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M.C. Newberry

Mon 13th Apr 2020 17:38

The message is eternal. Enjoy what you have and rejoice if it
gets better! We have no choice in being here so let's just get
on with it as best we can, according to our own situation and ability
in coping with what is tossed our way, hopefully helping other lives
in the process.

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raypool

Mon 13th Apr 2020 17:31

An excellent and eloquent piece full of lyrical nostalgia befitting of the brand. The branch in Ken. High Street was a magnet for my girlfriend who had expensive tastes. Very impressive array, and I remember especially the black plastic presentation trays of makeup.

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 13th Apr 2020 17:19

Words with sense and a moral lesson. Memories can enrich but also
enslave. They can bring happiness but they can also bring shame
and guilt. To be able to keep the balance is the secret to living this
life - in the knowledge that no one and nothing is ever perfect and
that we should learn and benefit from the lessons we are taught along the way.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 13th Apr 2020 17:12

We older folk have all been teenagers in our turn. The trick is to
remember how we saw the world and allow some leeway in
understanding the views and actions of our successors.
Never patronise yet always seek to be approachable. But, if needs must, hold the line against that step too far. It has been said that
the young need to have something to kick against. That being the case, they also need to know the discipline of something that says: This far, but no further - and here's why.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 13th Apr 2020 17:02

An imaginative essay into a world of eager trespass that results in
an unwelcome outcome - something of an allegorical reminder of
the wider world situation today.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 13th Apr 2020 16:56

Capitalism...communism - whatever!
What happened to the intelligence and diplomatic services -
supposed to serve our needs at colossal public expense? Where
were they when the infection emerged? Then came the oh-so-
slow reaction that exacerbated the threat - with the failure to
offer proper protection at the outset to those most likely to be
victims of a virus that attacks those with least ability to resist.
Too much too soon = overwhelmed !
It's not as though the world hasn't known this sort of thing before.
We are supposed to learn from the lessons of history so why have
our public servants failed so badly to keep up to speed now when,
in their much touted global world, ease of contact has never been
so widely available.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 13th Apr 2020 16:32

'Peel like clementines at Christmas ... her heart from baggage reclaim'. Strong lines, Maria.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 13th Apr 2020 16:31

Welcome, Maria! You have a name that some of us oldies on Write Out Loud recognise with great affection. Good to see you keeping up the family tradition. And good luck with your studies!

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Nigel Astell

Mon 13th Apr 2020 14:52

Thanks for your like on Easter Boxed In

N

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John Marks

Mon 13th Apr 2020 14:26

Thanks Jennifer. Your comment is much appreciated. I am, indeed, very trying in my advocacy of free will. Much against the present emphasis upon environmental influence as the cause of (excuse for) people's actions.

Stay safe!

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Emer Ni Chorra

Mon 13th Apr 2020 14:22

Thank you very much, Tom.

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John Marks

Mon 13th Apr 2020 14:14

Hi Cynthia. I hope you are coping OK with this lock down. Biba was a London fashion store of the 1960s and 1970s based in Kensington. It was considered to be a shop that sold 'cool' clothes. It closed in 1975. I lived in London during most of the time it was open. Oh and the form is a sonnet. You can see this on a largeish screen. On a phone, the lines are truncated so making more than 14.

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Mon 13th Apr 2020 14:14

Excellent writing, Dave. A review worth re-viewing.

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Tom

Mon 13th Apr 2020 13:45

Beautifully written Emer. I have known a few people to whom this could apply. A sad tale indeed.

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Tom

Mon 13th Apr 2020 13:42

Another gem. Especially the ending. ?

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Emer Ni Chorra

Mon 13th Apr 2020 11:51

Thanks for stopping by kJ and sharing your thoughts. Alcohol is often used as a coping mechanism but usually causes more damage.. it sounds like you know from personal experience. Be safe.

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jennifer Malden

Mon 13th Apr 2020 10:57

Unbearably awful! Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 13th Apr 2020 10:54

Wow! Really liked this - there isn't a superfluous word in it - beautifullly written and makes one reflect on it. Also liked the line - let us make the best of it, let us inject some zest in it - as it, which catches one's attention. Sylvia Plath will be remembered anyway, although such a short life.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Mon 13th Apr 2020 10:46

Hello John, thanks for the comment on 'Felliini in Florence' - glad you enjoyed it. It was so unexpected and unusual that I have never forgotten the scene!

Jennifer

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Don Matthews

Mon 13th Apr 2020 10:36

So good Mika.....

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kJ Walker

Mon 13th Apr 2020 10:16

I'm usually good at guessing the punchline, but you got me that time

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kJ Walker

Mon 13th Apr 2020 09:51

Thanks for posting this Emer. It really struck a chord with me, as it could so easily have been my own father you were describing.
People who drink to this extent do themselves immeasurable damage, but the real harm is to those around them.

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d.knape

Mon 13th Apr 2020 01:40

It's not Capitalism that is at fault,
it's the damn Chinese who withheld the truth
and for all we know actually let loose the virus
from their Bio lab.
As for Gates, he is a typical Globalist,
who will do anything to keep his Chinese market share.

