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Martin Elder

Thu 24th Jul 2014 22:34

Thanks Daniel
A part of me was reminded of Glenn Close in Fatal attraction when she sat in the apartment just switching the light on and off the whole time

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David Cooke

Thu 24th Jul 2014 20:44

HI Dominic Glad you like MIles in Paris and explored the music on YOutube - some great stuff there! David

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Greg Freeman

Thu 24th Jul 2014 19:07

You can find the results and read the winning poems here http://www.welshpoetry.co.uk/winners.html

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Thu 24th Jul 2014 18:20

This is beautiful!

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Thu 24th Jul 2014 13:20

Rach-when the effing eff are you gonna come on again and blow us all out of the effin WOL water?


make it soon girl-love your stuff-MASSIVE TIME!


yours-two soppy Bond hungry scroats.xx

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Thu 24th Jul 2014 12:55

Well, you've got me wishing I was there Greg. Great old write-up, he said, jealously.

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Dominic James

Thu 24th Jul 2014 12:39

marvellous - and it makes a scaffold out of the stage. From your poem, to you-tube, and back again, computers have their benefits, but curiosity would have got me there in the end.

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Dominic James

Thu 24th Jul 2014 11:31

bloody vikings

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Ged the Poet

Thu 24th Jul 2014 11:23

The superb title drew me in to a plethora of witty inunendo, politics, folklore and the 'warm glow' of the memories and pleasures of do it yourself Scandinavian furniture.
A great big smile and "Ride of Valkyries" sounding in my head for the rest of the day.
Brilliant!

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Ged the Poet

Thu 24th Jul 2014 11:17

A very sensual moment in time so elequently captured. Like one of those scenes from a subtitled black and white film at the Cannes Film Festival.
(I know it doesn't need subtitles but hope you get what I mean in the most nicest way).
Imagination working overtime. Wonderful.

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Ged the Poet

Thu 24th Jul 2014 11:00

Helen.... I knew what you meant first time.. no problem glad you get it. Just pleased to bring a smile to anyone with these current political and world events....and I don't mean the games in your hometown. ;)
To smile. It uses less muscles than a frown!
Cheers Helen.

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Dominic James

Thu 24th Jul 2014 10:14

Interesting, I like it. A rich page to start from. Peter Pegnall did a short series that fits in here, if the link works.

Poems suggested by phrases from Scott Fitzgerald's 'Tender is the Night'

A Scherzo of Colour

Bougainvillea against a plaster wail,
pink lips parted in desire;
a pool of blood in the doorway.

Lap it all up.

If you prefer black and white,
a touch of evil -
fly a dark kite
hieroglyph of agony.

Season of Missed Chances, 2009

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Thu 24th Jul 2014 10:02

Bowie Burroughs et al. There is an angry or maybe blase approach here, maybe... I like it. Tommy

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 23rd Jul 2014 22:55

there's a great inner-rhythm to this Tommy and, as usual, your sparing use of words means that every one has depth and meaning - liked it a lot

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Ian Whiteley

Wed 23rd Jul 2014 22:49

thanks for your continued encouragement and kind comments Harry (Remember Scarborough)I'm having a blast writing these war poems, and it's driving me into new forms such as the Ballade Royal for this one (!) really appreciate you finding the time to comment - hope you're keeping well - all the best
Ian

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Wed 23rd Jul 2014 21:46

...not disappointed-

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Wed 23rd Jul 2014 21:09

now I must read this... I can see your development already, a mature approach emerging Helen- personal attachments aside- Your best yet. Tommy

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David Cooke

Wed 23rd Jul 2014 18:10

Hi Cynthia Glad you liked my Miles poem!

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Wed 23rd Jul 2014 13:29

I really sympathise with you on all the suffering you and your country is going through.With the help of God and the courage of the Ukranian people,there will be an end to it.

Well written poem Larisa and lovely to see you back on WOL.Good luck to you and your brave,wonderful country!

Lots of love-Solar.x

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Larisa Rzhepishevska

Wed 23rd Jul 2014 13:18

Love you Lynn, love you Dave, love all my friends here on WOL. If it were not for you I don't really know how I would survive. <3

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Wed 23rd Jul 2014 13:01

Thank you Cynthia.

I'll cover my ignorance by saying I did it phonetically. Ha Ha.

Sadly, I've got to a stage in life when I briefly blank out completely and can't spell the easiest of words.

After eight and a half decades, one has to allow for the occasional lapse in concentration

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 23rd Jul 2014 11:39

I, also, really like this, Andy. It is powerful with strong, evocative images constructed with vivid language. And it pulses with 'heart', an emotional connection straight to the reader. I admire the personal honesty inherent in your poems.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 23rd Jul 2014 11:29

A superb work, always with so much contained within the sphere of the actual words.

