bluelit 2 (12/23/2015)

If I laid next to you right now, my lips would find your throat, gentle and dreamlike between your breaths as not to free you from good dreams. 
my legs would coil and cradle around you, inching you closer, settling like sediment against me, perfectly warm, and my arms would slide up your sides so I could feel you stirring.
and my heart would break, shiver and shatter
when your moan passed over my ear and you held me back

Baby please come home

◄ azucar grim (12/20/2015)

Long Light City (12/27/2015) ►



Tue 12th Jan 2016 02:31

Have felt a bit bad about my very basic comments on this one, keep thinking about it. I found it beautiful because I wish someone would write something so lovely about me, and to be honest I don't really want to analyse how you managed to inspire that feeling in me, but however you did it, it is beautiful :)

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John Bastard

Thu 31st Dec 2015 08:35

Um well thank you

R L Miller

Thu 31st Dec 2015 04:55

I very much enjoyed this. I've come to read it a few times in the last couple of days and have been hoping for some words to show up to express how much I liked it beyond 'i liked it' but sorry that's all I have. Like Lea has said it is beautiful :)


Sun 27th Dec 2015 22:37

Heh heh! Because I said so....

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John Bastard

Sun 27th Dec 2015 15:09



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