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Becky Who

Tue 17th Jul 2018 05:20

Thank you for all the comments. Brian, for me the part about the kids comes from the experience of seeing the local football coach literally swear at the kids on the pitch at our local gym. Our son is begging to join the football club, and his father is refusing categorically because he doesn't want him to enter that world. It's sad really. Maybe it's a local phenomenon - maybe the teams in England are much more respectful, I don't know.

The other part is inspired the campaign by the National Center for Domestic Violence during the World Cup. Not sure I have the right to repost the picture, it was circulating on Facebook a few days ago.

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Sofia Urquiza

Tue 17th Jul 2018 05:09

Raw and beautiful ❤

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Don Matthews

Tue 17th Jul 2018 03:32

I don't like people who hide behind masks, won't identify themselves then proceed to direct incorrect and vindictive remarks at me in public. I refuse to be treated in this way. Sorry

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Don Matthews

Tue 17th Jul 2018 02:51

WELCOME TO THE COLOSSEUM OF POETS

Today's contest is between the masked he/she Joyti and LAB (Little Aussie Battler) Joyti has made a special effort to come down from it's cave for today's contest. Joyti's weapon is it's forked tongue

LAB's weapon is a rhyming net, very successfully used by LAB on many occasions.

LAB's cry-call is 'Never mess with a rhymer' so it will be an interesting contest.

Seats can be booked at the Box Office. All seating stone, sorry.😎

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Danny G.

Tue 17th Jul 2018 00:39

Thanks Keith, always love your feedback! It’s appreciated! Danny

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raypool

Mon 16th Jul 2018 23:47

Intriguing Col. Traditionally a place of suicides; but you have signalled an imaginary situation and overlaid it with sparse detail which is rather unnerving and effective. You have the blueprint ; where do the pier and the ice creams come in though!

Ray

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Anya

Mon 16th Jul 2018 23:39

Thank you so much Big Sal!!!

Thank you Damon!!!

😘😘

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racha chafik

Mon 16th Jul 2018 22:59

i think i would love anything written by you

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racha chafik

Mon 16th Jul 2018 22:19

yeah when you are not accepted as who you are you are bound to get conversations like that , thats all they can talk about they can't get over things

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keith jeffries

Mon 16th Jul 2018 22:17

Racha,
I have often experienced what you describe in this poem. Beautifully written.
Thank you
Keith

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racha chafik

Mon 16th Jul 2018 22:14

thank you matt

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keith jeffries

Mon 16th Jul 2018 22:13

Danny,
you have excelled yourself with this poem. It needs to be read several times in order to absorb what you have written. The last line really clinches it.
Thank you for this
Keith

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Matt Tyldesley

Mon 16th Jul 2018 22:13

Beautiful

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racha chafik

Mon 16th Jul 2018 22:10

i really love ur comments keith

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kJ Walker

Mon 16th Jul 2018 22:09

Congratulations on being POW. I always enjoy all your work, so was glad to see you being granted this accolade.


Cheers Kevin

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keith jeffries

Mon 16th Jul 2018 22:09

A poem of real profundity. I am becoming a fan.
Thank you
Keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 16th Jul 2018 22:06

Colin, this held me in some suspense but after reading it again my mind began to work out certain scenarios. An intriguing piece of work.
Thank you
Keith

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racha chafik

Mon 16th Jul 2018 21:45

i love it its amazing

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racha chafik

Mon 16th Jul 2018 21:39

thanks collin

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Pat Hughes

Mon 16th Jul 2018 21:35

Wow Colin,I love this,there is a quiet grace to this.

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uncover

Mon 16th Jul 2018 21:08

Lovely pattern...graceful to the end.💗

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John Marks

Mon 16th Jul 2018 21:07

Thank you, Jane, and welcome. 4 dogs! Blimey, that takes some doing. I like that you allow your poems to be lead by the music of language - rhyme not reason. There are a myrid of outlets for prose, very few for poems. I've been publishing and reading on WOL for eight years but have never come across anything but help and good advice from our fellow contributors. Zen deserves a wider audience:

Zen

Is there reason to my rhyme
Will my words carry on in time
Might I write until I die
Continue never knowing why
Written with the ink of pen
Words become my solemn Zen.

