<Deleted User> (18980)
Thu 28th Feb 2019 20:41
For me it was Warners on the Isle of Sheppey, and glutton for punishment we went two years on the run, me and three mates.
Comment is about Butlins Filey 1960 something. (blog)
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steven arthur
Thu 28th Feb 2019 20:36
you're one for an age, Jason.
Comment is about Jason Bayliss (poet profile)
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steven arthur
Thu 28th Feb 2019 20:35
you're a great writer, Jon, never stop.
Comment is about Jon Stainsby (poet profile)
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Such beautiful imagery and brought a smile to my face! You had me reminiscing about being little and playing in the snow and how great that feeling is! Keep up the great work Desmond!
Comment is about child like (blog)
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Dearest Creative Poetess .. so happy reading my words .. honestly I suffered much of those colors of lies .. for a while i lost my temper. that is the main reason of writing this lines. Thank you so much.
Comment is about God's Question (blog)
Original item by Farag M. Afify
True enough it is a difficult one to chart, but we'll worth it ?
Great poem.
J.
Comment is about A triolet (blog)
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Thanks, "Heart." It's only in places like this that I ever feel truly re!axed.☺
J. x
Comment is about Absorbing The Day (blog)
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Very peaceful. There is a softness, a pause, an escape. Good accompanying picture. I should like to escape there. Words can take us just as far away.
Comment is about Absorbing The Day (blog)
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Brilliant John! Love the line about O2 spark and fuel ?
J. x
Comment is about Dying Art (blog)
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Love that Pip. Comprehensive yet succinct. Brilliant.
Comment is about Every second counts (blog)
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Beautifully put my friend, oh so beautifully put ?
J. x
Comment is about New lease of life (blog)
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Thu 28th Feb 2019 17:37
On a related theme, no-one ever admits they are eccentric. It is others who label them.
Comment is about Abnormal Behavior (blog)
Original item by d.knape
A Book with a History
Alive it speaks
lifting featherweight pages
shaded storybook trees
honey comb trail
secret forest path
young girl follows
whispering musical wind
peaceful harmony everywhere
curiosity stirs laughter
friendly sincere bear
together enjoying adventures
inside children's dreams
plant pot flowers
sunlight colours bloom
window stays open.
Comment is about A Book with a History.jpg (photo)
Original item by Stockport WoL
These lines bring to mind the YouTube video of a US (?) rat snake
stalking a faun while a large farm cat stalks the snake which eventually departs the scene. Any snake that takes on a cat is
risking injury via very sharp little teeth and claws...hard to swallow,
I'd have thought.
Comment is about Australian Humour (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
Being out of order can be referred to as "situation normal"! ? Remember SNAFU?
Comment is about Abnormal Behavior (blog)
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Thanks Stu for reading - yes it's hard to beat that I know!
Glad you got that feeling Heart of Lead, My mind was roaming !
Thanks Cynthia; just a play on the words at the end, glad you liked it.
Hi David, cheers for that. Welcome to our world. The Clive James is wonderful.
Welcome Mae. I must admit I was happy with that line. !
Trevor, welcome. Sorry to sound indulgent, but there's a form of music called a tone poem; this is one like that. Glad you liked it!
In addition, many thanks for the likes: Frances, Rich, Jon, Anya and Dorothy.
Ray
Comment is about SURROUNDED (blog)
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Thanks for this antidote John. If only we could connect the kids to the beauty of the spoken magic there might be a chance for the future.
Ray
Comment is about Dying Art (blog)
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Congratulations! Welcome back. Keith
Comment is about Abnormal Behavior (blog)
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I like this poem as I can relate to it. Thanks. Keith
Comment is about Abnormal Behavior (blog)
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Thu 28th Feb 2019 13:02
<Deleted User> (21487)
Thu 28th Feb 2019 10:01
" are you talking to me or chewing a brick"
priceless
Comment is about Dying Art (blog)
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<Deleted User> (19913)
Thu 28th Feb 2019 08:55
Well as a fellow Aussie I'm biased here Don. Thanks for this ode to Aussie humour (and larrikins).
Comment is about Australian Humour (blog)
Original item by Don Matthews
<Deleted User> (19913)
Thu 28th Feb 2019 08:50
Ha Ha Don, keep em coming, Fook is how Northern English folk pronounce the F word as opposed to the Ozzy Fark ?
Comment is about Dying Art (blog)
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Cynthia, you are right. Poetic license ?
Changed it.
Comment is about Cause and effect (blog)
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Thank you for sharing this piece! I found myself really relating to this piece as sometimes I get lost in a person where I tend to forget that all good things must come to an end. Thank you again.
