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Tue 16th Jun 2020 10:39

This is funny
Your experience I guess
Or was it a joke
Of real kind?

Hilarious write!

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Greg Freeman

Tue 16th Jun 2020 08:50

Thanks for commenting, Brian. We could argue about so much about what you say, but I am grateful that you accept that the Brexit cause has been tainted by the thugs. I live among 'middle England' folk out here in Surrey, too.

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Tue 16th Jun 2020 08:40

Hi Greg. The Brexit cause is tainted by the ultra right thugs you refer to. The 17.4m had had enough of the so called elite telling them what was best for them so they reacted against it in 2016...and again three years later to give the Tories an 80 seat majority. They will continue to react against the elite if they are given the opportunity, and anti-Brexit articles, speeches, poems etc will only harden their attitudes.

In terms of recent events, the 'middle England' folk I live amongst are generally against racism but do not wish to see our history erased by removing statues and signage.

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Dr. Kishore R. Nikam

Tue 16th Jun 2020 08:32

Thanks, Manisha Saini, for a like!

Dr. Kishore

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Greg Freeman

Tue 16th Jun 2020 06:05

I should also say that there are quite a few familiar Write Out Loud names in this anthology ... Laura Taylor, Gordon Zola, Paul Waring, Ian Whiteley, to name but a few.

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Greg Freeman

Tue 16th Jun 2020 05:43

I first posted this here two years ago, when it caused some confusion. One or two people weren't sure if I was espousing the views expressed above. I'm posting it again while the events that took place on the streets of our capital and elsewhere in the country last Saturday are still fresh in our minds. To avoid any doubt, the poem is about the kind of people who brandish 'Britian First' (sic, and indeed, sick) banners, piss next to memorials of policemen, and exulted in the murder of MP Jo Cox shortly before the 2016 Brexit referendum. In retrospect, I think this poem is far too soft on them. NB I didn't realise when I posted this earlier, but today is the fourth anniversary of Jo Cox's death. Lest we forget.

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Dr. Kishore R. Nikam

Tue 16th Jun 2020 03:15

Thank you, Jennifer Malden, for hitting a like!

Dr. Kishore

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Tue 16th Jun 2020 01:43

Great poem Po. I hope you add it to your collection! ?

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Tue 16th Jun 2020 01:43

Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your beautiful feedback my poetic friends: Ruth, Liam, Po, Moon Girl. Peace and love to you all. ?

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Maatla Mog

Tue 16th Jun 2020 01:23

Thank you Po.

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jennifer Malden

Tue 16th Jun 2020 00:39

Brings back a long gone time when to go 'for a drive' was enjoyable, unlike now when it is more a means of getting from A to B. The smell of the leather seats was fantastic!!!! Great read Keith.
Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Tue 16th Jun 2020 00:33

Hope there is oxygen for you/him! Can recognise this kind of person, they are usually pretty tough because they have to be, but usually much better company than those who always obey the rules.
Liked this.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Tue 16th Jun 2020 00:29

All animals/men are equal, but some are more equal than others!
Perhaps legislation can help to move people up and down the ladder slightly anyway, but I think that real equality is impossible.
Agree with Brian.

Jennifer

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John Marks

Mon 15th Jun 2020 23:13

Footfalls echo in the memory
Down the passage which we did not take
Towards the door we never opened
Into the rose-garden. My words echo
Thus, in your mind.
But to what purpose
Disturbing the dust on a bowl of rose-leaves
I do not know. BURNT NORTON

Thank you Adam for your support. Eliot was, and is, right. Poetry is not cut up prose and doesn't enter our minds, hearts and souls by the same route prose takes.

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John Coopey

Mon 15th Jun 2020 21:43

You may be right, MC. But I think you would need to subscribe a particularly draconian genre of political correctness to steam roller over the lightness of tone intended. We’ll no doubt see!

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Red Button

Mon 15th Jun 2020 20:36

Poemagraphic, I am honoured by your response and greeting.

Thank you.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 15th Jun 2020 19:40

Thanks Brian - I stand by the thrust of my words in their widest meaning.
There is too much twaddle talked about equality - usually to suit a
purpose. But I'll add the following:
How to describe it...how to define?
And does your version agree with mine?
Can someone "legislate" so that I can come into the wealth or power necessary to realise my dreams? Or obtain good health? Or be
accepted as member of a club I aspire to? And so on and so forth.
Equality has so many undefinable aspects, it is utterly nebulous in
its widest sense, and, I submit, beyond any logical possibility to
set it down in law without partiality corrupting the endeavour. That leaves us with "opportunity".

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 15th Jun 2020 18:21

Jumpers for goalposts, wasn't it, isn't it?

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Mon 15th Jun 2020 18:18

I agree Mark, at least to some extent. Equality can be legislated for, but it must also be earned. It also takes a couple of generation for change to become the norm.

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julie callaghan

Mon 15th Jun 2020 17:54

Thanks for the comments and likes, my poem put to shame by the great comments.

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Andy N

Mon 15th Jun 2020 16:45

Thanks for the like, Itsjustmedownhere . I suspect my next poem after what I have seen will not be as nice (:

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Andy N

Mon 15th Jun 2020 16:44

Thanks for the comment, Nigel. Still feeling like we are living in a dream at the moment, must admit.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 15th Jun 2020 16:36

Ooer...isn't this one of those "isms" JC? Stand by for moderation ?
But I grinned in guilty pleasure anyway and award this with my "Les Dawson Trophy for Naughty Knockers".

