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ESTRANGED

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Our palms were full

and no words were needed

 

Now ....our palms empty

There are still no words

 

So with this .....my words are forever speechless

And ........making unutterable sounds

I roam the history of our making

Trying to find a gem of remembrance

But there is none

 

Trying to find the star which beheld our existance

But,  alas,  it has gone .......

Escaped to a land far, far away

I wish we could have stayed

I wish, I wish, upon a Star

That once had Shone

 

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<Deleted User> (12568)

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 10:47

Hi Jean, this is such a deep poem, i absolutely love it. Im such an amateur, started writing a few days ago but not sure it would compare to this, also i am brand new to this site, not sure how it works. feel free to check out what i have done this far http://srcibblesofthesoul.blogspot.com

Thank you

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Ged the Poet

Mon 7th Jul 2014 21:30

Love the lines
'I roam the history of our making
Trying to find a gem of remembrance...'
I also like the picture of the couple who do not seem to be looking at the shooting star which sets the poem.

Thanks also for the kind words on 'In Llanfairpwllgwyngyll' Jean.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Mon 7th Jul 2014 15:48

awww,I can feel the pain in this poem Jean.Cheer up chuck,tomorrow is another story as they say-whoever THEY are...<0><0>...x

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