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The Scalded Soldiers

The scalded soldiers

Slid over the top

Of the parched peak; waved,

Awaited the pop

 

Of reflexed wretchings -

The wretched allure;

Sweet shelling shrapnel

So bitter and pure.

 

Then dinning quiet but

Cliched tweeting; the

Eery aftermath

Of gorge filled eating.

 

The troops fall silent

'Til cries ring out and

Once more the trenches

Filled with doubt.

despaireating disordersSelf-doubt

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Ged the Poet

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 19:27

Another great title. Very difficult subject to contemplate... especially for anyone who suffered from it. It leaves you with the mental anguish of the subject after their consumption. Makes the reader think.

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