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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 26th Oct 2019 20:17

I hope that's not my horoscope Ruth! November is tough. As a Capricorn I never did get on well with Scorpios.

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 26th Oct 2019 20:13

Indeed, it happens to me all the time

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jennifer Malden

Sat 26th Oct 2019 20:02

Beautiful - lovely to find someone who cares so much about family in this day and age. Wonderfully expressed without any mawkishness.
Jennifer

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 26th Oct 2019 19:49

I made a slight change.

Thanks to all.

Been out of it for a while, good to be back.

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jennifer Malden

Sat 26th Oct 2019 19:36

Really brings back Old London. Have you ever read The Maul and the Pear Tree by PD James? It's a report of a grisly murder at London Docks. I had a relation who lived up in Sutherland, and when a raven died at The Tower they used to find another and send it down to London! Cross me heart etc. etc. Great atmosphere.

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 26th Oct 2019 19:30

Liked this one Ray - agreed with GS about finding a rhyme for Clackmannan!

Jennifer

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jennifer Malden

Sat 26th Oct 2019 19:25

Really liked this - in death a dominance - had they sought to fly - how they have fallen.

Jennifer

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branwell kent

Sat 26th Oct 2019 18:44

great poem.

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afishamongmany

Sat 26th Oct 2019 18:11

Beautiful evoquative piece John and wow Roy Harper that name took me a long way back to my Birmingham days. Didn't realise that he had 'made it' and had a long career after those eary days.
Thanks
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John Marks

Sat 26th Oct 2019 18:03

Music, poetry, love, sex - how do we disentangle them? Do we need to?

"Music and silence, point and counterpoint; the rhythm and metre of sound brought to measure

Infuses speech, enlivens poetry."

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afishamongmany

Sat 26th Oct 2019 17:16

Hi Don - this elecro-magnetic communication comes to you from the outer reaches of my cosmic brain box. How did it get there? Ah, it was sent, it came and now it done gone went.

The theory of The Force fails of course for force is only horse power and too impersonal a rational to rely on, to fly on, thinking to escape the fate that awaits, thinking to solve the human situation.
All power, from horse to electro-magnetic, kinetic, frenetic, torque, talk, comes from A Person. The One who came as a son and got the job done. In Him we are made one and the angels do hum the song that saves, the poem of the brave that will run and run into and through the new age to come.
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kJ Walker

Sat 26th Oct 2019 16:47

Beautiful. If it wasn't for the title I wouldn't have known what it was about. ?

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Sat 26th Oct 2019 16:45

Isn'tlington elite!!!

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kJ Walker

Sat 26th Oct 2019 16:44

Sorry to tell you this Don, but you're still asleep. It's all a dream.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sat 26th Oct 2019 16:42

Lovely Lisa. ?

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Sat 26th Oct 2019 16:40

Enjoyed all the rhyming Ray, wonderfully contrived. A good time piece with no mention of Harry and Wills' spat, mental health issues, press intrusion etc.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 26th Oct 2019 16:12

Respect for getting Clackmannan into a verse! Watch out Pam Ayres!

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Don Matthews

Sat 26th Oct 2019 15:19

'No great mind ever existed without a touch of madness.' said Aristotle.

Perhaps I can add some of us are more madder than others?......

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Emilia Callahan

Sat 26th Oct 2019 15:03

I would agree with you - I think he was just very creative. Although, I'm a firm believer that all of us creatives are just a little mad, anyway.

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Emilia Callahan

Sat 26th Oct 2019 15:02

Thank you! Yes, I can see where you are coming from though. We do look at the same ocean ? Hawaii is very beautiful. Your friend is very lucky!

Comment is about Untitled (cold water) (blog)

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 26th Oct 2019 14:17

JC - I always enjoy the sparring and the good humour that still manages to prevail. Thanks for enlivening this precious often
precocious (and occasionally perplexing?) site.?

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Don Matthews

Sat 26th Oct 2019 13:04

She's rolling her eyes again.....

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Tom Doolan

Sat 26th Oct 2019 09:37

Hi Brian - What a barking good idea lol. T?

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Tom Doolan

Sat 26th Oct 2019 09:35

Hi Ian - Long time no hear. Hope you are well. I am still working at GA from time to time . T ?

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Allyzone Spoken Word

Sat 26th Oct 2019 07:02

Thank you for reading my work, Robert.

