A chariot bringing good news

Sky horses chasing rainbows across the sky

the wonder of the blue heavens flowing,

cascading down onto the scorched earth

joining together to form a perfect scene.

Behind the flying steeds a chariot

carrying the messengers of a new dawn,

an age of far reaching force

where all will be destroyed

to be reborn into an era of true enlightenment.  

◄ Lark song

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 26th Dec 2018 05:48

Thank you, Damon

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Damon Blackery

Wed 26th Dec 2018 01:56

This poem is beautifully worded you did a great job

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 24th Dec 2018 15:52

Thank you, Vinod

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Vinod K A

Mon 24th Dec 2018 14:00

wonderful images.....

congrats...

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 24th Dec 2018 12:38

Thank you, Big Sal. I hadn't thought of it like that. 😀

Big Sal

Sun 23rd Dec 2018 20:44

I can tell a great poem by reading it backwards and having it just as beautifully written as when read normally.

Well done buddy.💪

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Jon Stainsby

Sun 23rd Dec 2018 17:29

Thank you, Hannah

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Hannah Collins

Sun 23rd Dec 2018 16:31

From the first line onwards, gripping and beautiful.

Hannah

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Jon Stainsby

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 09:21

Thank you so much, Po.

Peace to you, too at this time, and forever.

Jon

poemagraphic

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 09:08

"Sky horses chasing rainbows across the sky
the wonder of the blue heavens flowing,"

Jon I adore this.
Firstly… my mind throws me the image of "The Four Horsemen"
Absorbing all of the colours of the rainbow and darkening the skies

AND THEN…

"cascading down onto the scorched earth
joining together to form a perfect scene.
Behind the flying steeds a chariot"

My mind blazes with the purest image of Four white winged Pegasus with long manes flowing
carrying the messenger of a new dawn,

'The Peace Bringer'

"an age of far reaching force
where all will be destroyed
to be reborn into an era of true enlightenment."

Purely Inspirational words Jon

‘This’ is where we battle Good and Evil… In the minds of great poets and philosopher’s like yourself Jon.

Peace and goodwill to you, my companion on the road.
Po

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Jon Stainsby

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 02:28

Thank you, Anya ❤

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