<Deleted User> (19913)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 10:37
<Deleted User> (19913)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 10:36
This is beautiful Avishek. Love the piano line.
Comment is about Bloom My Love (blog)
Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH
<Deleted User> (19913)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 10:34
I absolutely LOVE this. Superb effort.
Comment is about 100 Reasons to Plant a Tree (blog)
Original item by Tim Ellis
<Deleted User> (19913)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 10:33
Dash it all! I could've sent FUN BUS HQ's latest arrival Princess pusscat to Switzerland to tune-up on her yodeling.
Jolly Gina insisted on going (1st class!!- cost the earth). Though can you imagine the ruckus Gina would have kicked up if I'd sent Princess instead? OK reader, cheap pussy airfare vs a woman's wrath? What's a poor guy to do?
Yodelooayoo
Take it away Frankie...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cQF-VsbMfDA
Comment is about Nanna is a Yodeller (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
<Deleted User> (19913)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 10:32
Oh yeah. And conversely the horror of travelling with toddlers....
Comment is about Geneva airport (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
"Words transport me to other worlds
Much faster than by air" So true!
Comment is about Geneva airport (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
Good poem Hallielle. I like how you've used repetition to build up a rhythm and give emphasis.
Comment is about 'Sex' by Hallielle Rose Dawson is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Lovely! I share the same pleasure in travelling alone.
What happened to your credit card?!!!!
Jennifer
Comment is about Geneva airport (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 08:52
Becky - an hour alone spells freedom to the slave.
(Not mine...Clive James)
Comment is about Geneva airport (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
Thanks for all the lovely comments guys. It feels so nice having a community of sympathetic poets to turn to when I'm feeling ever so slightly sorry for myself...
Putting such emotions into words, and then self-imposing the discipline of making those words "work" better, more efficiently, more effectively, more poetically - it's very therapeutic. I think poetry has really helped my head in the last few years. Like any hobby though, it can impact family life it seems...
Comment is about Written in anger and confusion (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
<Deleted User> (19836)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 08:41
Really nice...I can relate...I love travelling alone!!?
Comment is about Geneva airport (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
<Deleted User> (19836)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 08:39
<Deleted User> (19421)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 08:09
HA!
So that is what they are for....
Cheers
DJB
Comment is about Web Cookies (blog)
Original item by d.knape
<Deleted User> (19421)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 08:08
Great work!!!
Really like this
Cheers!
DJB
Comment is about Be infinitely infinite into infinity (blog)
Original item by Alexandra K. Parapadakis
<Deleted User> (19421)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 08:05
i have found (indeed found that I wanted to write in the very first place) that writing my kind of poetry has done wonders for my thinking, sadness, anger and confusion. The best thing is that the page will not answer back and will take all that you throw at it, even better if you regret what you write you can erase it. Can't take back words said or shouted in anger...
Nice work Becky
cheers
DJB
Comment is about Written in anger and confusion (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
<Deleted User> (19836)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 07:58
Thankyou Brian for this advice
My rhymic struggle with Swiss
I could have done a baser word
But not my style ('twas piss) ?
Oh, I have just seen your clever
Pun with my Swissy Miss
She wouldn't be too happy Brian
Suggesting you give her a miss
Comment is about Swissy Miss (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (19836)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 07:52
Very clever! I would love to yodel in the Alps!?
Yodeling and chocolate truffles...perfect!
Comment is about Nanna is a Yodeller (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
One of our favourite family jokes:
Knock knock!
Who's there?
A little old lady.
A little old lady who?
Cool, I didn't know you could yodel.
Comment is about Nanna is a Yodeller (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
<Deleted User> (19836)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 07:49
Fantastic! Filled with optimism, love and good energy! Well done Avishek. ?Jane
Comment is about Bloom My Love (blog)
Original item by AVISHEK GHOSH
This is great! ??
As soon as I read the title I thought of the song "Hocus Pocus" by Dutch prog group Focus. Check it out if you want a weird start to Saturday...
Comment is about Nanna is a Yodeller (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 07:26
Good to see a yodel poem on Switzerland dayeeyoooo
Comment is about Nanna is a Yodeller (blog)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 07:23
Don
When you're struggling to rhyme with Swiss
Just don't bother...give it a miss
Comment is about Swissy Miss (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 07:18
Yes...the different languages don't seem to matterhorn.
Comment is about DOUBLE TALK (blog)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
Hi Becky, I agree with everybody's comments. Our poetry is full of our emotions. It is a release. Take care. ? x
Comment is about Written in anger and confusion (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
AppLe ALen
Sat 18th Aug 2018 04:51
http://SidePay.online/?user=10589
i really loved it
Comment is about 'Sex' by Hallielle Rose Dawson is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
AppLe ALen
Sat 18th Aug 2018 04:50
http://SidePay.online/?user=10589
Comment is about 'Sex' by Hallielle Rose Dawson is Write Out Loud's Poem of the Week (article)
Original item by Greg Freeman
Thank you so much @Hugh
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Basically it's just a description of what I've felt and have been feeling in my life now a days...
