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leah

Mon 21st Jan 2019 15:40

REVIEW: ATTILA THE STOCKBROKER AT JANUARY WRITE ANGLE

Was it a tropical storm, earthquake, tsunami - that struck Petersfield Write Angle at its January gig. No. It was Attila the Stockbroker, a different kind of force of nature.

As usual, Attila filled the room - “Dom (landlord at The Townhouse), had to bring up more chairs. And, he was up there for close to an hour and a half with lots of new material to add to his favourites - and the stamina to go on for hours more!
This was a particularly political evening, starting with the announcement that Teresa May's Brexit deal had been voted down by a large margin - “Now for a General Election,” exclaimed Attila, an ardent left winger.

Much of Attila's poetry dealt with the injustices visited upon ordinary people by the rich and powerful - from diggers, ranters and levellers of the Cromwellian period up to the present day- such as Aberfan, Hillsborough and Grenfell Tower, with people failed by the National Coal Board, the police and the local, Tory Council. He declared himself a ranter, a present day reviver of that old group, inveying against Oliver Cromwell who, having deposed and executed the king, himself became king in all but name and whose officers persecuted ordinary people who protested the status quo of the mighty exercising power.

It was not unremitting politics – Atilla, born and bred in Southwick and still living there, recounts happy memories of fishing for flat fish, collecting creepy-crawlies; visiting the pub converted into a gospel chapel; and acting as a DJ for Brighton and Hove Albion.
He's not only a master of the spoken word but also a gifted musician – demonstrating his skills on the mandolin, violin, pipe and crumhorn (a curved woodwind instrument of the restoration period!)

Several of the audience, known to Write Angle, were excellent poets but this time, they were there for just one thing - to see their favourite performer – it was Attila’s night -and there’s no doubt, they were once again taken by his fabulous talents. They thanked us over and over, for having him as a guest.

With not much time left, Richard Peirce, did his White Rose, about a group of young people who resisted Hitler and died for it, and One Night in Fratton, where he mused on Pompey people's lack of interest in the revolution he expects to come! Dick Senior's Modern Times, contrasted the concerns of politicians and millionaires with the needs of people and the planet. His Hallelujah dealt with the way in which extreme right-winger tom Robinson's supporters had adopted that song.

Leah's Tweedle Dum and Twee Dee dealt with the 'politics' of marriage; her In My Search had us descended from machines, and If You Can’t Give Me Love, give me chocolate instead. This reviewer read When You Pick at a Scab Does it Bleed? about the contradictions inherent in Brexit and Trumpism.

A moving and exciting evening was topped off with the raffle for a meal for two at the Nags Head in Chichester and a feeling that our musical, political, poetic and comic appetites had been well fed.

Addendum: We apologise there wasn’t more time for open mikers but as it turned out, the timing worked out well as there were few who wanted to perform, however we will provide more time in our future events. Also, although we’d raised the price for the evening, it will go back to the original £6 entry fee.

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lisa donohoe

Mon 21st Jan 2019 15:20

Beautiful ?

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Big Sal

Mon 21st Jan 2019 15:01

It's been nearly a year since I commented directly on your profile, so here's to another year of your work gracing the waves, and good luck on all your endeavors for 2019.

Best wishes, Laura.??

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Big Sal

Mon 21st Jan 2019 14:58

Great rhythm.?

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Jason Bayliss

Mon 21st Jan 2019 14:18

Thanks Lisa, it's really appreciated.?

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Don Matthews

Mon 21st Jan 2019 12:29

Obituaries sounds pretty good dk
People pay lots of dosh for their dead'ns
Make sure that they pay in euros and cents though
You'll make more than invites for weddin's ?

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d.knape

Mon 21st Jan 2019 11:44

Love hides within our families
its whereabouts might surprise us,
when we find love, don't let it go
the prize is loving kindness.

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d.knape

Mon 21st Jan 2019 11:32

At least you passed
Puberty!

wink.

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Big Sal

Mon 21st Jan 2019 11:19

You too.

And feel free to come and join us when you run out of ammo there Rambo.

There's always room for people with a passion for rhyming and helping in small ways.?

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Big Sal

Mon 21st Jan 2019 10:54

Ah, Rumi, what a perfect inspirational poet to draw from, Ruby.

Your work is always excellent.

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Don Matthews

Mon 21st Jan 2019 10:52

I'm pleased you have made contact
Absorbed what I did say
What more is there to say BS ?
But have a pleasant day ?

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Don Matthews

Mon 21st Jan 2019 10:46

I like this doubt-rhyme you have writ
It flows like a river, and then
It hits some giant rapids and ripped up
After rapids starts over again ?

Hmm...

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Big Sal

Mon 21st Jan 2019 10:46

I thought you HATED snipers, Don?????????????????????????????????????


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Shuchi Batra

Mon 21st Jan 2019 09:53

Hi Jon,

Amazing poems ?

Love
Shuchi

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Laura Taylor

Mon 21st Jan 2019 09:42

Haven't submitted anything to anywhere in a very long time, so quite chuffed to make it to the shortlist ?

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Don Matthews

Mon 21st Jan 2019 09:40

Po

I like to be treated real friendly
I like to be treated real kind
But when someone gets on my wrong side
Take cover when I really unwind

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Shuchi Batra

Mon 21st Jan 2019 06:27

Thanks Ghazala Lari

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Bindu Trigunayak

Mon 21st Jan 2019 06:08

Thanks for your like dear Big Sal...Its my pleasure and great honour to have your appreciation?

