Lan

Sun 27th Dec 2015 01:17

Hi Martin, thanks so much for commenting on Love Song, very pleased that you liked it x

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Sun 27th Dec 2015 01:06

Beautiful

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Lan

Sun 27th Dec 2015 01:04

Hi Cynthia, I am glad you reposted this one. I have been struggling a bit to feel any connection to Christmas as where I am it's mid summer - so perhaps I need to do a bit of research into Summer solstice and traditions. Anyway, appreciate the post - can see why it's one of your favourites x

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Nigel Astell

Sat 26th Dec 2015 18:09

A full moon smiles on words of a Christmas poem
that glows a warm light to all that read it.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sat 26th Dec 2015 13:29


Thank you Steve, 'everyone' refers to Scrooge in derogatory terms - the man became THE most generous and warm person in town!
;-)

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sat 26th Dec 2015 13:28

Thank you Steve, 'everyone' refers to Scrooge in derogatory terms - the man became THE most generous and warm person in town!

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Ria Richardson

Sat 26th Dec 2015 08:45

I don't think it is finished ... I quit it
I'll re look at it ... Thank you

Maybe that's a better finish

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Patricio LG

Sat 26th Dec 2015 05:56

Very nice poem, it kinda goes down hill on the last verse, perhaps it's not finished?

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Ria Richardson

Sat 26th Dec 2015 00:25

Love this ... So well written .. Thank you

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steve pottinger

Fri 25th Dec 2015 17:17

I love the brevity of this, but can't quite shrug off the feeling it *may* be just a touch derivative. Heaney, perhaps? Or was it Ted Hughes? Someone will know, I'm sure.

Happy wotsit, Tommy.

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Nigel Astell

Fri 25th Dec 2015 07:38

Thanks Martin

As I got to near the end of the poem there were shouts of girls only then Nigel - - - that's when big William joined in all the fun.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 24th Dec 2015 16:23

A repost, yes. Indulgent? Oh, yes. Unashamedly? That too.

I thought a newish WOLer might enjoy this. It is one of my favourite pieces, especially at this time of year.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Thu 24th Dec 2015 05:28

Happy jingle berry
Merry cherry
X-mas mistle
Holly jolly time
Tinkle tinkle
Snowflake sprinkle
Yuletide drinkle -tommy

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DavidAddington

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 23:04

Thanks.

It's a mid-life crisis type poem...

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Martin Elder

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 22:50

I like the way this poem seems to amble along telling its tale at its own pace until you get to that final line. A great poem David

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Martin Elder

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 22:37

Thanks for your comments guys a really feel a sense of peace amongst trees and am forever taking photographs of them. I agree with you M.C they are a wonderful creation.
Oaks are among my favourites Ray, there is something sold and dependable about them. Cheers

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Martin Elder

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 22:30

I don't usually go for the King james version of the bible or songs, but this is beautiful. Fantastic Cynthia.
Happy Christmas

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J Graham

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 21:19

Love it!

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Greg Freeman

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 20:15

Many thanks for this review, Deborah. I've sent a letter to Santa, so hope it might turn up in my stocking.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 20:14

Cheers, Laura ... I send festive greetings to you and all around you in return

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declan grimes

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 18:25

Absolutely, I nearly accidentally swallowed my own head when I heard she was to be canonised: St Teresa! Now that is truly obscene.

Thanks for taking the time to comment, I'm not sure what the crack is on here but thanks for the welcome

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 17:29

Thank you, Harry, very much.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 16:07

Harry I'm always grateful for your time in commenting. Have a merry and peaceful Christmas yourself and I look forward to "speaking" again in the New Year!

Graham

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 15:45

A Merry Christmas to all.

And appreciation for the team.

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 15:42

Lovely Cynthia,
It Just proves that used in the right sphere, of the right persons, at the right historical event, what might otherwise be regarded as archaic forms of address are absolutely spot on right.

besides being individually beautiful

(It`s strange how we don`t use that word about poetry much these days...I mean...Poetry!)

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Laura Taylor

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 14:31

Nice summary there Greg - all my very best to you and yours x

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Laura Taylor

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 14:30

Thanks Julian, for everything :) All the very best to you and all my fellow poets - live long and prosper ;)

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John Bastard

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 13:26

applaud

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John Bastard

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 13:25

'A rite of passage for British warriors'--
as the new defaces the old, forever and ever
amen.

we are the sand that yellows lofes secrets

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John Bastard

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 13:21

The gravity of the final line suits me best

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John Bastard

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 13:19

weeps
marry me stu.

I'm weak for frantic listings and ramble and run-on. And the general martyr message of this piece.

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John Bastard

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 13:05

snapsnapsnap
Made me think of figureskating feet, triumphant in the cooling heat of rythm and rhyme or arithmia for poignancy--potency--scrawled on nothing as perfectly temporary as a bookmark, single serving, but married to the spine of floppy books for life.

I went to a recital once with 6 such bookmarks to read.

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John Bastard

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 13:00

Lynn :)
xo.
Reminder to myself to read you back when I wake up.

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Ria Richardson

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 11:48

Thank you x

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Lan

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 11:35

Ria, this is beautiful, great images so full of love x

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Lynn Hamilton

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 10:00

Love it Mr B. Its brilliant, again!

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Lynn Hamilton

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 09:48

Beautiful, Ria xx

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Ria Richardson

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 07:30

Thank you so much Martin x

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John F Keane

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 00:25

Dorinda

You know me - always thinking too big!

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 23rd Dec 2015 00:24

Merry Christmas to all members old and new this year. Keep posting and more importantly keep commenting on your fellow members' work. Happy New Year for 2016.

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Martin Elder

Tue 22nd Dec 2015 23:11

I apparently missed this piece on Monday night.This is you at your best Nigel glad I haven't missed it now

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Martin Elder

Tue 22nd Dec 2015 23:08

What a lovely poem this is Ria. A picture so finely drawn of an older man

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Tina Ford

Tue 22nd Dec 2015 22:45

Thank you very much x

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Mikhail Smith

Tue 22nd Dec 2015 21:00

.. " hello Tommy ... the joke beside the photo was that the girls names would be in Russian, but all attempts at copy/paste wouldn't print the letters .. just tried again - had to delete and re-do .. !! "


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Jan lehutjo

Tue 22nd Dec 2015 20:49

It feels so good to be at home for the festive with your family... Filled with much joy!

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Lynn Hamilton

Tue 22nd Dec 2015 20:35

I thought it best to double check before replying! Thanks for reading and commenting Son of God

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 22nd Dec 2015 18:40

Do it if you can. But if you can't, do the best you can.
Circumstances have a way of dictating what gets done
but the humanity in these lines is what we should all
aim for.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 22nd Dec 2015 18:08

Never one to be bound by formulaic writing, I let the
rhythm dictate the flow. Your comment about the "grandmother" line is noted but I was determined to get
the tribute inherent in that word into the verse somehow
and I've amended the line slightly.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 22nd Dec 2015 17:49

A personal memory that will bring us recollections of
other times when youth and innocence had days full of
excited optimism in the comforting confines of a caring family - and remind us that others have been - and are -
far less fortunate.

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 22nd Dec 2015 17:42

Last night, I enjoyed a BAFTA televised tribute to the
widely successful series "Downton Abbey" in which a
tribute was paid to the "crew" behind the enterprise.
Accordingly, it seems entirely fitting to adopt that tribute
to those (the "crew") working to keep WOL up and running.
And how happy the coincidence that the first name of
the creators of each project should be "Julian"!
Congratulations to everyone concerned - and a very Happy
Christmas to you all.

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