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Sat 26th Oct 2019 02:15

I love this poem so much John. I feel the same way about music. It indeed enlivens poetry. Your words create a sweet symphony. ?

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John Coopey

Sat 26th Oct 2019 00:18

Thanks, Don.

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Don Matthews

Fri 25th Oct 2019 23:59

Last comment/rhyme so clever Ruth.......

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 25th Oct 2019 23:51

Nigel really? Well we've had a lot of rain tonight so guess you were dancing starkers then.

Of every clothing item
A human
May be stripped
Lest we'll
Not be frightened
Of words we're
Still equipped

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 25th Oct 2019 23:46

I think you and Thalia is a fling that's going to stay secret only you and everyone else at WOL knows about it....she doesn't have some Hercules of a husband hiding does she?

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Don Matthews

Fri 25th Oct 2019 23:42

I've had a little fling
Spiritual that is
With my sweet Muse Thalia
They're bonding she and his

(Hello Thale, we got an admirer?.....)

Ruth, my star sign's Aquarius. Having a fling in November gonna give us future problems?

What's your star sign pet?

She's just rolling her eyes Ruth....

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Don Matthews

Fri 25th Oct 2019 23:17

Clever Ruth.....

Philipos - Thalia is keen on your fishing idea. They don't have lakes on Mt Olympus so it's all new to her. Just have to caution her about the byting electric eels....

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Don Matthews

Fri 25th Oct 2019 23:11

Interesting Emilia. I think there's more to this than meets the eye......

Some people think Lewis Carroll was high on drugs but I read he just had a highly imaginative mind.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 25th Oct 2019 22:59

Those electric eels byte at your reel!

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Philip Stevens

Fri 25th Oct 2019 22:53

Vautaw & Desmond thank you for the like

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Don Matthews

Fri 25th Oct 2019 22:38

Brian - I'm beginning to lean more to the prosaic side in my latter years of poetic journey and feel your last comment has a better poetic feel than your original. To me. A sorta recent Coopey-style feel......

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Don Matthews

Fri 25th Oct 2019 22:29

Sheesh there John, UK seems shot
Going down the gurgler, wot?
Stanzas, rhyme. you've done me proud
Now THIS is poetry on Write Out Loud

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John Coopey

Fri 25th Oct 2019 21:31

Winners are grinners, Brian.

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Fri 25th Oct 2019 21:25

At least you can still laugh John

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 25th Oct 2019 21:23

Hugh, your comment is better poetry than the original poem.

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Fred Nicholson

Fri 25th Oct 2019 20:49

I whole heartedly thank you Keith.

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Hugh

Fri 25th Oct 2019 20:26

The clocks go back on Sunday,an extra hour in bed.
But shorter days and colder nights,winter lies ahead!
Three yellow weather warnings have been issued by the met.
A 24 hour deluge of rain we are about to get.
Floods are expected due to leaf blocked drains,
A dark and dismal cloudy sky over the U.K. reigns.

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Philipos

Fri 25th Oct 2019 18:46

Thought fairies - so unpredictable - here one minute and scarpered the next. What's so irritating is when they don't come back at all having allowed something to chase them off. P. ?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 25th Oct 2019 16:31

Yes, I know. I really do rely on a high degree of tolerance among WOLers. I am grateful.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 25th Oct 2019 14:25

I'm thinking of changing my name to Brian Fido.

Comment is about A Dog Named Doolan (blog)

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Ian Parker

Fri 25th Oct 2019 13:48

A masterpiece Tom - you've captured the essence of Doolan beautifully.

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Emilia Callahan

Fri 25th Oct 2019 13:42

Thanks, Don and Ruth! Ruth, yes, there is a quote by one of my favorite poets (Rudy Francisco) that goes something along the lines of "I tell myself every hour can be happy hour as long as I'm on this side of the ground". Overall I know this isn't my best work (I've been struggling recently - I think it's because I try to write poetry only around 5 am or so, but that's ok, it's all a part of the process.

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John Coopey

Fri 25th Oct 2019 12:59

Part 2 after the commercial break.

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<Deleted User> (18980)

Fri 25th Oct 2019 12:59

It'll be automated by then Graham. And I'm old enough to know the CS &N track.

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d.knape

Fri 25th Oct 2019 12:10

Do not give in
keep a Stiff
upper lip.

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