Guess who holds the "patent" for CoronaVirus?

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-nesstheSuffix

Mon 13th Apr 2020 00:53

Thank you

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John Marks

Mon 13th Apr 2020 00:21

Yes. They will and for some it will be reason enough to renege on their vows. A pithy poem well told, Jennifer .

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Anna Freeman

Sun 12th Apr 2020 23:10

Thank goodness we have zoom! That is one of the silver linings in this pandemic.

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Anna Freeman

Sun 12th Apr 2020 23:08

What a beautiful love story! I loved reading this.

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Anna Freeman

Sun 12th Apr 2020 23:07

What a playful poem! Thanks for sharing!

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keith jeffries

Sun 12th Apr 2020 21:26

MC., Well said.
Thank you
Keith

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Philipos

Sun 12th Apr 2020 20:52

?

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Sofia Urquiza

Sun 12th Apr 2020 19:06

Beautiful!

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Sofia Urquiza

Sun 12th Apr 2020 19:00

No more writing Nick?

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Sofia Urquiza

Sun 12th Apr 2020 18:57

Wasn't able to read it, not too clear?

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Sofia Urquiza

Sun 12th Apr 2020 18:54

Beautifully written/thought out!

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 12th Apr 2020 16:53

Two words help keep the spirit afloat
When rescue seems at best remote:
Life and boat! ?

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 12th Apr 2020 16:43

Ha - this touched me! Uncomfortable, but how far off the truth as
things stand? I see Bill Gates is calling for "global" co-ordination
to combat this particular virus. The logic of what he refers to as the likelihood of returning infection is hard to refute but no mention of
using a majority of his vast wealth. I imagine there are others from
privileged financial positions who endorse his view - but let's wait for
financial input from their mega-riches (check the percentages of who has what in the world) to back up the fine words. They are the
arch-beneficiaries of capitalism so they are honour-bound to act to
preserve it. Isn't that logical too?

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keith jeffries

Sun 12th Apr 2020 16:04

Cynthia, Philipos, Ian and Branwell,

Thank you all for your kind comments which, as always, are much appreciated.

Keith

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 12th Apr 2020 13:39

WELL DONE!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 12th Apr 2020 13:33

This is very interesting.Challenging. Is it a particular 'form', or a combination? And what is BIBA?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 12th Apr 2020 13:25

Welcome to WOL. The 'ness'-ness of 'everything? OK. I buy it. But why would you never 'say' them? In spoken speech, I'm assuming.

Interesting photo.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 12th Apr 2020 13:20

Very interesting. Well conceived and well constructed to share. The two don't always meld.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 12th Apr 2020 13:00

Last night I was thinking of 'inspire'. The whole 'spire' chain is such a provoking concept to consider. And this is the case with so many 'developed', 'extended' word roots from ancient languages. I'm presuming I share this 'word fascination' with fellow writers. How could I not!

Which may be a bit naive.

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 12th Apr 2020 09:58

Yes, I think that's a bitter pill to swallow, once again, "We're all in it together." But this time, at least on one level, we genuinely are. A Pandemic doesn't care how much cash you have, how big your house is, or what car you drive, but it's how people act in these circumstances. It hasn't gone unsaid that we bailed the banks out 10 years ago and that some of that, "Love," needs repaying by them now, and people like Branson? Rich enough to look after his workers but instead lays them all off and tells them to apply for statutory sick pay. Well, while we're sat at home, not distracted by the day to day, we watch, we listen, we remember, and as far as I'm concerned he's got a nerve calling his company Virgin considering the amount of people it's f***ed.

J. x

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Philipos

Sun 12th Apr 2020 08:46

Don, thanks for the comment on Chip Shop Butties. ?

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John Marks

Sat 11th Apr 2020 23:52

The words tumble out then line up into meanings. I like your style. It reminds me of Kurdish and Farsi poetry. It is very difficult to write poetry in a language that is not your mother tongue - you have done so. Congratulations.

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Don Matthews

Sat 11th Apr 2020 16:45

Good to hear you again. Nice rhyming.....

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John Coopey

Sat 11th Apr 2020 15:29

Thanks for your kind comments, Brian and MC. and for the Like, Ian.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 11th Apr 2020 15:27

The irony is that it is money that enables the research and the response when these unwanted natural visitations occur in life.
Wasn't it Stalin who remarked that one death was a tragedy whilst a
thousand was a statistic? Nature knows no barriers in reducing
life where it is most vulnerable for whatever reason. What stays in
my own mind is that this current plague is being fought with public
money from the small man/business whilst the vast wealth of the
tiny percent seems untouched and able to grant its owners power
and influence as a result in this manipulated "global world"..

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 11th Apr 2020 15:18

For fork's sake - an allotment of positive planting in the process of
renewal. Well said, sir!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 11th Apr 2020 13:20

My mind is enjoying itself. But 'conversation' plays a huge part in real pleasure. If anyone cares to join in, please do so. There's no question of 'right' or 'wrong', or deliberated persuasion, just sharing thoughts.

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