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REMEMBER

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Remember

The sea with fury

Beating waves upon the shore

The birds - soaring high

But now the horror falls

Upon the blind man

Upon the dog who howls to the once blue sky

A child - who wonders if this is life

Crawls beneath the debris of his time

 

Seven times I heard their scream

Once I heard their death

Is this a dream ?

 

As I stumble in the mist

I try to find a distant memory

A road - a home - where children  played

But all I see are buildings stark and frayed

 

Amongst the swirling dust

I see a long lost book

Its pages fluttering helplessly

Beneath my feet

Its life has gone

Upon the page - a young face

Looks up at me

And with pleading eyes

It says

Why oh why ?

◄ ESTRANGED

IS THERE ANYBODY OUT THERE ►

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winston plowes

Mon 24th Nov 2014 20:10

Interested in the theme of nature carrying on amidst war and claiming the world back afterwards. You capture this idea in the bird, the dog and to a less extent the child. Enjoyed

<Deleted User> (6895)

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 22:37

you get right inside the subject with this very moving poem Jean.Well done! xx

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Ged the Poet

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 19:49

Both the poem and picture capture a great strength coupled with the loneliness of the subject. It is indeed a lovely piece of work Jean.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 15:29

lovely piece Jean.(Fourth line-'soaring')o)x

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