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Bindu Trigunayak

Mon 21st Jan 2019 06:07

Thanks for your like Avishek Ghosh?

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Bindu Trigunayak

Mon 21st Jan 2019 06:06

@Ghazala Lari.. Thanks a lot ...for your appreciation mam..
yeah its true i started writing when i became mother..My daughter has made this world beautiful for me...her presence in my life is a true inspiration..
It is also true that after reading your poems, i got very much inspired that i started writing everything which touched my heart, soul and mind..
thanks for ur like?

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lisa donohoe

Sun 20th Jan 2019 22:36

(hahahaha)

The poetical comedian ?

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lisa donohoe

Sun 20th Jan 2019 21:49

Laughter is the solution to any problem my friend..
It may not pay your bills or fix your car " but to cry laughing is so much better then shedding a tear in pain....
I am forever the person cracking joke's especially in the more" serious moments of life...
?

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Big Sal

Sun 20th Jan 2019 21:25

I never got A's, I passed with C's and D's.

Graduation was the happiest day of my life until my kids were born. In fact, I'd probably still rank it as All-Time #3 or #4.

Gotta do what you gotta do.???

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Big Sal

Sun 20th Jan 2019 21:23

I always find it interesting how you could imbue something so simple with much complex characterizations and meaning.

Great 'fit' by the way.?

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Big Sal

Sun 20th Jan 2019 21:21

Unique style.?

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Big Sal

Sun 20th Jan 2019 21:12

That's some funny stuff, David.

?

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Big Sal

Sun 20th Jan 2019 21:10

Is it like having two evils and choosing them both?

Quite a knack for humor (or humour as the UK spelling adheres) you have.

I bet you'd do a great book of pure nursery rhymes for kids. Like illustrations not even needed outside of your covers.

The words would paint themselves.?

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lisa donohoe

Sun 20th Jan 2019 21:01

Not my words..... but way to funny, I just had to share hahahahah

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Michaela Ridgway

Sun 20th Jan 2019 19:38

PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS INFORMATION IS NOT CORRECT.

THE NEXT PIGHOG NIGHT IS THE LAST THURSDAY OF FEBRUARY

(I'm trying to work out how to amend this calendar)

Michaela (Pighog organiser and host)

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Dragan Bozilov

Sun 20th Jan 2019 18:13

Thank you Lisa!

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lisa donohoe

Sun 20th Jan 2019 17:55

NEVER EVER
Doubt your self..
The author of lord of the rings was rejected over 100 times...
It did not mean his work was unworthy..
Always believe in ones self my friend ?x

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lisa donohoe

Sun 20th Jan 2019 17:36

This poem was so well done
I read it twice..
Great job ?x

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lisa donohoe

Sun 20th Jan 2019 17:34

That we have martin ?

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lisa donohoe

Sun 20th Jan 2019 17:34

Haha dave...
How did you know ?
And thank you ?

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Big Sal

Sun 20th Jan 2019 17:09

I love that last stanza.?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 20th Jan 2019 17:07

Thanks Big Sal. If I try to box it in, it silences the poet within. I have learned to just let the words flow and see where they go! ?

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Big Sal

Sun 20th Jan 2019 16:57

I like your free flowing style. It fits nicely with all the topics you attack with that poetic diction.?

Well done.?

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Reggie

Sun 20th Jan 2019 16:55

Only advice.

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Dave Caplan

Sun 20th Jan 2019 16:52

Let me guess....the big knickers is where you keep your tastiest snack?

Keep it up.....no, not the knickers.....the poetry !

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 20th Jan 2019 16:32

Thanks for the warm welcome Po and for the opportunity to dive right in!

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sun 20th Jan 2019 16:30

Thanks Big Sal. I have been giving it some thought. Getting braver by the day. I am looking forward to my journey here with WOL and the Temple. Amazing what happens when we follow our bliss!

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Dave Caplan

Sun 20th Jan 2019 15:29

Great poem DK
The child in us never dies
If only we knew then that our parents would have loved us regardless !

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 20th Jan 2019 15:28

Gents - thanks for the comments. KJ...also for the apt reminder of
that penisland solecism. Spot on! Well, you have to laugh, don't
you?

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Martin Elder

Sun 20th Jan 2019 15:23

This is a brutally honest piece that has been well crafted. Thank you for posting something which must be very difficult to even think about ley alone share with the outside world. I read your sample poem which also has a great deal of beauty. I look forward to more of your work
Nice one

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 20th Jan 2019 15:23

As a fan of Tom Lehrer ("Poisoning pigeons in the park" etc etc.),
I enjoyed this - thanks! I also liked your "Check out how far up it goes" addition in the "Comments" section.
To be sure, laughter is the soul-mate of sadness. Both have their
place in life - each to its time.

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Martin Elder

Sun 20th Jan 2019 15:18

I hope this is purely metaphorical . Nicely put Damon

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Martin Elder

Sun 20th Jan 2019 15:16

Well said Hazel , you and me both

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Martin Elder

Sun 20th Jan 2019 15:14

Wondering whether this is a picture of you Tommy standing indomitable against the world and all it brings. Love the poem mate

Nice one

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 20th Jan 2019 15:14

Clearly, a heartfelt personal tribute that will resonate with anyone
who has faced the same in life.
Silent prayer or voices raised
All will share when the loved are praised.
Whether dry or tear-filled eye,
All are raised to say goodbye
And bid the soul away on high.
………………………………………………....

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 20th Jan 2019 15:06

Don -
You may be living down under
But you rarely raise a frown;
And it's a source of welcome wonder
That you're under but seldom down! ?

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