Comment is about Just another breakdown (blog)
Original item by Xandaria
It's nice to meet some who's been there and remembers also. Yes it was magical. We had a biro in the shape of the Skylon, standing proud and tall. Don't know where it's disappeared to.
Don?
Comment is about The Festival of Britain 1951 For Those Who Can Remember (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
No need to apologise
Becky, please do share
Anger, guilt and loneliness
Yes, we all do care
As Brian rightly says
This site helps pressure go
Just write it down and share it
Feel pressure go on slow
Do not EVER risk
Posting something here
All are here to help you
And lend a listening ear
Poetry as therapy
We shouldn't go and share?
Where did you get this idea Beck?
Someone who didn't care?
Our WOL site would be empty
Full of nonsense, air
If 'motions, feelings, anger
Did not come out, and bare
I gotta end up Becky
Rhyming dirty linen
Throw 'em in the dirty box
Go ahead and bin 'em
That's relieved my flippancy
Frustration for today
See Beck, WOL'ers allow me
Whate're I want to say ?
Comment is about Written in anger and confusion (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
elPintor
Sat 18th Aug 2018 01:29
Taylor, I only want to give you a special thanks for your comment on "waters".
We all have special memories that we hold dear, but those related to our roots are immutable and almost archetypal in their nature--I was very moved by you sharing yours.
I just wanted to say that it didn't pass unnoticed...
Rachel
Comment is about Taylor Crowshaw (poet profile)
Original item by Taylor Crowshaw
Big Sal
Sat 18th Aug 2018 00:23
If it is read aloud, the poem has a pretty good rhythm to it. Did you do this as a slam piece?
Comment is about Written in anger and confusion (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
<Deleted User> (18980)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 00:07
Becky, this forum is a way of releasing pressure.
Comment is about Written in anger and confusion (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
No you're not wrong Brian. Guilt and other things right now. But I was quite pleased about writing a rhyming poem in 5 minutes flat, and as it was about poetry I risked sharing it here. Apologies if that was the wrong thing to do. Perhaps poetry as therapy shouldn't be shared... But if it wasn't, I think this website would be much emptier. Rhyming dirty linen seems somehow more acceptable...? I can delete it.
Comment is about Written in anger and confusion (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
<Deleted User> (19913)
Fri 17th Aug 2018 23:47
<Deleted User> (19913)
Fri 17th Aug 2018 23:46
<Deleted User> (18980)
Fri 17th Aug 2018 23:44
Hi Becky. Like the poem.
I see it as you are using this forum as your confessional to voice feelings of guilt. (I've probably got it completely wrong...if so forgive me.)
Comment is about Written in anger and confusion (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
<Deleted User> (19913)
Fri 17th Aug 2018 23:42
Thanks for your comments on Painter's Paradox Ray. It's about human nature, and the way that the nature of others can be corrupted by others, and conversely how being with others can create something bigger than the whole . Really appreciate you taking the time to read it.?
Comment is about ray pool (poet profile)
Original item by ray pool
Thanks Kate G. I'm sure things will be better in the morning. Funny how quickly the words came to me this time.
Comment is about Written in anger and confusion (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
<Deleted User> (19913)
Fri 17th Aug 2018 23:38
What a wonderful tribute Andy - a touching outpouring of words, in memory of a friend.
Comment is about The Missing Poet (For Alex Humphrey) (blog)
Original item by Andy N
<Deleted User> (19913)
Fri 17th Aug 2018 23:35
Wow. Lots of truth in this Becky. Wonderful. And hope you are okay.
Comment is about Written in anger and confusion (blog)
Original item by Becky Who
In 2017 Starstedt pegs it
He’s not now bothered
One bit about Brexit.
Enough, Ray! I can do without the competition.
Comment is about WHERE DO YOU GO TO, MY LOVELY? (blog)
Original item by John Coopey
Hi thanks for commenting "I can't write today". I love "Thoughts at Christmas" - it speaks to me so strongly as it will to everyone who has lost someone (as in, pretty much everyone, eventually). Thank you.
Comment is about M.C. Newberry (poet profile)
Original item by M.C. Newberry
elPintor
Fri 17th Aug 2018 22:42
I'm very thankful for such kind and moving comments. I hold this little piece close and return to it every once in a while as a reminder of how I felt when I penned it--seems maybe an accurate perspective of where we stand in the present can only be evaluated truthfully with an eye on the past.
Many thanks to all who read, also,
Rachel x
Comment is about waters (blog)
Original item by nunya
<Deleted User> (19913)
Sat 18th Aug 2018 10:39
Beautifully layered Peter. One I want to keep reading.
Comment is about KISS-CROSSING (blog)
Original item by Peter Taylor