II.

toxic train track

metal waste raindrop

incarcerated too long too late

no reply.

faintly.

Risk until one always.

Any ways. Anyways.

fastforward. Visual rewind

incongruity. Incongruous.

Inferior absolutes. Taste

lingering remnant after

gauzy impossibility.

Ending. Search mystified.

Final helping of emptiness

 

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Comments

Big Sal

Sat 22nd Dec 2018 01:12

Lovely work as usual. I know I already commented on this, but I came back to read it again.

It's that good.?

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ha'azinu

Thu 6th Dec 2018 14:42

Thank you, Sal! I appreciate that you always give such positive feedback. Thank you for taking the time to read my poems!!

Big Sal

Thu 6th Dec 2018 14:17

The word choice made it feel like two separate poems fighting for the same page space. But don't take that as a bad thing - it came out sounding great with the word choice, diction, and adjectives used!

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