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Hannah Collins

Mon 16th Jul 2018 21:00

Football, a beautiful and emotion making game.
Enjoyed reading this.

Hannah

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Hannah Collins

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:58

Love this poem.
I noticed today the tree outside my window has already got a few Autumn golden leaves.
We need rain.

Hannah

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Colin Hill

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:57

thank you Anya and Hannah x

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Hannah Collins

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:53

Amazing writing.
Powerful, tragic, thought provoking.

Hannah

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Hannah Collins

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:51

Well done Ray.
I loved this poem first time I read it.
So well deserved to be POTW.

Hannah

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Colin Hill

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:47

lovely poem Racha. Thanks for sharing. Colin.

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Hannah Collins

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:46

Inspirational. One from the heart.
Life's still life,
Seeds of hope.

Hannah

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Colin Hill

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:45

captivating Chris and demanding of several reads. Thanks, Col.

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Anya

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:44

Strong emotions... beautiful, sad.
Thank you for sharing.
Anya x

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Hannah Collins

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:44

This is fantastic, a great poem.
I love the idea of this lady.
Would like a speaking fridge too.

Hannah

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:44

Hi Becky, as Brian says it resonates.
Good poem.
Tommy

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Hannah Collins

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:40

Thank you for your comment Mike and for the link to your poem.

Hannah

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racha chafik

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:34

thnks shalom

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racha chafik

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:34

thank you so much shalom i think that really

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Shalom Jordans

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:29

woaaaaawwww amazing stuff lily xx

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Shalom Jordans

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:27

amazing thank you for sharing

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Shalom Jordans

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:25

hi racha thank you very much for an inspiring poem finding ourselves is key

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mike booth

Mon 16th Jul 2018 18:25

Great poem hannah. I love the gentle way you capture her quirks and show such warmth. Love "She is of the mustn't grumble generation / She's seen it all and stays quiet. " there really is a mustn't grumble generation who are struggling with the quirks of the modern world. I just posted Hi Tech Granny on a similar theme....

https://www.writeoutloud.net/public/blogentry.php?blogentryid=79663

thanks for this, Hannah! the simple statement of complex feelings, as Auden would say....
M x

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Martin Elder

Mon 16th Jul 2018 17:40

This is beautiful not only in your choice of words and phrasing but the simplicity of using just a few words to express what you want to say and touch others. Fabulous Ray.
Many hearty congratulations

Martin

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Brian Maryon

Mon 16th Jul 2018 17:28

Ray - I rarely get compliments from my wife, if ever, so the parrot option is looking increasingly attractive.

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Brian Maryon

Mon 16th Jul 2018 17:17

That is a fantastic poem Becky. The kids football scenarios resonate particularly with me as I ran a boys team about 20 years ago. I didn't scream at the kids but I had my work cut out stopping the parents doing so, coaching from the touchlines etc. And yes we had parents fighting with those from another team. I fell out with half of our parents.

My love of football was lost shortly after mostly due to the antics of professional footballers. I'm a rugby man now...much more civilised. And tennis.

Wel done Becky.

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Steven Waling

Mon 16th Jul 2018 16:43

It's always the time of the white middle-class male. It's only in the last decade or so that anthologies of contemporary poetry have been roughly equal male & female. Black poets were notable more by absence than presence. LGBT were either absent or in the closet.

And I'm sorry you're such a snowflake you can't reality in poetry.

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 16th Jul 2018 16:37

Thank you, Ray and Keith.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 16th Jul 2018 16:37

Oh! Steven, I don't think I've said any of the subjects mentioned shouldn't be written about, have I? Whether or not I'm fed up with reading them is my choice.

Anyway concerning trends, perhaps it's the turn of the white, middle-class male again, everybody else seems to have already had a good go. What then?

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Don Matthews

Mon 16th Jul 2018 16:30

Ray

I write what and how I want to. I hold my keys. If others want to follow me and like my style fine. If not. Still fine. Each to his own.

Don

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Danny G.

Mon 16th Jul 2018 16:26

Thanks Jane for taking the time to read my poem and commenting on it! I appreciate it! Danny

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Danny G.

Mon 16th Jul 2018 16:24

Thanks Racha for taking the time to read my poem and commenting on it! I appreciate it! Danny

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Jane Briganti

Mon 16th Jul 2018 16:19

Very nice. Your perspective is right on.

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