Comment is about Losing you in hues... (blog)
Original item by Jay Garcia
John, who need vocals to communicate?
You can tap tap it out on the screen
See? your poem's not vocalled on audio
It's just tap tapped out like the teens
You've made a strong argument for talking
Which I fully support you all way (so don't get upset...)
You're faecal emoji is priceless
But does FOOK stand for 'fuck off ok'?
If so I will tell all my tech friends
By tapping it out on their screens
No need to ring up and say 'hey guys'
I wanna keep phone data mean ?
Comment is about Dying Art (blog)
Original item by John McDonough
This piece gives me hope. something small can always turn into something quite beautiful!
Comment is about Cause and effect (blog)
Original item by Jon Stainsby
I connected with your sample and am looking forward to future blog posts.
Comment is about Rina Middleton (poet profile)
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Frances Macaulay Forde
Thu 28th Feb 2019 04:57
I grew up in Africa, Cynthia where the rainy season arrives with a vengeance. The thunder comes first, so we'd count to see how many miles away the lightening would strike.
One day we were playing in the park and a huge storm was suddenly upon us - no time to dash home. We were always told never to shelter under a tree, so we tried to take cover beside an anthill.
Very frightened because we only got to 1 or 2 when the thunder finished, we watched as a man with an umbrella ran to shelter under a tree just as it was split in half by lightening and exploded into flames!
NOTE: Apparently I am wrong! In our storms, there was never just one bolt of lightening... However, I was obviously confused. The visual memory is absolutely clear though.
Comment is about Cause and effect (blog)
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So many great lines in this poem. It's really good.?
J.
Comment is about Pyromaniacs on the event horizon (blog)
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Big lies ' tiny white lies , any form of lying is deceitful.
This is a realistic poem which speaks so much volume about the essential need to be honest no matter what!
Lying to save anothers feelings is also wrong, for the truth will always rise to the surface.
Great job my friend ?
Comment is about God's Question (blog)
Original item by Farag M. Afify
Sometimes just living is the hardest thing without extra obstacles Phil. I've been fortunate but your work speaks for itself.
Comment is about When the bough breaks (blog)
Original item by mentalelf. Philk.
Phil,
A good and thought provoking poem. Thank you for this
Keith
Comment is about When the bough breaks (blog)
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Thank you Trevor, Kate and Mae for stopping by and for your encouragement. Best wishes - John
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I was there in your room whilst reading this - enjoyed it very much.
[Pleased you enjoyed my POTW].
Comment is about SURROUNDED (blog)
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Very much liked. Splendid.
Question though. Doesn't the thunder follow the lightening? Just curious. I may well be totally wrong.
Comment is about Cause and effect (blog)
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Just plain fabulous, in both thought and presentation.
Comment is about To a Younger Self (blog)
Original item by Rich
Splendid words on such a universal theme. Superb last line.
Comment is about SURROUNDED (blog)
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You make words 'sing' and thus, the ideas themselves. Glad you're booked for Sale in June.
Comment is about Azeotropic distillation (blog)
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Hi Cynthia, how are you my old friend? And when I'm writing a lot it usually means things have gone to crap lol
Comment is about Makemake (blog)
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Kealan, it is wonderful to see you back with your keen ideas and unfailing deft touch. I hope all is well with you.
Comment is about Makemake (blog)
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cheers all! nice to be back posting a few things now the sites settled back down to its beautiful, swan-like self
Comment is about Azeotropic distillation (blog)
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Take comfort in the knowledge I'm grateful to look upon
Lines that speak in humorous tones and tell myself: it's Don ! ?
Comment is about Crap (blog)
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I am not of the practising Christian church-led faith but I support
the humane aspects of its teachings, which, if following Christ's
own, should be about promoting love - in all its aspects. Sadly, the
established Church has let power and influence diminish this vital
component and relegate it to the sidelines of its own defined limits
of religious acceptance. It is small wonder that there is such public
disquiet among followers of the established religious foundations
when their leaders are being increasingly seen to be guilty of the
"sins" they condemn in others whilst at the same time they pose as the servants of Christ.. Hypocrisy and holier-than-thou humbug!
I can readily understand the anger that sees these lines brought to our attention.
Comment is about The Lambeth Judgement (blog)
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Anya My Polish friends call me Jacziek ... I think?
Comment is about Georgie Pell Puddin' and Pie (blog)
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Lisa C Bassignani
Thu 28th Feb 2019 21:11
Being "Normal" is highly overrated.
Comment is about Abnormal Behavior (blog)
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