A chariot bringing good news

Sky horses chasing rainbows across the sky

the wonder of the blue heavens flowing,

cascading down onto the scorched earth

joining together to form a perfect scene.

Behind the flying steeds a chariot

carrying the messengers of a new dawn,

an age of far reaching force

where all will be destroyed

to be reborn into an era of true enlightenment.  

◄ Lark song

Eternal Relief ►

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 26th Dec 2018 05:48

Thank you, Damon

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Damon Blackery

Wed 26th Dec 2018 01:56

This poem is beautifully worded you did a great job

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 24th Dec 2018 15:52

Thank you, Vinod

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Vinod K A

Mon 24th Dec 2018 14:00

wonderful images.....

congrats...

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 24th Dec 2018 12:38

Thank you, Big Sal. I hadn't thought of it like that. ?

Big Sal

Sun 23rd Dec 2018 20:44

I can tell a great poem by reading it backwards and having it just as beautifully written as when read normally.

Well done buddy.?

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Jon Stainsby

Sun 23rd Dec 2018 17:29

Thank you, Hannah

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Hannah Collins

Sun 23rd Dec 2018 16:31

From the first line onwards, gripping and beautiful.

Hannah

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Jon Stainsby

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 09:21

Thank you so much, Po.

Peace to you, too at this time, and forever.

Jon

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Jon Stainsby

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 02:28

Thank you, Anya ❤

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