I feel distant from hope
like a soul that is separated
like an empty space
there is only me and uncertain thoughts
waiting for the end of the day
but wishing that there was no tomorrow
as if all my dreams are hard to achieve
and slowly my ambition fades
I feel like I see someone else inside me
I don't recognize her
little things feel new to me
and death becomes something that is no longer scary
Fri 4th Jul 2025 03:55
Thankyou for the feedback, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. But even death is no longer scary, I'm still have a little faith, even so many times I feel to end up this life. But, even the little can make someone stand strong. And I bealive, we all can do it
Enjoyed the read, I've felt the same. Certainly death is no longer scary, but I guess that's just old age.
waiting for the end of the day
but wishing that there was no tomorrow
simple but effective
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Chloe To
Sat 20th Sep 2025 18:02
short but brings out true feelings of the writer, helping the reader to resonate with the story of the poem. I love it.