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 15th Jun 2020 16:27

Droll imaginings which I find appealing.
Leading me to ask -
Should dandys have lions?
Or butter have cups?
Or the prim have roses
To waft past their noses?
(NOW look what you've done !!) ?

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 15th Jun 2020 16:18

Very soothing in these difficult days. I'm floating away in my own mind!

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 15th Jun 2020 16:16

dk -
I do hope your PC gets better
But just HOW did you send us this letter? ?

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Dr. Kishore R. Nikam

Mon 15th Jun 2020 16:05

Truest words, Po!
Such an event breaks the hearts of millions,
thanks, you prayed for us all!

Dr. Kishore

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 15th Jun 2020 15:40

BUT - MC - The Ultra Left were not marching in this country recently - and the Ultra Right were - you must ask yourself those questions and I'm sure you will have the answers - I support Socialism - certainly not Ultra-Left - and Socialists are pro-community, pro-an equal share, pro-equality and pro gender rights - and the 'right' are not - so that is where I will rest my case.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 15th Jun 2020 15:35

I do not seek argument, rather...discussion. And so far my questions
remain unanwered; not uncommon. But ultra-left or ultra-right,
they are both to be acknowledged and challenged in the "cold light
of day" - without fear or favour.
Pip-pip!.

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John Coopey

Mon 15th Jun 2020 14:37

And one of them has infinite mercy.

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<Deleted User> (24803)

Mon 15th Jun 2020 14:19

This is sad sorry. There are many homeless sharing the same story. Why can't government do something for them.

Well written!

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Ian Whiteley

Mon 15th Jun 2020 14:15

thanks to everyone for the 'likes' and comments
So few words
So many opinions ?
I appreciate it
Ian

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Isobel

Mon 15th Jun 2020 13:25

That's great Greg - I'll away to do some more editing then. I've shared this to FB as much as I can and regret not attending to it sooner now. I'm just delighted I've written something I can perform, regardless of whether it gets chosen!

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Tom

Mon 15th Jun 2020 12:57

? Loved this Julie. I love those little moments of bleary-eyed daydreaming.

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Dr. Kishore R. Nikam

Mon 15th Jun 2020 12:10

Thanks a lot, Po, for your inclusive interpretation, and a like!

The poem is written after an event of a budding Bollywood actor, Sushant Singh Rajput, ending up his life yesterday...

May his soul Rest in Peace!

Dr. Kishore

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John Coopey

Mon 15th Jun 2020 12:08

Our Gert doesn’t see the funny side of this, Po. So I’ve got two problems now - God and Our Gert.

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owen

Mon 15th Jun 2020 11:10

words hold all the power of the universe. loved this

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Greg Freeman

Mon 15th Jun 2020 10:20

Thanks very much for your query, Isobel. The answer is that we suggest a maximum of 15 words a line, although we will not disqualify a poem for having 40 long lines. If your poem is chosen for the anthology, we will consult with you about its final arrangement on the page. Hope that helps! Greg

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Mon 15th Jun 2020 05:04

Fortress of trust is where one belongs.
Friendship is a stronger relationship than any other.
Enemies can't harm you till you have God with you.
Relationship that you don't value, shouldn't pursue too.
Understanding develops amongst like minded people.
Misunderstandings are common between unlike people.
So whom you don't understand could be amongst the unlike ones.

Sorry to write my piece of mind poetry here.

Well written poem!

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Jon

Mon 15th Jun 2020 01:15

Hi Keith
Very moving. Love it
Jon

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Kashish Dawar

Mon 15th Jun 2020 00:51

Dedicated in the loving memory of SUSHANT SINGH RAJPUT. May you rest in peace now. We will miss you ssr.

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raypool

Sun 14th Jun 2020 22:14

Thanks Mark. I can see that the poem you quoted has all the hallmarks of the time - patriotism and fiery rhetoric - quasi religiose, and gives a clue to the prevailing view of Empire and glory. We can't really go back to those times now other than for nostalgic reasons, and there is blood in the writing. Through a veil of sheer suffering and sacrifice we still see the measure of the man though!

Ray

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Kashish Dawar

Sun 14th Jun 2020 22:05

thank you

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Kashish Dawar

Sun 14th Jun 2020 22:05

thank you so much means a lot.

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Sun 14th Jun 2020 22:05

Dearest remember our chat about the suffragettes, and my grandma being a suffrage, choose those colours purple, white and green xxx silk if possible that's what they chose. Susan Pankhurst hid her work, her paintings in friends houses, they are still being found xxxx

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Isobel

Sun 14th Jun 2020 22:02

I've just read the rules and it says no more than 40 standard lines, which is a bit of a blow as mine is far longer than that.

I tend to make my line breaks fit how I would perform the poem so the pauses mirror this. I suppose I could use punctuation and make the lines longer. Can you advise how long a standard line is?

Thanks

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Red Button

Sun 14th Jun 2020 21:47

Thank you M.C. Newberry and Moon.girl. Food for further thought.

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John Coopey

Sun 14th Jun 2020 20:37

I don't need the support of fascists in my opposition to mobs pulling down statues, thankyou. I distance myself from them.

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John Marks

Sun 14th Jun 2020 20:36

Thank you Cathy, Jennifer, Po, Mark, Tom and Abdul. I so much want to believe that HMG has managed this plague well, but I just don't.

“If we winter this one out, we can summer anywhere.” Seamus Heaney

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Greg Freeman

Sun 14th Jun 2020 20:10

I must have misunderstood, MC. Are you saying that yesterday's drunken racist thugs were not far-right - or at least, not far-right enough for you? And I hardly think quoting Alf Garnett does your arguments any favours, old boy.

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