<Deleted User> (16837)

Sun 23rd Dec 2018 03:06

So true!! Sometimes an unbreakable bond is woven around us, v keep discarding the thoughts not realising they are overpowering us. Strange connections which hurt n gv tremendous pain. Well written!!

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d.knape

Sun 23rd Dec 2018 02:28


(one idea leads to the next....)
how true.
Merry Christmas Don.
The best to you and yours.

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Martin Elder

Sun 23rd Dec 2018 00:59

Thanks to Anya and Jane for liking

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Martin Elder

Sun 23rd Dec 2018 00:56

Thanks for Liking Hannah, Charlotte Damon and Jane much appreciated

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Martin Elder

Sun 23rd Dec 2018 00:54

Thanks Hannah, Glad you liked it

Aa merry Christmas to you also

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Stephen Mellor

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 22:19

Hi Don
I appreciate the time taken to leave a comment on Brexit TV.
I'm useless at critiquing, and write (as I think you may) pretty much to entertain myself.
I doubt I'll ever be a 'poet', but enjoy the occasional recital.
The major benefit from writing and reciting poems is that I met my wife through WOL

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Don Matthews

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 21:59

I echo Brian's comments here Stephen. The rhythm and rhyming is excellent. And the content is very appropriate ?

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 19:30

Great rhythm and rhyming...deserves more interest.

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Sat 22nd Dec 2018 19:04

The winter solstice, always bringing us in touch with the mystical.
Love this one.

Hannah

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Sat 22nd Dec 2018 19:02

A strong poem from someone trying to survive.
Unfortunately so many sleep in the streets now.
It's sad and shameful.

Hannah

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Sat 22nd Dec 2018 18:57

Very good poem on a very important issue.
What would Dickens say if he returned and saw all these poverty stricken people on the streets ?
Shameful situation.
Well done.

Hannah

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 18:53

The pantomime continues with the cast getting wilder.
I'm glad you wrote about this subject.
The mask slips indeed.

Hannah

Merry Christmas.

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 18:48

Great writing.
I love the story and this poem too.

Hannah

Merry Christmas.

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Sat 22nd Dec 2018 18:43

The two sides of life,

Hannah

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 18:41

Fabulous poem.
Yes you can see him.
Well deserved POTW.

Hannah

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John Coopey

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 17:46

Excellent carol, MC. But when will we hear the audios again?

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Rick Varden

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 17:22

Certainly wouldn’t catch a cold reading it! Thanks

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Martin Elder

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 17:07

You raise a good point Ray. I guess I was attempting to see scrooge reflecting as at the end of a Christmas Carol That he can changes his ways and not take on the ghost of Jacob Marley. I always like to see a chink of hope in any possible scenario. Of course some may call me just plain naïve. But anyway I hope that may throw some light upon this piece.

A very Happy Christmas to you my friend and thanks for all your support over the year

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 15:58

A pleasing reminder that we're now on the up - the slow rise to longer
days after the rapidly dwindling light that accompanied our annual
journey through the seasons towards winter.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 15:42

'A poem is never finished, only abandoned.'
paul_valery

well not always. ?

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 15:41

Cheers Ray re 'Nietzsche Declared' I was telling Dave (Wolfgar) 'A poem is never finished, only abandoned.Paul Valery' malarky. Tommy

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 15:35

This time of the year is for regeneration
With fine old reasons for celebration
Let's store up stuff on our poetry shelves
And raise a toast to Santa and his elves!

Up Over - or - Down Under! ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 15:21

Compliments of the Season to you, Po. Thanks for commenting so
positively. This is one I wrote a while ago but I feel the content to
be relevant every year - and whilst not religious in the man-made
sense, I do believe there is more to this existence than we can know
- and on that basis I am happy to use the birth of Christ and its
story to pursue that belief. Hope springs eternal.

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Chris Hubbard

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 09:54

Thank you, poemagraphic,

I enjoyed opening out the vision of this poem - until it got away from me.

Chris

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Jon Stainsby

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 09:21

Thank you so much, Po.

Peace to you, too at this time, and forever.

Jon

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John Coopey

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 09:14

Many thanks, Brian and Po.
In truth, It was at one of these do’s that something far worse happened to me. Our Gert and me started courting.

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Don Matthews

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 09:05

Brian

Just like you had a poem in storage
To bring out on this rainy day
I'll also keep this one in my storehouse
I'll still be rhyming then, no decay

I'm pleased you're still alert, still attentive
You noticed the year twenty twenty eight
Which means I can re-post this poem
But we'll all have ten years for to wait ?

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Sat 22nd Dec 2018 08:51

Don...you are ten years ahead of everyone!

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Don Matthews

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 03:37

Give this poet an idea
And he'll be hooked for life
Rhyming words of wisdom
Rhyming words of strife

Every idea's an adventure
Each one leads to next
Curiosity in him flourishes
Boundaries get stretched

Romancing words (it comforts him)
He looks upon his screen
Discovers there are other
Poets just as keen

(one idea leads to the next....)
?