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Wed 23rd Jul 2014 11:11

At present there are 78 print magazines (UK + Irish Republic) listed in our Poetry Directory. Some are well-established and on the larger side - kind that get outside funding, but there are many which are newer /smaller.

www.writeoutloud.net/directory

If anyone reading this knows of a magazine that prints poetry but is not in our listings, please contact directory@writeoutloud.net

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Wed 23rd Jul 2014 10:13

You're a woman of taste...I like it :)

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Wed 23rd Jul 2014 08:17

This is precisely what it is about: encouraging people to find their voice to speak from the heart about what concerns them. It doesn't matter if it's about the dog dirt on their estate or telling people how it is for them to live in oppressive circumstances, the power is in the fact that these are the words of the writer/performer. It's Paolo Freire all over again.
Real writing knows no censor.

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Tue 22nd Jul 2014 22:37

you get right inside the subject with this very moving poem Jean.Well done! xx

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jean lucy thompson

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 22:15

ty Daniel I actually wrote this basic poem many years ago ....... nothing changes does it :(

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 21:48

...and all this disbelief and anger is likewise directed at the Israeli government and their armed forces ...yes?

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Kenneth Eaton-Dykes

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 20:44

Thanks Daniel

Much appreciated. Been writing about babies a lot recently. (I used to be one you know)

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Ged the Poet

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 20:22

I sincerely thank you all for your appraisals, comments (and messages) about 'Flip-flops and Bottle Tops'. I found it very hard to write and capture a snapshot of those horrific ongoing events. Much appreciated.

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David Cooke

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 20:08

Very powerful.

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David Cooke

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 20:07

Hi Daniel Glad you liked the Miles poem. It's Jeanne MOreau on the album cover. Really atmospheric music with plenty of night time street scenes. All very cinema noir.

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Ged the Poet

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 19:55

Many true words of wisdom in this Harry.

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Ged the Poet

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 19:49

Both the poem and picture capture a great strength coupled with the loneliness of the subject. It is indeed a lovely piece of work Jean.

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Ged the Poet

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 19:43

Caught me with the first two stanzas... I could sense a domestic coming on!
Very clever play on words Martin.... and we all know an object like that when the sun goes down. ;)

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Ged the Poet

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 19:39

'A political divide meant nothing
To the souls who paid with everything..'
The wrath of the World against the Russian Bear. Sanctions will mean nothing to them as they switch off the gas supply and most of Continental Europe freezes this winter.
Now is the time for to unite and be strong... as indeed we wait for justice.

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Ged the Poet

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 19:31

'Looking back through a nicotine haze
to the husky chic of the fifties...'
Yet again your ability to set the scene of the Jazz era. The cover picture is enough to pull any open minded music lover in.

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Ged the Poet

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 19:27

Another great title. Very difficult subject to contemplate... especially for anyone who suffered from it. It leaves you with the mental anguish of the subject after their consumption. Makes the reader think.

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Ged the Poet

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 19:22

Tomas - thank you very much for the links in your Blog. A great 'heads up' on 'A War we do Not See' with so much potential for further escalation. Really enjoyed all your Video Poetry.. especially 'Give to me an Angry Sea'.
Writings in Rhyme is a superb website. Great stuff.

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Tue 22nd Jul 2014 15:29

lovely piece Jean.(Fourth line-'soaring')o)x

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David Cooke

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 12:17

HI Tommy. Glad you liked MIles in PAris.

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Tue 22nd Jul 2014 10:47

Hi Jean, this is such a deep poem, i absolutely love it. Im such an amateur, started writing a few days ago but not sure it would compare to this, also i am brand new to this site, not sure how it works. feel free to check out what i have done this far http://srcibblesofthesoul.blogspot.com

Thank you

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Rachel Bond

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 00:16

thank you solar :) have been writing for music for a while..which never really took off...so im back to poetry basics ...thanks for your interest x

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Chris Co

Mon 21st Jul 2014 23:45

Joe cycled from Leeds to Birkenhead one evening to join us. I thought that was phenomenal and then you read this! No idea how he does what he does; his commitment to the muse is beyond question. A pleasure to have met you Joe - Best of!

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Mon 21st Jul 2014 23:00

Haha I like the sly intellect in the 'black-out' work. Very...well you know who I mean. As I say, clever. And good work too. Tommy

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Mon 21st Jul 2014 22:55

...and a wail of a poem David. Jazz in its feel.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Mon 21st Jul 2014 22:50

Oh dear- powerful wants un-sated, an angry frustrated example par excellence. :) Tommy

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Mon 21st Jul 2014 22:38

I would have just one addition to your work- it would change the tenor of the work and reverse the finale- a ? ;) Tommy

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Mon 21st Jul 2014 22:34

the international 'community'needs to take their kid gloves off-get off their yapping,dinner,scoffing,wine swigging fat arses and come down on (Ras)putin like a ton of ! bricks-what an absolute shambles!it really is doing our heads in thinking about ALL those poor innocents and their families who are suffering terribly.Shame the plane didn't come down in an oil field-the site would have been secured in a ! flash!'May God rest their souls and pour his vengeance on those responsible.

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