl

You weren’t the one for me


Another girl, a different girl

Is the one that holds the key


So pretty girl, lovely girl

I’ll wait a while and tarry


Goodbye girl, so long girl

Till I find the one I’ll marry


◄ The Spirit of The Tree

Badgers! ►


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M.C. Newberry

Thu 10th Oct 2013 16:35

This is fine, every line
Makes me feel better.
If you find the one you love
Don't seek a shove - go get her!

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Andy N

Thu 10th Oct 2013 12:57

really enjoyed this, Steve. top stuff m8. maybe not as good as Pippin Hill but still works really well. You should try more in this vein!

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Steve Higgins

Wed 9th Oct 2013 20:51

Thanks John -not as good as Pippin Hill though!

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John Coopey

Wed 9th Oct 2013 20:05

Excellent idea Steve - a nursery rhyme. This really works.

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