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Jon Stainsby

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 02:28

Thank you, Anya ❤

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Big Sal

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 01:12

Lovely work as usual. I know I already commented on this, but I came back to read it again.

It's that good.?

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 21st Dec 2018 23:43

You tried to rise above 'em
but didn't you bloody love 'em

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John Coopey

Fri 21st Dec 2018 22:53

Someday sherry will make a comeback, MC, I'm sure. Who'd have though gin would?
Quite right, Don. We're lucky our misdemeanours were pre-CCTV.

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Don Matthews

Fri 21st Dec 2018 22:07

I like this MC. Some rhymes don't suit a rhymic response. This is one of them ?

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Don Matthews

Fri 21st Dec 2018 21:52

John

Your Cassandra did remind me
CCTV did see
This guy jump up on copier
Copy his 'thing-a-me'

He did it very quickly
So no-one else could see
But obviously he did forget
About CCTV ?

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 21st Dec 2018 20:58

The highs and lows of seeing the year out caught in all its "grot and
gruesome" variations.
You can sing along.
If you bring along
What will make us merry
Whisky and beer
From far and near
But knickers to the sherry!

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 21st Dec 2018 17:50

"A Deceit of Politicians" - my own collective reference for these
clowns. I judge the importance of a job by the time we can live
properly without it working for us (let alone against us, as is so
clearly the case in the Brexit saga). See the hours that medical
staff and other emergency services work on our behalf and
compare them with those found in the Houses of Parliament and
other "governing" authorities. I rest my case, m'lud!

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raypool

Fri 21st Dec 2018 17:05

Having a bit of trouble penetrating the truth behind this Martin. I respect your work so much I have come at it from different angles, but I do suspect a feel of anguish and escapism in it; Marley was Scrooge's boss, so I am adrift on the connection!

Love to get back to it with a few hints from your good self.

Ray

Happy Xmas. (present)

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raypool

Fri 21st Dec 2018 16:53

I can't dissect this John as it makes such a great statement and has humour and irony , all the best ingredients with social history . Just love it a lot.

Ray

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raypool

Fri 21st Dec 2018 16:51

How to bring someone down to earth in one foul swoop, and what a victim ! Great how the indomitable woman deals the blow.

Happy Xmas Tommy.

Ray

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raypool

Fri 21st Dec 2018 16:48

A beautifully turned poem with craft and craftiness, bringing the past to bear on the future. A whole agenda of immigration and its expectations and frustrations are lovingly presented. It's interesting to note that the Waldorf also has its history in the Strand. Lovely to read your work here David!

Ray

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raypool

Fri 21st Dec 2018 16:40

Strangely consoling Peter. A homily that has me admiring how you weave such intricate lines so casually and bind us with spells.

I can always your voice threading its way through the page.

Have a good Xmas !

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 21st Dec 2018 12:52

The essence of this time of the year - which I think of as "Good will
towards all".

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 21st Dec 2018 12:49

We can take it in...we can throw it out -
But at least we'll experience what life's about!
This world of ours would be so tame
If all it showed was just the same!

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 21st Dec 2018 12:24

A timeless observation on how the individual can be a valuable part
of a larger world. I can easily imagine a Roman road worker here
in Britain stepping back to admire his handiwork while gazing at the
straight as an arrow highway he had helped put down...even as the
mist swirled down out of the hills. Those New York workers who
sat on dangling girders eating their sandwiches hundreds of feet
above the teeming city streets gave as much to progress as any
architect or planner.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 21st Dec 2018 12:14

When women drive men to distraction
Words are the most merciful source of action!
A previous PM was known for hand-bagging,
A polite political term for nagging.
(In short, if women are so ready to use words that criticise, moan,
abuse or nag...why the surprise when men do it?).

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Don Matthews

Fri 21st Dec 2018 12:07

Thankyou for you comments Brian ?

PS. I've discovered what ' put 'em in a glass case and throw sugar at them' means. Seems it's an English/Irish expression.

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David Irvine

Fri 21st Dec 2018 12:02

Thanks for your comments everyone, much appreciated.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 21st Dec 2018 11:59

I think it is more fo a concern to folk of a certain attitude - and maybe "vintage" - this restraint about giving offence.
There are some who do it intentionally for a purpose - and
sometimes gratuitously for show. But it's worth it IF the
expressed words have a genuine purpose and feeling as their source. I tend to raise my eyes heavenwards and
sigh at the readiness of many "agendas" to take offence
at every opportunity but the pleasure and power of poetry
of whatever stripe is that it is generally accepted as the
time-honoured forum for such material. Long may it be so.
Merry Christmas to you. Keep posting!

P.S. Love the picture on your page - brings back memories of family images from those black and white
more innocent days of yore.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 21st Dec 2018 11:19

Well Don, it's always good to take things on board, run 'em up the flagpole, put 'em in a glass case and throw sugar at them.

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